Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
Ok this is terrible...
Red
Apple
Blood
Beating Heart
Bleeding roses
(February 28, 2019 - 11:49 am)
So, I wrote this er, thing. It ryhmes a little at first, but, um gradually stops because, of um, growing emotion????(<Bad excuse for not being able to ryhme).
Blind
One day I think I’ll see
I think I’ll try
To see the things that others do
The sky at day and night
The roses blooming red and fresh
The sunset
The fish in our tank
The dewdrops so wet
The grass blowing in the wind
Like the leaves on trees
The little mice
That scurry and hurry
The water
In the ocean
The holy water font
And the baby
The maple tree
Marshmallows that float in cocoa
Like clouds that float in heaven
The tears
That swell in your eyes
The rose
On your cheeks
Perhaps I already see
~
This thread needs to be topped! Wow all you guys have awesome poetry!
(February 28, 2019 - 12:13 pm)
Smol poetry dump!
I was feeling inspired recently, and I have some I would like to share. This first one is about a friend of mine that I admire.
I Wish I Could
i. You. You, standing three feet ahead of me, carmel hair brushing against your eyebrows. You, laughing lightly with a guy who hasnt given me a thought in 2 years. You, blue-green eyes shining, rapping a song I don't know. You, doing a silly accent for someone's entertainment. You, chatting easily with those you volenteered to help out.
You. Just you. In my head, in a million scattered memories.
ii. You said (when we were going to arm wrestle)
'you're the strongest girl I know, Eliza.'
(You won the arm wrestle)
You said (when I did something embarassing and I told you not to tell anyone)
'I won't'
(You never did tell anyone)
You said (when I admitted I was writing a novella and one of the characters was named after you)
'Dude, really? That's awesome!'
(You really did care)
iii. I see it in your eyes when they look up and find mine-
You think I'm cool
You- popular, athletic, likeable, kind-hearted, friendly, goofy you-
Think I- unpopular, strange, lazy, unknown me-
am cool. And you mean it.
And you make me believe it too.
iv. You're a good friend, no question about it.
the real question is-
why don't I hang out with you more?
This one was inspired by a poetic line a wrote using this website.
Giant Star
Great plumes of pink and red and orange
spitting up toward the blue of the dome over the Earth's head
arching above the setting sun like
strokes of paint; I sit and watch as
our giant star disappears, chasing the day that has gone by.
This one was random- I've neer experienced this before, so...
Shriveled Roses
i. You laid the world in the palms of my hands
I looked it over, cocked my head back at you, smiled sadly, said
'Sorry, but I'd prefer the stars'
Love is a dangerous game. And you only score so many times.
ii. You stuttered, eyes glaxed over with longing, 'your heart is mine'
I blinked, raised my eyebrows, pursed my lips, said
'Really, I doubt I'd like you take it'
Love is a difficult thing. And you cannot force me to have it.
iii. You pressed a piece of paper into my hand, a poem you spent far too long on
I read over each line, lowered the paper, looked at you, said
'Look, your words go to my brain, not my heart'
Love is a cliffnager. And it's left you dangling.
(February 28, 2019 - 6:08 pm)
The moth flies unnoticed
Under the bright midnight moon
And wonders what it did wrong
As the light of the moon
Is the reflection of the sun
The moth is a reflection of the butterfly
Its only fault
Its dying call
Were the wings it was given to fly on
The wings that set it free
Had it been created
With a rainbow for its freedom
It would not lurk in the dark
Longing perpetually for the light
~~
*Winces*
(March 2, 2019 - 12:39 am)
I seem to only be able to write depressing poems lately. Anyway, here’s something I just wrote. I think it’s at least okay.
———
cage-bound
i. she’s locked herself inside of these cages
cages
so many cages, all with different locks
she keeps on locking herself inside cages
she doesn’t know how to stop
ii. she’s built her own prisons out of
lies, fears, lies
she keeps drinking the lies
(so many lies)
that keep her inside these cages
she doesn’t know how to stop
iii. she doesn’t see them as cages, she thinks
they’re her fortress walls, her
shelter her armor her
one protection
iv. the doors were never locked and they’re
still wide open
but she’s stayed inside these cages so
long that she’s afraid to leave because
they’ve become her homes
she doesn’t remember freedom and
she doesn’t want it back
what would she do without the cages, she says,
for they’re what keep her together
she’d fall if it wasn’t for the cages, wouldn’t she?
fall, fall, shatter
for she’s forgotten how to fly
v. she draws boxes around herself
wherever she goes
just so she can stay inside them
can’t say this, can’t show that
don’t step over the lines
don’t, don’t
vi. rigid, rigid, icy
the bars on her cages
her exoskeleton, she says
it’s what keeps her upright
it’s what maintains the tension
for organisms can’t live without their exoskeletons
and their shells are what keep them safe
vii. she’s tied herself down with ropes
steel and iron shackles
duct tape even, cause she’s desperate
she sees them as lifelines, as
something to hold onto
she doesn’t dare to let go
viii. cages, cages, cages
she doesn’t know how to be free
maybe someday she’ll dare to step out of the cages
and then maybe she’ll remember how to fly
———
I’m going to explain the title a bit, now. When a bird stays in a cage for a long time, they become so used to the cage that they sometimes gain a fear of leaving the cage, and this is called being cage-bound. I once read a story about a man at a zoo (I think it was a zoo? I could be wrong) who tried to release these birds, but when he opened their cages, the birds just stood there. They wouldn’t come out. I think the man might have even taken them out of the cages and they went back inside, because they were so used to captivity that they didn’t remember how to be free anymore. This poem was kind of based on that idea.
(March 4, 2019 - 12:27 pm)
I like it! I love the repetition, it makes this sound really nice. Like the "fall, fall, shatter" bit.
(March 5, 2019 - 5:39 pm)
Thanks!
(March 5, 2019 - 7:39 pm)
I see my life lit up and golden,
My actions praised and my face upholden.
But suddenly I see
That it's just me
I try hard to convince myself
I'm not just on the shelf
That people love me and care
It's all just a lie.
In reality
It's just me.
~
Now read it bottom to top.
(March 4, 2019 - 4:30 pm)
This isn't meant to sound that pretty, or even poetic, but I wrote it last night and wanted to post it. I've been using poetry to work out things a lot recently--if I write about something that's upsetting me, sometimes it helps and I can at least write it out and then I feel a bit better.
---
i, i, i can't
(i put a hand on my face--forehead, nose bridge)
i have scars from tomorrow; tearing apart like
how fabric falls apart in your hands
what if i get up stupid early tomorrow to
do everything i meant to do today?
you're staying until seven o'clock?
did that glass just break? well, tomorrow
will be another day, i
can pretend i'm her and get through now, huh?
what if i can't before friday?
what will i do on friday? what'll i--oh.
oh gosh.
can't i just
rewind six hours and be happier or
something? i can't play video games now,
duh. but do i even have time to do
the other things?
(dark tepid water is closing over my head)
i didn't invite you here, i'm
sorry
sorry
sorry
(March 5, 2019 - 5:45 pm)
Oh wow. That’s actually really good, and it just hit me kinda hard, because I feel like I can relate a lot to it—especially the ‘i, i, i can’t’ and ‘what if i get up stupid early tomorrow to do/everything i meant to do today’. Also, I’ve been doing the same thing a lot lately—using poetry to work things out. It’s kind of a way for me to vent, to relieve some emotional pressure. It means basically all of my poetry is depressing now, though. :/
<tify> Testify?
(March 5, 2019 - 7:47 pm)
OPERATION: ENDGAME
~
I've used my resources,
I've fought the enemy down.
My blood, adrenaline sped, courses
Out of wounds by their weapons sown.
This is my battle cry
This is my dying wish
I
Just
Want
Them
SAFE
I don't care what it costs
I don't care if it hurts
I'll keep fighting while at my heart adversaries chafe.
This is my last stand
This is my bleeding soul
I
Will
Keep
Them
SAFE
I'll take the evil with me
If it's the last thing I do.
Even though I may not live, they will be saved.
THIS
IS
THE
END
GAME
~~
THIS FILLS YOU WITH DETERMINATION
Nihil says 'dyyy'. Yeah probably.
(March 6, 2019 - 11:19 pm)
(March 7, 2019 - 8:04 am)
Hazel says gemn. Yes, this thread really is a gem!
(March 7, 2019 - 10:38 am)
@Rogue, I don't wanna go...
(March 7, 2019 - 5:09 pm)
Heh. Nice. Do you think it's good though? I've been trying to get better.
(803!)
(March 7, 2019 - 8:42 pm)