Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
For one of Abi's prompts way before:
They say eyes are the windows to the soul.
I peer through your windows and see it bare, the lights out.
(February 19, 2019 - 5:16 pm)
So I made this yesterday. Yeah. If you get any of the metaphors and ever want to talk about anything, I'm here for you!
Will you dance to the
Rhythm of our thoughts and
Scream out your pain
Through red tears and
Stary dragons
And get lost
In the made up?
With the moon
The stars
And dragons that danced
Danced through her eyes
She said slowly
Slowly
Whispering
Trendles of mist in the
Cold summer’s air.
Sometimes…
Sometimes you must bleed
To feel alive.
And she raised her hands
Raised them to the sky
To the dragons of night that flew
Unnoticed and unfazed
Through her mind's eye.
And I smiled.
I smiled at the freedom
That flowered at her
Fingertips
And spread down her wrists
And down her thighs
To the ground
Where she lay.
So may I ask you,
One last time,
Will you dance to the
Rhythm of our thoughts and
Scream out your pain
Through red tears and
Stary dragons
And get lost
In the made up?
(February 19, 2019 - 7:25 pm)
That’s quite good...
(February 19, 2019 - 9:30 pm)
Claaws, that's... that's good. Really good. I like it an awful lot.
Kestrel, I just... it's beautiful. It's absolutely beautiful. I have nothing more to say than that, it's amazing and shows so much amazing feeling, and it probably applies to a lot, LOT of people (me included), so it means even more to me. I love it.
(February 19, 2019 - 9:37 pm)
claaws, as always, I am in awe of your writing. I absolutely love this.
Twirlgirl, thank you so much!
(February 20, 2019 - 12:02 pm)
Thanks so much guys! Kestrel, I also love your poem, and I think you should definitely submit it!
(February 20, 2019 - 8:28 pm)
(Leafpool explains this poem) We went to Portland's East End to see the supermoon last night! It's really cool there's this hill and a bit of a flat spot with a playground, and then it drops off and goes down to the water, where there's a parking lot and you can get to the beach. (Which is kind of not a beach for swimming.) Even though it was darn cold, my mom and little brothers and I stood up at the playground to see the moon rise! It was so amazing, you could just see the moon rising above the buildings on the horizon across the water. It was just this red sliver, and really you could visibly see it getting higher. And it looked so big! I wrote a poem about it in my head on the way home. Here it is.
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to see my city lit up gold--
dusty rose pink in the evening sky,
fading to lavender
the cold bites my cheeks, and
the moon rises above the buildings
in the east, across the water
a red moon, turning then to orange,
so big and bright i can see the dimples in
its pockmarked face, as it
ascends higher in
the heavens
(February 20, 2019 - 11:52 am)
I read about the bombing of Guernica for history, and I wrote a poem about it. I would normally copy/paste this, but I like how this one looks with the font, so here's a screenshot of the poem. (Sidenote: Hazel says cuff! A real word--so proud of her. ^^)
(February 24, 2019 - 12:31 pm)
*applauds vigorously*
(February 24, 2019 - 4:46 pm)
Ahhhhhhhhh Leafy this is so good!! Oh my goodness. I love it, but it’s also terribly sad. It’s very deep, too. I think the last stanza and the last line are my favorites.
(February 24, 2019 - 6:51 pm)
@ Leeli's reply
^
This
(February 28, 2019 - 11:52 am)
(Eep, it turned out a bit tiny.) Thank you both!
(February 25, 2019 - 10:49 am)
changeling/cages
they say i'm not/you're not/i'm not myself today
different/better/weird/better
and i, i just want to shake you/me off, you locked me/my choices away
i'd have to say, "hey, that wasn't me, i'm not your/anyone's friend-"
i can't, i can't, i can't, but that's the price i pay-
i throw you in a cage
and lock us all away
***
Hey yes Kris Dreemurr took my soul and I'm not getting it back any time soon
(February 25, 2019 - 1:33 am)
I really really love this. I can't explain what makes me love it so much, it just seems really powerful!
(March 13, 2019 - 8:17 pm)
Gasping
Unable
The breath does not come.
Grasping
My head
I will not succumb.
This fire that burns my soul
I fight to stay alive.
But then
Serene peace
I've won.
I'll be alright.
So for the first time in seven nights
I close my eyes
And sleep.
~~
I wrote this with the situation of a make-believe, critically ill person in mind, but as I wrote it I realized that it can apply to much more, like immense stress or crippling depression, maybe even anxiety. Who knows. It's up for interpretation.
(February 25, 2019 - 3:19 am)