Regular poetry thread

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Regular poetry thread

Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)

This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!

submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)

Mask, the broken shards lay around the face.

Face, serenely still,

But ever so slightly tense.

Sword, long and sharp.

Light, illuminating the sword,

As it lays in the folded hands.

Hands, the skin still a shade of pink.

Skin, only slightly warm to the touch,

Like the heart had stopped yet recently.

Heart, beating slowly and painfully.

Chains, wrapped around the victim,

Keeping it high off the ground.

A visitor.

An enemy?

They jump.

They strike.

Chains broken.

The victim falls to the ground.

Eyes open,

Glowing white.

Mask reforms.

Cracks still show.

Swords raise.

Dying heart against empty heart.

Fire lifts the victim's arm

(Not the victim's fire,

Someone else's) 

And brings it down on the visitor.

They jump back,

Then run forward to kill.

No fire.

Arm raises again anyway.

Arm falls.

Sword peirces the heart.

Tears run down the mask.

Again

Again

More tears

"Please release me..."

Torture for eons

Finally released

One

Last

Strike

...

A pained scream,

Then silence.

The victim falls,

Dead,

Broken,

Hollow at last,

To the ground.

Eyes go dark

As the glow spills out

Like water to the floor.

Free

Painless

Hollow 

~~

Inspired by the Hollow Knight in the game Hollow Knight by Team Cherry. 

submitted by Rogue Wildling
(March 8, 2019 - 7:45 pm)

I wrote this--

Admins, is this poem okay, or is the sixth line too romantic? I guess I could change it if you wanted me to....

 

Yes, please change or delete it. Thank you for asking.

Admin

submitted by Leafpool, age No, not a cat
(March 9, 2019 - 11:14 am)

Alright, is this better? If it's still too romantic I can just delete that line entirely.

 

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submitted by Leafpool, age No, not a cat
(March 10, 2019 - 12:03 pm)

Huh. Is that what having a crush is like? OOOH did you have someone in mind when you wrote this? Do tell! (You don't actually have to if you don't feel comfortable sharing)

submitted by Rogue Wildling
(March 10, 2019 - 5:26 pm)

I just wrote this, totally random. A cool line idea came into my head and I used it almost like a prompt to write this, so if anyone has critique for me, that'd be great. 

I. You said you loved sopranos

I really loved altos

We trained to be sopranos

 

II. You gazed at that glass

Your eyes narrowed

You opened your lips

Your voice sliced forward

Glass shattered

I stumbled along in your shard-strewn wake

Making glass tremble

But never quite fall apart

I rolled over

Looked you in the eye

Told you I'd make bigger things than glass break 

 

III. You didn't understand.

 

IV. I sat alone 

Taught myself to be an alto

I blended broken falsetto,

A hint of your heart

 

V. I entered it to auditions

I floated my way to the finals

I opened my glossed lips

And my heart's unplanned song of regret

It poured forth

Had

I

Me

Myself

Actually

Let

Jealousy

Overpower

Beautiful

Unstoppable

Burning

Friendship?

 

VI. I told you I'd break bigger things than glass.

I did.

That day, 

I broke

 

hearts. 

 

 

 

submitted by Twirlgirl, age 13, My Imaginary Dance Studio
(March 10, 2019 - 5:52 pm)

Whoa. This was really cool and I love the line "I told you I'd break bigger things than glass."

submitted by Applejaguar, Wisteria
(March 11, 2019 - 6:24 pm)

Whoa. This is really good, Twilgirl. 

Boo says hihi! Hi-hi, Boo! 

submitted by Soren Infinity, age 27 eons, BeaconTown
(March 11, 2019 - 8:33 pm)

I don't know

I don't 

I

...

I can't do it

I can't

I

...

That sounds right.

I've tried so hard

I've walked the gauntlet

Came out nearly dead.

But that's not my fault,

Now, isn't it?

I'm looking at you.

Yeah you.

Now it's my turn to say

GOOD

BYE

(Good riddence...)

I'll find myself again

And I'll pick up my broken peices

I'll start all over

WITHOUT YOUR TOXIC 'HELP'

I'm me.

I always have been.

But what you labeled my fault?

Nah, that was always your sin.

So now I'm walking away.

Starting from the beginning

OF MY OWN ADVENTURE

So thanks

For all the hardship

I'm sorry it had to end this way.

I really am.

But now I can finally be free

Maybe

...

Maybe so can you...? 

submitted by Rogue Wildling
(March 11, 2019 - 1:29 am)

@Rogue Wildling yes, I did write that poem about someone. Maybe that's what having a crush feels like to me (at least, having a year-and-a-half long crush on someone you've vaguely known for a really long time but never really talked to and you're fed up with it all).

submitted by Leafpool, age No, not a cat
(March 13, 2019 - 11:39 am)

@Leafpool huh. Noted.

submitted by Rogue Wildling
(March 13, 2019 - 4:46 pm)

Another poem for my closest friend.

C.M.D.

we lay there in the bed of peonies open-mouthed laughing and lookin up at the endless expanse of blue

in late september,

 

the sun sets sooner and i get to see the fiery waves that are your golden highlights catch the sun / you are real to me like a tree that has been struck by lightning / imperfect / striking / wonderful and / real / dear,

 

red christmas lights slung / across the tops of your bedroom / draw out the inner mind like nothing else / i could tell you anything / and you could do the same to me / i'd give you my brain beneath a microscope / and let you dissect its deepest parts / any day

submitted by Bluebird
(March 13, 2019 - 8:30 pm)

BLUEBIRD!!! *FLYING TACKLE HUG* Also, nice poem!

submitted by Rogue Wildling
(March 13, 2019 - 11:09 pm)

Hi there! and thanks!

submitted by Bluebird
(March 15, 2019 - 12:26 pm)

Benches are friends

To those with umbrellas

Who take rest in the pouring rain.

Gazing into a sunset

Is calm for some fellas

Who have nothing to lose and all to gain.

But colds will be caught

And eyes will be ruined.

This peace is fake.

~~

Nihil says puku. Aww, is my poem really that bad?

yess

Dang. I was really trying there.

Ohhh well. Youu can't wryt poem ssss. 

submitted by Rogue Wildling
(March 13, 2019 - 11:13 pm)

 

wanderer~

i am the

life of the party

fingerless gloves and sideways smiles

and  i am

a face that doesn't fit the name i've chosen for myself

i pull my hair in different  ways, but all i see is 

false 

and  when you like purple and pink and  fashion there is no way out

and i am

casual flirts with light words  and heavy meanings

i am alone but okay

i am

friends and laughter and sunshine

words scribbled in a journal at half-past midnight

and we're all lost, but that's okay

i wouldn't know what to do if i was

found 

submitted by Blue Moon, age 12, Here
(March 14, 2019 - 2:05 am)