Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
Mask, the broken shards lay around the face.
Face, serenely still,
But ever so slightly tense.
Sword, long and sharp.
Light, illuminating the sword,
As it lays in the folded hands.
Hands, the skin still a shade of pink.
Skin, only slightly warm to the touch,
Like the heart had stopped yet recently.
Heart, beating slowly and painfully.
Chains, wrapped around the victim,
Keeping it high off the ground.
A visitor.
An enemy?
They jump.
They strike.
Chains broken.
The victim falls to the ground.
Eyes open,
Glowing white.
Mask reforms.
Cracks still show.
Swords raise.
Dying heart against empty heart.
Fire lifts the victim's arm
(Not the victim's fire,
Someone else's)
And brings it down on the visitor.
They jump back,
Then run forward to kill.
No fire.
Arm raises again anyway.
Arm falls.
Sword peirces the heart.
Tears run down the mask.
Again
Again
More tears
"Please release me..."
Torture for eons
Finally released
One
Last
Strike
...
A pained scream,
Then silence.
The victim falls,
Dead,
Broken,
Hollow at last,
To the ground.
Eyes go dark
As the glow spills out
Like water to the floor.
Free
Painless
Hollow
~~
Inspired by the Hollow Knight in the game Hollow Knight by Team Cherry.
(March 8, 2019 - 7:45 pm)
I wrote this--
Admins, is this poem okay, or is the sixth line too romantic? I guess I could change it if you wanted me to....
Yes, please change or delete it. Thank you for asking.
Admin
(March 9, 2019 - 11:14 am)
Alright, is this better? If it's still too romantic I can just delete that line entirely.
(March 10, 2019 - 12:03 pm)
Huh. Is that what having a crush is like? OOOH did you have someone in mind when you wrote this? Do tell! (You don't actually have to if you don't feel comfortable sharing)
(March 10, 2019 - 5:26 pm)
I just wrote this, totally random. A cool line idea came into my head and I used it almost like a prompt to write this, so if anyone has critique for me, that'd be great.
I. You said you loved sopranos
I really loved altos
We trained to be sopranos
II. You gazed at that glass
Your eyes narrowed
You opened your lips
Your voice sliced forward
Glass shattered
I stumbled along in your shard-strewn wake
Making glass tremble
But never quite fall apart
I rolled over
Looked you in the eye
Told you I'd make bigger things than glass break
III. You didn't understand.
IV. I sat alone
Taught myself to be an alto
I blended broken falsetto,
A hint of your heart
V. I entered it to auditions
I floated my way to the finals
I opened my glossed lips
And my heart's unplanned song of regret
It poured forth
Had
I
Me
Myself
Actually
Let
Jealousy
Overpower
Beautiful
Unstoppable
Burning
Friendship?
VI. I told you I'd break bigger things than glass.
I did.
That day,
I broke
hearts.
(March 10, 2019 - 5:52 pm)
Whoa. This was really cool and I love the line "I told you I'd break bigger things than glass."
(March 11, 2019 - 6:24 pm)
Whoa. This is really good, Twilgirl.
Boo says hihi! Hi-hi, Boo!
(March 11, 2019 - 8:33 pm)
I don't know
I don't
I
...
I can't do it
I can't
I
...
That sounds right.
I've tried so hard
I've walked the gauntlet
Came out nearly dead.
But that's not my fault,
Now, isn't it?
I'm looking at you.
Yeah you.
Now it's my turn to say
GOOD
BYE
(Good riddence...)
I'll find myself again
And I'll pick up my broken peices
I'll start all over
WITHOUT YOUR TOXIC 'HELP'
I'm me.
I always have been.
But what you labeled my fault?
Nah, that was always your sin.
So now I'm walking away.
Starting from the beginning
OF MY OWN ADVENTURE
So thanks
For all the hardship
I'm sorry it had to end this way.
I really am.
But now I can finally be free
Maybe
...
Maybe so can you...?
(March 11, 2019 - 1:29 am)
@Rogue Wildling yes, I did write that poem about someone. Maybe that's what having a crush feels like to me (at least, having a year-and-a-half long crush on someone you've vaguely known for a really long time but never really talked to and you're fed up with it all).
(March 13, 2019 - 11:39 am)
@Leafpool huh. Noted.
(March 13, 2019 - 4:46 pm)
Another poem for my closest friend.
C.M.D.
we lay there in the bed of peonies open-mouthed laughing and lookin up at the endless expanse of blue
in late september,
the sun sets sooner and i get to see the fiery waves that are your golden highlights catch the sun / you are real to me like a tree that has been struck by lightning / imperfect / striking / wonderful and / real / dear,
red christmas lights slung / across the tops of your bedroom / draw out the inner mind like nothing else / i could tell you anything / and you could do the same to me / i'd give you my brain beneath a microscope / and let you dissect its deepest parts / any day
(March 13, 2019 - 8:30 pm)
BLUEBIRD!!! *FLYING TACKLE HUG* Also, nice poem!
(March 13, 2019 - 11:09 pm)
Hi there! and thanks!
(March 15, 2019 - 12:26 pm)
Benches are friends
To those with umbrellas
Who take rest in the pouring rain.
Gazing into a sunset
Is calm for some fellas
Who have nothing to lose and all to gain.
But colds will be caught
And eyes will be ruined.
This peace is fake.
~~
Nihil says puku. Aww, is my poem really that bad?
yess
Dang. I was really trying there.
Ohhh well. Youu can't wryt poem ssss.
(March 13, 2019 - 11:13 pm)
wanderer~
i am the
life of the party
fingerless gloves and sideways smiles
and i am
a face that doesn't fit the name i've chosen for myself
i pull my hair in different ways, but all i see is
false
and when you like purple and pink and fashion there is no way out
and i am
casual flirts with light words and heavy meanings
i am alone but okay
i am
friends and laughter and sunshine
words scribbled in a journal at half-past midnight
and we're all lost, but that's okay
i wouldn't know what to do if i was
found
(March 14, 2019 - 2:05 am)