Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
seconded.
(January 18, 2019 - 5:56 pm)
*starts crying* this. this is beautiful
(January 18, 2019 - 7:14 pm)
Hey everyone! So, I've been kind of lacking inspiration for what to write lately and I was wondering if people could give me any poetry prompts! I'd love it if y'all could just throw me any cool prompts you may have come up with or come across, or writing challenges, or any themes for poems, or vague ideas, or pictures, or really anything I could use to write poetry with. Thank you! <333
(January 20, 2019 - 1:25 pm)
I bet you could make something really cool out of this sentence-
Let's begin our journey... in search of all the Time Forgotten.
(January 20, 2019 - 5:05 pm)
Ooh! That already feels inspirational. Thanks!
(Hazel says bing. Binggg there's a poetry idea?)
(January 21, 2019 - 11:07 am)
I own a book called "The Daily Poet" by Kelli Russel Agodon and Martha Silano, which has a lot of really nice poetry prompts. Here are a few fun ones:
- Choose a color and write a poem using only images of that color.
- Write a poem in which every line begins with the words "I remember".
- Write a peom that has only two lines. End the poem with an image of something being lost.
- Make three seperate lists of verbs, nouns, & adjectives related to cooking and write a love poem using at least 5 words from each list.
- Write a poem of exactly 100 words.
- Begin a poem "Dear Time" and use one or more of the following words (extra credit if you use them all): skin, geography, regret, tugboat, pudding, fibrous, pumice.
(Also, if other people submit prompts, would you mind if I use some of them also? :0)
(January 20, 2019 - 8:10 pm)
Wow, cool! Thank you! Yeah, you can totally use prompts that other people submit!
(January 21, 2019 - 11:08 am)
I wrote two poems today from Abi's prompts!
--
a shaded, mossy forest of green tree leaves and interwoven roots
envelops a small girl, wearing a leaf crown, as she slowly fades from the amber sunlight
--
(This one was fun)
dear time,
i regret showing you my skin like pumice
the geographical blue lines that travel
my arms like a vein map
over abrasive hands, and skin, porous, dry
the regret smothers my heart,
a fibrous net, as thick as pudding
pulling me away like i'm a tugboat
--
Does the love poem have to be about a person? Because I wrote out lists of cooking things and it seems like the poem is going to be about "Oh, my passionate love for--cinnamon rolls" XD Haha.
Ooooh, I'm hungry. I can almost smell them—warm, just out of the oven!
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(January 21, 2019 - 4:52 pm)
So I was reading a few pages back since I haven't been on here in a while, and I just wanted to say something about Glam Panda's and Leo's poems.
Glam Panda - I actually really really really like your poem!! But maybe you could get a little more rhythme into it
Leo - I love it. it's absolutely amazing and beautiful
(January 22, 2019 - 4:35 pm)
Oh my GOSH, I love those! The "dear time" one, especially, is amazing! It's so simple and pretty and elegant and gave me chills, honestly. "The geographical blue lines that travel/my arms like a vein map" is my favorite line.
(January 24, 2019 - 1:20 am)
buckingham turned out to be a disappointment
——
remember in london when i almost threw up
on the double-decker bus
doubled over against a grimy window
shaking like a gingko in a hurricane?
remember how we stumbled down the grainy steps,
half-lost (and me not caring),
too far from the palace
we were meant to be by ten?
my stomach and head churned alike,
sending me staggering, blinded,
a dying dog, eyes crossed, hands clenched
against my sides
as if to squeeze the pain out through my palms.
keilin whined about having to walk.
we walked,
him with feet-dragging, me with mounting nausea,
past bakeries and hotels,
cafes and restaurants,
a city made more foreign in its similarity to home.
the speak the same language
but their tongues have different shapes,
to live, to die, to be a tourist—
time wound alongside us,
tracing under the leering curves of bridges,
through a park
plush with green and spindly benches.
dad studied the map,
mom remarked on the trees,
and i tried to remember how to breathe.
the shirt i wore: mustard yellow & white stripes.
mom loves it and i do not,
and now when i put it on i feel ghosts:
sleeves and collar at once too tight, clenching,
fixing to rip my flesh down to bone.
what if i throw up right now, on the grass
in this pretty london park,
and all my insides spill out
and what if i can’t put them back
and what if i like being empty?
me, already the last of the group, fell back,
stopped and swayed on my feet
and they didn’t feel like my own.
fingers fumbling, i reached under my shirt to undo my bra,
terrified out of mind that my torso might
snap
in
two.
(January 24, 2019 - 1:19 am)
(January 26, 2019 - 1:28 pm)
Red Roses~
A girl sat in her bed,
Staring at the dark,
Uncertain if the shadows were the trees or
Something else.
Her heart raced,
She clutched the covers tighter.
“What are you so afraid of, dear?”
A shadow moved, the girl froze.
“Who are you?”
The shadow flickered, “why does it matter?”
“I must know if I should fear.”
“There is nothing to be afraid of, dear.”
The girl shook her head. “Then go away.”
“Why should I?”
“You’re alone.”
“You’re hurting.”
“You’re broken.”
The shadow laughed.
“You’re not good enough.”
“You’re nothing.”
The girl stared out at the dark,
Her heart had ceased to race,
She felt nothing.
Then, to her surprise,
The shadow offered a rose.
It glistened bright,
Even though it was dark.
“Take the rose, dear.”
“Why?”
“Because you need it.”
“If I take it, will you leave me alone?”
“Yes, but you must keep it in your pocket.”
The girl took the rose.
The thorns pricked her fingers,
And she felt better.
She closed her eyes, though the shadow still lingered.
The next night, the girl couldn’t sleep again.
She gripped the covers,
Although she was no longer afraid of the dark
Or the shadows that seemed to
Mock her mark.
“Hello again, dear.”
The shadow laughed.
“I see you’ve kept the rose.”
“Yes”
The girl whispered.
“Leave me alone.”
“Have another rose.”
It was brighter and bigger than the first,
And craving its beauty,
It's pain,
The girl took it.
Though the prick on her fingers
Was barely felt at all,
And the shadow did not leave her alone.
“Take another!”
It prodded.
“And another!”
Soon it was morning,
And the girl did not come down for school.
She lay in her bed,
Surrounded in bright
Red roses,
That glistened in the light.
(January 27, 2019 - 7:07 pm)
I did end up writing a love poem about cinnamon rolls, and then one about emotional (not taste) love. Both of these poems are kind of messes.
(I liked the idea of using a French title...and I recently learned direct and indirect objects, woohoo!)
je l'adore (version 1)
it is the beloved object of everyone's hunger pangs
sticky-sweet, tasting of honey,
and spices,
cinnamon
it adheres to your hands while you eat
and leaves crumbs on your lips, hauntingly
delicious and enticing
(you lick your lips)
(stirring up wishful thinking)
senses pouring into your mind
of hot and messy, dripping,
cinnamon rolls
---
je l'adore (version 2)
darling, i want to
taste your sweet lips
i've spilled over the
edges, all i can think
now is i want to
pour myself into your
arms for a hug
i am infatuated by the
drippy combination of our
hands, burning hot,
melting into something
like honey, as sticky
as if you stirred wet
flour in a bowl, scraping
the messy edges with a
spoon as it overcooked
--
I also wrote a poem for Soren's prompt, I just don't have time to post it now!
(January 28, 2019 - 7:33 pm)
This poem is from Abi's prompt, write a poem that is exactly 100 words.
(January 28, 2019 - 11:41 pm)