Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
I wrote this in school today! The prompt was to write a ten-line poem describing what balance is or could be without using the word balance. (it became a bit of a social commentary.)
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A boy twirls on a line stretched above a swamp of greedy eyes,
following him as he spins and pivots.
The brown drinks up her birthday surprise -
she's always wanted to be in the circus.
At home, her family can barely scrape by.
The blue is fixated with a dry gaze,
one that comes from seeing the same movie too many times.
This isn't as good as the Cirque du Soleil he saw last week.
The boy swivels and whirls,
his well-practiced equilibrium reflected in the demographic far below.
(January 29, 2019 - 5:45 pm)
Here's the one that I wrote with Soren's prompt.
journey
let's begin our journey
to the farthest ends of the earth
and beyond that,
in search of all the time that we
have forgotten, lost, tossed carelessly
away in a spell of reckless,
happy joy
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Also, I wrote a poem about the snow. I don't know if the formatting at the end will work....
in praise of the snow
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when it snows
at night the city is
lighter, somewhat, as streetlights reflect
off of the white, that blankets the ground and
sky. it seems like everything is whiter
and prettier, as the imperfect/perfect snow
covers all impurities completely for a little while
at least.
i lie awake, resting on my elbows on my pillow,
staring out the window, as the snow falls gently
down. in a warm cocoon of blankets, safe inside.
peacefully breathing in and out and imagining
tomorrow, filled with sledding and mouthfuls of snow.
"the frost on my window is like
fractured glittering splinters of diamonds"
i will be asleep
soo
n
(January 29, 2019 - 7:04 pm)
I recently read one of Leeli's poems from a few pages back and got inpired and wrote a poem from it. Would you mind if I posted it?
(January 30, 2019 - 9:51 pm)
Ah, I inspired you? No, I don't mind at all; I'd love to read it!
(January 31, 2019 - 11:30 am)
XD, yeah, I read your poem and was like, wow that's beautiful, and I took some inspiration/style wording from you.
Here's mine! I didn't think of a title yet, if anyone has any suggestions that would be great! Or any critiques or things like that.
You step onto the dance floor
Hesitantly, falteringly,
Practiced.
you try to move with the group
Together as one
none unique, All alike -
their Heartbeats
their Pace
their Hair flips
their gum popping
their movie smiles
Clearing a path through the jealous crowd
you try to follow
They turn
Look you up and down
Size you up
And beckon graciously for you to join
To try your hand
But you - no darling, you are not like them
for you
your Heartbeat
your pace
your hair flips
your gum popping
your fake smile
Are ahead of the timing
For darling you are
Real
Have you finally realized
That life
Isn’t practiced?
that life
Isn’t paced?
that life
Isn’t choreographed?
That life
Isn’t contained?
And you step in front
Glance back
Then run ahead
And let the music take your hand
And set you
Free
Eyes closed
Hair whipping
body twisting
Arms flowing
Feet tapping
Heart racing
And you finally
Let go
And
Breathe.
Dance.
Fly.
(January 31, 2019 - 8:14 pm)
Whoa, that's very pretty. I really like it. I think my favorite line is, 'for darling you are/real'. It's also quite relatable.
(February 1, 2019 - 10:40 am)
Wrote a poem today from Abi's prompt, though I didn't use all the words, I liked how it turned out!
dear time;
in my hands one last time
(February 3, 2019 - 12:19 am)
Sooooooo beautiful. I love this, Seppy <333
(February 4, 2019 - 12:27 am)
Gah, that's so prettyyy <3
(February 9, 2019 - 11:41 pm)
overload
blurred noises chase their tails
back-to-forefront
like the slap of hopscotch soles—
a singer’s upward croon,
piano chords slammed past coherency,
clipped words, voices parceled into gibberish.
honey-bodied monster languishes on newspaper clippings:
“lexophile, one who has a love for words.”
my father crosses his arms,
tan to grey to pink-tinged frowns,
and his mouth spouts a car alarm (yet i’m the oversensitive one).
“to write with a broken pencil—”l
i’d love words more if they were quiet, i decide, and sink
into the blue belly of this sagging sofa,
a small fish going off the deep end
(perhaps if i sit here long enough the fabric will close over my head).
i’m not scared of drowning,
i do it every day.
french class, the bus, stranger’s living room.
drop a phone in water, put a phone in rice—
my operating system’s saturated with steam.
faulty hard drive, volume locked in high gear,
stupid bawling baby too weak to take a hit.
my ears fill up with water.
it’s too loud, i can’t see a thing.
is my bra too tight? i think i can’t
breathe again.
(February 9, 2019 - 11:43 pm)
Waahahoww. That is SO cool. *waves hands incomprehensibly* The...words. All of it. It's so visual!
(February 10, 2019 - 2:14 pm)
That was indeed beautiful, I quite like the imagery, as well. Nice work.
(February 16, 2019 - 2:15 pm)
This one doesn't have a title, I just really got into the flow-and-half-rhyming thing that it has.
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by the way i
was in the front all the time and
all the time, slipping
can i turn back time?
la
la la up in the
front once upon a far-off
time
found, and lost, at once,
starry-eyed
when i look up at the sky,
i find the beauty of people's lives
can we connect two more people
like puzzle pieces? another
set of friends to find
each other
let's act kind to
each other now
i know i
lied,
so forget you ever said it and join
your faithless hand in
mine
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(February 10, 2019 - 2:29 pm)
Oh, man, that's amazing! I love the half-rhyming style, it flows so well but still retains that loose, unstructured quality that free verse possesses. It's very dreamy and pretty, I just love it, especially the last few lines: "i know i/lied/so forget you ever said it and join/your faithless hand in/mine".
(February 10, 2019 - 6:49 pm)
I wrote this a couple days ago, and it just stuck with me so much I had to post it. I had done this thing where I opened up the dictionary to random pages and had to choose a noun for myself from each page I landed on, and one or two adjectives. This is what came from it. (Clarification--I've never been in a situation like this.)
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untitled--
your ruined hands hold a pile of violet petals out to me; spanning a heap of fluttering softness that you offer to me like it'll kill you if i don't take it
picture-perfect, isn't it? you, trying so hard and me, feeling like an awful duplicate of myself, about to hurt you so badly
you must think this is the worst time of your entire life, but i, i feel like when, at 1 a.m., i tend to find a happy contentment. i hate that i feel like that and feel so ready to destroy your heart. but it just feels right
?
am i behind a ruse of smiles? it must seem to you like i am ready to accept your flowers but i, obviously (to me at least) am not, at all
i can't bring myself to harden my countenance. i'm sorry if you're getting false hopes. i'm sorry
(i push away your flowers)
(you choke on your heart)
(February 12, 2019 - 5:04 pm)