Regular poetry thread

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Regular poetry thread

Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)

This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!

submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)

Cool, Bluebird! I just participated in NaPoWriMo, so I have a bunch of poems to share! Here's one, that I also posted on the Slam:

Explosions are beautiful.

The way millions of particles collide all at once and

Worlds are formed from pure

Dust. I live for the bang of crashing

Forces. Magnetic attraction to complete

Opposites. Two hearts suddenly welded into one

By the universe’s metalsmith. A slap in the face

And the burning feeling that comes after, not just

On the outside, but all the way through.

Time is only ephemeral. Everything else:

Eternal. A billion insignificant pieces

Can create one significant universe.

Everything they have to hold onto made

Or broken in a single bang. There is nothing

Possessing in everyday routine, nothing

Taking in regularity, no new 

Sentiment to control us. No, only the complete

Overturning of all normality can be the creator

Of striking phenomena, of power for the

Powerless. Yes, it is true that

Explosions are beautiful.

 

submitted by Booksy Owly
(April 30, 2017 - 11:44 pm)

I saw this one. It's amazing!! I love the imagery, and this line especially- a billion insignificant pieces/ can create one significant universe. Ahh, this is so good!

submitted by Bluebird
(May 1, 2017 - 6:10 pm)

Thanks, Bluebird! Your praise especially means something to me, since I absolutely love your poetry!

submitted by Booksy Owly
(May 1, 2017 - 6:34 pm)
submitted by top
(November 6, 2023 - 2:26 pm)

Beautiful, Booksy! I saw this one on the Slam too :)

submitted by September
(May 2, 2017 - 5:55 pm)

You are soooooooo good!! Your poem is so true.

From,

Lavender 

submitted by Lavender
(May 8, 2017 - 3:54 pm)

This poem is amazing! Representation of the form of earth and so much more.

submitted by Expand Conservation
(July 29, 2021 - 1:49 pm)

You just made me rethink every single one of my story ideas.

THANK YOU!! 

 

submitted by Aurelia M., age 10, Maryland
(November 26, 2023 - 7:41 pm)

Yay, another poetry thread!

This one's really sad (not inspired by any personal tragedy), but anyways. . .

untitled~  

i'm sorry i--

i let you go too soon

when you fell, you--

you closed your eyes

it was too fast--

and i, i made up my mind

i fell too

and then we were starlight  

~~~~

I'd love some critique and/or title suggestions! 

submitted by September
(May 1, 2017 - 12:21 am)

Hauntingly beautiful, September! How about 'And then we were starlight'? Or just Starlight, if the first is too long. And yours is amazing, too, Booksy!

submitted by Leeli
(May 1, 2017 - 4:59 pm)

I like Starlight. Awesome poem, September- short and sweet!

submitted by Bluebird
(May 1, 2017 - 6:11 pm)

Thanks so much!!!

submitted by September
(May 2, 2017 - 5:57 pm)

*A Rainbow egg has appeared,

But if this seems a bit weird,

Go check the egg hunt thread

Now, with that said,

What year did the Beetles first come here?

(here means the USA) 

 

submitted by The Yolkster, age 8 eggyears, The PoEGG
(April 19, 2019 - 10:08 am)
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Tongue out 
submitted by Star Kitten , age 300 moons, Star H3386
(July 19, 2019 - 2:17 pm)

lol XD

submitted by Lola G. FanWing , age 11, Elgin, IL
(March 16, 2022 - 2:19 pm)