Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
Oh, yes! Thanks so much, Admin! ^^
(July 26, 2019 - 9:23 am)
Ooooh, yikes that is relatable.
(July 23, 2019 - 9:56 am)
I fell
You fell
We both fell
Like stars fell
(July 27, 2019 - 12:47 am)
The deep, chilling shriek of Wind--
Fire's hope, destruction cast away,
Doused by keening maiden;
Tears rolling, forming
A sea of unquenchable thirst;
Prompted to drink,
Only to be faced with inadequacy;
The churning darkness
Straining, stabbing-- pleading--
Until consuming all;
Yet still, unsatiated,
Rages like black fire;
Dying alone, still pain-shrouded.
(July 28, 2019 - 10:43 pm)
I suppose I've just been particularly angsty lately...
~~~~~
Snaking your arms around me
You promised everything was alright;
"We both know I'll never leave you..."
You hissed, trusted without a fight.
But then, you were venomous, toxic--
Saying it was your nature to bite;
And soon after slipped right though
my fingers, just as I figured you might.
After accepting it, and moving on
You came again, hugging me tight;
Roaring how unbearable it is to lose
A loved one, just greeted with a "Quite."
You assured me how reliable you are,
And I was, again, blinded by the light;
Only when you growled, casting me away,
Did I finally learn, at least in slight.
Perhaps I'm now a loner,
I know you'll be in for a fright,
But now I full well know,
And my future's looking bright!
(July 28, 2019 - 11:12 pm)
(July 29, 2019 - 1:08 pm)
Hmm, I think the spacing might have been changed, it was supposed to be every forth line ended a stanza, except for the last paragraph, which had five lines.
(July 29, 2019 - 2:18 pm)
(July 29, 2019 - 2:09 pm)
Wow, the spacing is just not loving me today, this was also supposed to be four lines per stanza.
I could try to fix it for you if you tell me to which poem you are referring.
Admin
(July 29, 2019 - 5:49 pm)
I finally wrote something, look at that.
unfinished poems
i. broken lines and
scattered thoughts
fleeting explanations,
frustrating similes
half-formed ideas that stayed
half-formed
because you didn’t remember
how to finish them
ii.the ruins of the things that go through your head
in the night
the remnants of the feelings that follow you
into morning
the ideas that got lost in the middle of your mind
and cannot be retrieved
iii. fleeting glances
darkened echoes
fractured reflections
forgotten song
vi. blurry edges
teary eyes
clumsy fingers
cloven heart
v. later is the only time to finish anything
procrastination finds its culmination as
midnight skies shine in drooping eyes
the last words on the page were never
written
(August 4, 2019 - 9:20 pm)
Ooh, I like that! That's pretty much my writing process :P I really like the fifth verse, especially the rythm between "procrastination finds its culmination as/midnight skies shine in drooping eyes".
(August 5, 2019 - 3:34 pm)
Thanks! Same—I drew inspiration from all the random half-written poems floating around my poetry doc. XP
Also, the “written” line at the end was supposed to be in strike-through font (to represent the unfinished-ness), but copy/paste cut it out. I thought it looked cool and added to the poem, though, so here’s a screenshot.
(August 5, 2019 - 6:35 pm)
Oh yeah, that's cool!
(August 6, 2019 - 8:00 am)
Shadow
~~~~~
Silent steps,
Invisible tears,
Darkness cast
By brighter twin;
Broken glass,
Shattered being,
Gone, consumed
Until light returns;
Feared most
When safest;
Always tread upon,
Constantly changing.
(August 9, 2019 - 10:03 pm)
Poetry dump!
This first one is from the Poetry Challenge for the prompt "Outfit of the Day":
Photographic Memory
i. when i first saw you you were wearing tight jeans that were stretched tight around your knees like they were ready to rip and a white shirt old and tattered like it had gone through the wash one time too many and your shoes these black ankle boots with heels and the wind was a child the way it tossed your hair all over the place and your sunglasses flashed mouth wide open
you wore happiness and it was beautiful
ii. when i first talked to you you were wearing winter like it was the most stunning fashion statement your scarf was bigger than your whole head it bunched all around your shoulders and your sweater was thick and cream-colored and you had these fluffy boots bursting with warmth and your hair was a gold fountain that sparkled with snowflakes lips lose smile
you wore wintry kindness and it was beautiful
iii. when i took you to a movie you were wearing cottom black leggings crossed legs and grey sneakers clean shoelaces bouncing rhythmically and a grey cardigan so soft and your hair was in a shiny ponytail straight but playfully bouncy vanilla lip balm lips open showing me teeth
you wore excitement and it was beautiful
iv. on the day you broke my heart you were wearing something so ordinary it didn't fit because shouldnt it have mirrored the words you were saying but it was just jean shorts and a t-shirt from a concert you saw before i knew you and you got your hair cut but it was still giving you a billowy halo feet exposed lips shut tight turning away
you wore independence and it was beautifully heartbreaking
This next one is based on something I wrote in a novella that I really loved:
Fountain
i. i look up and the sky is just so blue and the clouds could be kingdoms and the sun is smiling but not at me and it’s just so insane and i’m in awe that something can still be beautiful even through pain and if i could climb into the sky’s lap and just stay there forever i would i would i would
ii. i look down and the grass is just so green and the blades could be tiny swords and the soil is rich but not with the material wealthiness i so desperately need and it's just so perfect and i’m confused why something this trivial is given this much attention and if i could bury myself under the ground and stay there forever i would i would i would
iii. i look behind me and everything is just so dark and the shadows could be ghosts and undefined shapes tantalize me even though they never existed and it’s just so horrifying and i’m scared that when i look forward this is what i’ll see and if i could close my eyes and hide from it forever i would i would i would
iv. i look ahead and the possibilities are just so endless and the sidewalks could be clouds and the leaves on the trees beckon me closer with green-spun hands and it’s just so empowering and i’m just so surprised that something this ordinary could fill me with so much hope and i could keep moving forward I will I will
I will
And I got this book of poetry prompts a few weeks ago, and I've written maybe six or seven. This was one of my favorites, for the prompt "A River":
what if i just sat here, with the
waving cattails brushing my hair and the
silver-crested water holding my
hand? what if i laughed with the
sky so blue and
made friends with the jewel-backed
dragonflies? what if i
stayed here by the riverside so long that the
grasses wove into my skin and the
soil snuck into my
veins and i could stay here and
laugh with the sky and hold the water's hand
forever?
And I have a few more, but eh this post is already long (thanks for reading it, Admins!).
(August 13, 2019 - 1:43 pm)