Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
so good!!!!!
(June 8, 2019 - 10:22 am)
Thanks, I appreciate it!
(June 8, 2019 - 10:46 am)
This is awesome!! The details are so beautiful, and I can just picture it in my mind.
(June 8, 2019 - 11:35 am)
Thanks, I usually feel like I can never achieve the same effect as others writers, so this means a lot to me!
(June 8, 2019 - 1:17 pm)
Rain
~~~~~
Rain, the building block of life;
Rain, reviving plants and animals alike;
Rain, the metaphor of dispair,
When it should be the hope,
that puts out the lethal fire.
Rain, soft and gentle as it is
Criticized for the son(sun) it is not;
Cool and refreshing,
like a innocent little girl
Trying to find her way in the world;
Rejected by all,
But leaving a beautiful streak,
A gift, in her wake,
to those who hate her,
That is what she gives us
in return for our rejection,
A gift, a rainbow, forgiveness,
Washing away malice and
turning over a new slate
Is Rain.
(June 8, 2019 - 11:00 am)
SUNSHINE-a sad poem
we waved goodnight
as the sunshine
fell behind the trees
for we did not want it to leave
until we were tightly under our covers
we soon learned that we gave each other sunshine
we gave eachother the hope that there will be light
we soon did not want to leave each other
so we waved goodnight when the sun had fallen
and was tucked tightly under it's covers
we left eachother everyday with a feeling of sunshine
we left eachother everyday knowing we would see each other again
that's why when you left me I crumbled
you alone gave me sunshine
and when you left you took it with you
I no longer believed in sunshine
for you were in the universe of death all alone
and I was in the universe of life all alone
we felt no sunshine-no hope-no happiness
until I joined you in the universe of death
we waved goodnight
as the sun fell
for we no longer wanted to live without sunshine
for we had found our sunshine
sorry it was so long, I hope you like it!!
(June 8, 2019 - 4:52 pm)
Aw, that was so sad, yet heart-warming.
(June 8, 2019 - 9:15 pm)
thank you!!! it's amazing to me when you compliment, because your poems are extrodinarily beautiful, and just a compliment from you feels really amazing!!! thanks!!!
(June 9, 2019 - 7:30 am)
Rainbow-Studded Sky
Honey-filled cotton candy clouds, lined in
dispersing, far-flung rows,
acid music dissolved into this scene that's
tucked into the corner of the sky, indignant, never seen-
Sunset Forgotten
(June 9, 2019 - 7:41 am)
Ooooh... I'm sort of hungry now, I love the honey-filled/candy floss clouds part! It's very descriptive.
Bella says: hint
Well, that was blatant, what is the hint though? Bella!
(June 9, 2019 - 12:15 pm)
Parakeet:
~~~~~
Longingly gazing
Through the bars
of your cage;
Protection, withholding
Your beautiful sky-blue wings
and catching you song
Before you sing;
Gingerly placed,
never again to fly
Free;
Yet all hope is not lost
As you need not fret
over what was once yours,
the sun warm
and rain wet;
I don't mind the protection
for which my freedom has traded;
No predators, no harsh weather,
Yet, no spread wings or singing,
Though my wings are not clipped,
and my tongue un-split;
For me, change is okay,
since everything else has;
Life is good,
so must I be.
(June 9, 2019 - 12:34 pm)
Lost in the Universe
~~~~~
Lost in the Universe,
expanding, sprawling
Like a never-ending curse
Vast silence calling;
Glimmering stars,
Nubulai twirling,
Behind the atmosphere's bars,
An ocean of sails unfurling;
A sea of colours, lights dancing,
Around Night's ebony mares,
Leaping, prancing, utterly entrancing,
Yet, beware the cold milkyway's stare.
(June 10, 2019 - 2:33 pm)
some nights the sea
——
the great beyond lives in my bathroom
balanced on the tub’s porcelain edge.
suspended, on tip-toe, i press my hand
flat against the wall
and my palm cups an ancient globe.
it is easy to love this headless figure
a blurry mirror belladonna.
arm to thigh to graceful back, reflected in
a steam-smoked shard of glass
thoughtless, unbreathing.
the cracked shutters send light
slivering across nightshade hips
as the shower head spits and cries
its saliva scattering across hexagonal tile
my picture-show stays picture-sure:
there is no courage
in loving the fatale.
braver, though,
is adoring the prefix, is kissing the femme, is
loving the girl in the mirror,
when she steps down from the ledge
braver still, to smile and mean it, at her
head and shoulders and
heart
and all.
(June 10, 2019 - 3:47 pm)
This is beautiful! I really like the self-love feelings, and the way you split up the lines is just so good--and the poison metaphors and aah. It's so pretty and the way you write it makes me wish I could feel like this--and your writing is so good it always makes me kind of inspired to write something myself.
(June 11, 2019 - 4:58 pm)
Oh my gosh, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it, your kind words really made my night <3
(June 11, 2019 - 10:29 pm)