Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
5/10/19
pelted by rain,
cascade of strawberry yogurt blossoms
wrap me up in your branches
and never let go
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This was so short I couldn't think of a title for it, so I just titled it with the date, since it kind of corresponded with the poem anyway.
(May 12, 2019 - 12:02 pm)
@Leafy, of course! Your poems are always beautiful. I'd kill for just half your talent. <3
Here's a poem I wrote a few days ago, the first half is way better than the second, mostly because of this one phrase in the first verse.
Insecurity's a Punch to Society's Gut
i. Who are we, other than the
victims of reality's genocide?
Who are we behind the artificial smiles and self-inflicted depression?
ii. sometimes I wonder if I'm
the only one who's
worried if the world will crack under the weight of our ignorance
iii. Trapped in life's endless maze,
panicked footsteps echo in
neverending dead ends
(Reality burned the map for good measure)
iv. who are we? We are mere
passengers on the Titanic, sailing on
life's ocean, riding the waves as they
rise and fall
rise and fall
(and when we sink, just
hold you breath and close your eyes)
(May 18, 2019 - 11:03 am)
Hello! This is my first ACTUAL post, but I think I have a good poem to share with you.
Look down
Look down at your crystal clean shoes
Don't look up
Don't look up at the morning streaks of pink and yellow or the cold black night sky
There is no hope
There is no hope for you, you will always be hated
You will not see light
You will not see light when your world is dark with hatred
But there can be hope
But there can be hope if you remember you are loved, even if you can't tell
There is someone
There is someonne waiting for you, waiting to embrace you, waiting for you to cry into their shoulder
Remember there is always light even in the darkest of rooms, just waiting for someone, anyone to discover it
(June 7, 2019 - 12:55 pm)
sorry I didn't come up with a title! Have any ideas for one?
(June 7, 2019 - 1:28 pm)
Beautiful, that's a great poem! I especially liked the mentioning of the sky. Maybe the title could be something along the lines of "Hope's promise."
(June 8, 2019 - 10:44 am)
How about 'Hope' for the title? By the way, I love the poem!
(June 8, 2019 - 11:46 am)
Rainbows, Sunshine, and Thunderstorms-a poem about the ups and downs of life
I felt the wonderful sunshine rays hit my face
I was as happy as could be
I skipped along to the rythm in my heart
I wandered free, free of my worries, free of my responsibilities, free
I loved the way the sunshine rays hit my face, it filled me with joy
Life changes, and you don't have a say in it
The pounding rain hit my window
The storm shook my room
The tears rolled down my cheecks as I cried into my pillow
The world was not the same
I hated the way the thunderstorm raged, it filled me with fear
Life changes, and you don't have a say in it
A rainbow is the solution, It is a reminder that there are bad times, but it also sheds light on the joyous times
You will have a rollercoaster of a life, but there will be rainbow, there to help you through everything
BE A RAINBOW
(June 7, 2019 - 2:13 pm)
Again, I love it! You're really good at writing poetry!
(June 8, 2019 - 10:48 am)
thank you!!!!!
(June 8, 2019 - 5:48 pm)
This is so true and so pretty! Your work is a bit dark, but not in a bad way. I like it because it talks about sunshine and rainbows, but in a more true way. It's not like 'everything is perfect', but shows that everything is not completely bad. Keep posting!
(June 8, 2019 - 11:43 am)
This is just a poem I wrote when I was bored. Please comment and criticize!
Go!
There’s places to go!
There’s people to see!
The world isn’t waiting,
For you or for me.
We must go now!
Simply ‘sometime’ won’t do-
This is the best time to go,
For me or for you!
But what if- you dread,
We experience delay?
Then there’s all the more reason,
To get on our way!
I simply can’t wait,
To go somewhere new!
Because the world IS waiting,
To see what we’ll do!
(June 8, 2019 - 7:37 am)
Oops, I didn't mean to submit this twice!
(June 8, 2019 - 11:36 am)
Hey guys, this is my first post, and I just wanted to get some opinions on my poem.
Go!
There’s places to go!
There’s people to see!
The world isn’t waiting,
For you or for me.
We must go now!
Simply ‘sometime’ won’t do-
This is the best time to go,
For me or for you!
But what if- you dread,
We experience delay?
Then there’s all the more reason,
To get on our way!
I simply can’t wait,
To go somewhere new!
Because the world IS waiting,
To see what we’ll do!
(June 8, 2019 - 7:45 am)
Very inspirational! I quite enjoyed this poem, and I liked the rhyming pattern. But as for criticism, instead of saying "there's" in the beginning of this poem, you could say "there are," which would be more proper, grammatically. Other than that, I thought it was great, though!
(June 8, 2019 - 11:12 am)
In the Wind
~~~~~
I sigh
The sunlight filtering, a phase
Of warm golden-orange
Tinted lovely rays
Softly rustling my hair
And green-yellow stained hays
Tenderly caressed by the wind,
The Dapples and the Bayes
Sitting here, in this pasture
A hidden grassy maze
Secrets lie, unknown
And sunsets to always praise
Memories, here are formed
But not so, in this case
This is the Wind of the sea,
Not that of this place
As I struggle to remember
Those long-lost old days
With myths alive and stories
Of those bonnie bays ahaze.
I look out over the waves
of glory's emerald and deep sapphire,
Seeing the simalarities, ablaze
Between that and of this meadow, with the sun set afire.
(June 8, 2019 - 10:03 am)