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Manzanar Poem..... This
Manzanar Poem..... This is a poem I wrote yesterday about the War Relocation Center Manzanar in Owen's Valley, California. If you haven't been there, you should go. Please tell me what I should change in this poem. It doesn't halfway convey the essence of that place, doesn't halfway show why I cried the whole time. So if you say it's great and nothing else, I will pi you. *3.14....* Just kidding. I will pie you. *splat* Tell me what I could make better, please!!!
What have we done to them, we who dwell
submitted by Emily H. :), age 13, Sparks, NV
(May 26, 2009 - 4:33 pm)
(May 26, 2009 - 4:33 pm)
Chatterbox: Inkwell
New story I'm
New story I'm writing!!!
This story is one I'm currently writing. This isn't a round robin, so don't continue it. Constructive critism please. I read a lot of weird books about parallel worlds, so just bear with me, okay?
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submitted by Pirocks/Enceladus
(May 25, 2009 - 6:54 pm)
(May 25, 2009 - 6:54 pm)
Chatterbox: Inkwell
SHORT STORIES. This
SHORT STORIES. This is a thread for short stories. Everyone can write...Well...SHORT STORIES!!! lolololol!! :):):):):):D:D:D:D:D:D:D:Do
submitted by PsyCOdUck29
(May 25, 2009 - 5:54 pm)
(May 25, 2009 - 5:54 pm)
Chatterbox: Inkwell
Clair and Mke
Clair and Mke are doing a fantasy* story together.
submitted by Trixy ✌ ♡
(May 24, 2009 - 12:16 pm)
(May 24, 2009 - 12:16 pm)
Chatterbox: Inkwell
Fun free-verse poetry ti
Fun free-verse poetry time!
This is the spot for fun poetry! Nothing romantic or ponderous. Sorta like Shel Silverstien!
Ode to Henry Ford:
submitted by Pirocks/Enceladus
(May 23, 2009 - 3:48 pm)
(May 23, 2009 - 3:48 pm)
Chatterbox: Inkwell
Names are so
Names are so interesting, we should talk about them. Ok, so maby a little to blunt, but anyway I love mine! (No nitehawlk is not my real name) I will reveal my real name in good time, but no, I do not think now is the time. (:
submitted by nitehawlk, age 13, a tree
(May 23, 2009 - 11:59 am)
(May 23, 2009 - 11:59 am)
Chatterbox: Inkwell
Admin? I made
Admin? I made a thread on Inkwell yesterday, and I know it showed up, but now I can't find it anywhere. It started with I need advice... Did it get deleted somehow, or is it just buried somewhere? Thanks.
Jasmine
It may just be buried. I didn't delete anything already posted.
Admin
submitted by Jasmine Q., age 13, reading under t
(May 23, 2009 - 8:07 am)
(May 23, 2009 - 8:07 am)
Chatterbox: Inkwell
Raise your hand
Raise your hand if you don't like shopping. *Raises tongue, nose, ears, arms and legs off the ground* I don't like shopping.
My mom and I went shopping for almost TWO hours today. To get NEW clothes for the first time in YEARS. Then we had to get deodorant and other things. THEN we went to the grocery store.
PURE torture. AAH. *Breaths in and out deeply* And Autumn and Luna got to stay home. :( They got to get sprayed with cold water. I didn't. :(
submitted by Meadow, age 11, IL
(May 22, 2009 - 6:59 pm)
(May 22, 2009 - 6:59 pm)
Chatterbox: Inkwell
I need some
I need some advice. I have a character that I'm really attached to, but that is contributing virtually nothing to my story. How do I chuck him without feeling awful? I've developed this character for a long time, but now can't worm him into the plot. Help? Please?
submitted by Jasmine Q., age 13, reading under t
(May 22, 2009 - 3:35 pm)
(May 22, 2009 - 3:35 pm)
Chatterbox: Inkwell
Round Robin.
Round Robin.
submitted by Mke, age 11, America
(May 20, 2009 - 6:48 pm)
(May 20, 2009 - 6:48 pm)
