Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
Thank you, @Azalea!
10/23/20
there was this girl i knew
she had pockets full of stars and spring in her eyes
and dirt under her fingernails
and melodies danced on her tongue and it was the most beautiful sound it the world
the way crescendos did pirouettes and sixteenth notes raised their graceful hands to the skies
i'd see her at the corners of streets, or at bus stops
and i'd think of her when i looked at my bruised knuckles
i never learned her name, but i made up a couple
my esther turned ophelia
when her skinny-legged chords and twirling harmonies found their way to the riverside and got swept underneath, taking her with them
decked in flowers and knee-high boots and rough edges and dimpled smiles
i lost what i never had-
her love.
~~~~~ Yay, I'm proud of this <3
(October 25, 2020 - 3:52 pm)
This is super sweet and beautiful and sad all at the same time. Extraordinary.
(November 1, 2020 - 1:02 pm)
Wow, that's some beautiful imagery~
The underlying theme is sorta sad tho'... Sorta reminds me of Haku from Koi+Puro. Sorta.
(November 1, 2020 - 9:38 pm)
Swirling purple ink of the sky
Blots out all
Reason and logic;
Stars consumed by the world
Of light
That tries to tear them from their plaque;
Where shadows crawl and slink,
stalking about, the whispers
Of dimmed night;
Where the only solace is the song
Of the moon, whose silent yearning
Casts more evil than light.
(October 30, 2020 - 2:42 am)
Whoa. This took my breath away. So heartrending and powerful. I'm speechless.
(October 31, 2020 - 1:20 pm)
Mn, it is rather pretty, huh?
Thanks~
(November 1, 2020 - 9:59 pm)
Sometimes I wish
I were a character in a book,
Who always knew what to listen to,
Where to look;
Whose whole life,
Or perhaps just one short story,
Was set in stone-- left alone--
Untainted in initial glory.
Even when torn about
By thoughtless marionette strands--
Words and expressions carved
By careless unseen hands,
Perhaps knowing
What would happen,
Just how and
exactly when,
Could whisk away a huge burden--
With an assuring "again and again;"
Or perhaps one'd only
Grow weary and worn by "En fin."
(November 1, 2020 - 9:31 pm)
Dear Moon,
Fair maiden that you are,
Come forth from your slumber;
Awaken at last,
Let us taste the sweet melancholy of your
Dew-kissed perfume.
Lie not low in the fields,
Nor the sea, nor the sky;
Fly, glowing vibrant, higher than thine eyes.
Come, fear thee not,
Of that pompous fool, the jealous sun,
Fear naught-- near,
nor far, nor soon;
Purple mist all a'lilt in your valleys,
Silver holding more value
Than supercilious gold
shall ever own,
Thus, come; come quick,
Join us shattered spirits
Of thine kindred in the heavens
Where we soar,
Sing and dance and dazzle away,
All to someday return
And beat back that foolish imp,
That overzealous sun.
(November 1, 2020 - 9:56 pm)
Oh my sweet cream puff this is amazing. It's so regal and elegant, but still conveys a lot of emotion. It sounds like something the elves in Lord of the Rings would write.
(November 4, 2020 - 5:48 pm)
Haha, I was trying out some Elizabethan language, but it came out as partially cringey, partially dainty-ish-sounding?
That snark certainly didn't help, Estelle. (ㄱ__ㄱ)
(I love that exclamation, though: 'Oh my sweet cream puff!' ) XD
(November 20, 2020 - 6:34 am)
(November 2, 2020 - 8:10 am)
This is.. so good. I can't describe it.
(November 3, 2020 - 1:53 pm)
I actually wrote this for an English project last week but I didn't realize that we had to read it out loud. It was so embarrassing~ I usually make up a song that the poetry fits to so just speaking it like normal sounds sorta funny.
Anyway, it was a soliloquy summarising Nancy Drew and the Mystery of Shadow Ranch, #5.
~~~~~
Shadow ranch-- that’s our space,
And where our case
this time takes place:
I’d had my theories from the start,
But we’ve got to see with our own eyes,
“Use your head and not your heart”
To thoroughly expose the culprit’s lies
And unravel this mystery, part by part.
Who’s the one that seems most “sus?”
The one who’s causing all this fuss?
They say that there’s this glowing steed
A phantom horse, misfortunes breed...
But for now, it seems we’ve got a growing lead
With an odd note, that place, it says to heed.
All this static, extra sights to distract us:
A treasure steeped in mystery,
Ill-fated romance lost to history
In scrambling to find who we can trust,
An innocent man convicted-- and save him, we must.
The clock is ticking,
And suddenly there’s a new clue;
No longer fooled by tricking
As for proof, there’s the artwork too.
Have some fun, we’re on vacation
While digging up yet more information;
Catch them while they’re still off-guard
And sneak peak at the opponent's winning card~
Then, before we know it,
More hijinks ensue;
Suddenly in the perfect position,
Already pieced together all we ever knew
And this is how I’ve become
Such a famèd sleuth
To find the prize, see through the lies
Into the only truth.
(November 3, 2020 - 10:47 am)
What's happened has happened
What's done is now done
You can't change the past
The bad guys have won
Now it's all over
The evil won't leave
You can't change the past
Unless you believe
Title ideas:
You can't change the past
Believe
I'm open to more ideas or feedback! I'm really proud of this poem!
(November 3, 2020 - 1:44 pm)
This is cool!
Hmm, I can't decide whether it's more of a hopeful, optimistic one or more desperate... Either way, it's simple but powerful!
(November 15, 2020 - 2:56 am)