Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
Here's a nice poem I wrote about winter! Is anyone else so excited for the holidays that they're already wearing santa hats daily? Or is that just me?
Winter
snowflakes and flurries
white cotton imitations
piled high
beneath a bedecked fir
firelight gleams
off the shining star
and reflecting
in the many orbs
hung with silver string
hot, spiced cider
sweet gingerbread
and striped candy canes
marshmallows in a steaming mug
children laughing
packing snow into stacked spheres
with rosy cheeks and dancing eyes
we sit, together
blanket held close
to ward off the chill
but tuck close to winter
shops all aglow
a candle-lit village
adorned
with tinsel wreaths
and jingle bells
to welcome winter
home.
(November 30, 2020 - 9:44 pm)
So cozy and nostalgic! ♡
(December 1, 2020 - 1:00 pm)
Thank you! <3
(December 1, 2020 - 9:36 pm)
Out stretches the glistening
Ballroom floor
Running on and forwards
For what seems like
An eternal, tortured existence
High climb the walls, towering
Cold and grey
In their splendor,
Sparkling; though devoid of life.
Stretching gardens, silent;
A disguised birdcage
Of thornéd roses, gilded
Caltraps inlaid, encrusted with gems.
Here rise the powerful,
The strong and the beauties,
Unloved and long-wrongéd,
Where the weak are trampled, unknown;
Where those on the inside yearn
To escape, those outside
Dream to enter and
Tear each other apart for the right
To do so.
This is the truth of the palace.
~~~~~
I don't know why everything I write takes such a dark turn now, I was just trying to get that cold, sprawling palace feel (T-T)
I guess I'll try again tomorrow.
(December 1, 2020 - 6:13 pm)
You do NOT need to rewrite this. It literally took my breath away. So piercing and powerful, especially the last line, This is the truth of the palace. So good.
(December 1, 2020 - 9:35 pm)
Glad you like it!
Re-reading it a couple days later, I see it still doesn't capture my initial intention, but it's not that bad either. And yessss, I love last lines that really resound with you!! I feel like the last words often leave the strongest impression, so they should have the most powerful impact!
(December 3, 2020 - 12:07 pm)
This is a poem I wrote a couple weeks ago based on what I got when I was just tapping the middle box on my phone's keyboard over and over. I basically just inserted punctuation and deleted the stutters, and it ended up being sort of profound! Sorry in advance for any weird formatting.
Thank Love
A poem based on iOS text prediction software
“The Campaign, I can get a hold on the Campaign for you
and let you see that you have a chance.
I will send it in the mail to know what you need for the Campaign
thank you for your email
and thank me
thank everyone
for all that you have to do
I hope you’re having fun and I love how
I love to see your love
I hope you’re doing ok
I hope you’re having fun
I love how you’re doing
thank me
thank love
love, how are you doing today?
thank me for your help
thank me for your love
I hope you’re having fun, love
how are your dear love?
how you doing?
this is a good time.
thank love for you, for your love and joy and love.”
“you know how I could get a new job for a month
and I can do that with my family
in my joy
for you to get your email out and then you have a chance
and you see that you’re having fun
and I hope you get to a great time
thank love, thank you for all that
I hope you’re doing ok
I love how I can get a chance
(and get some sleep)
and I’m going out of town
(and I’m not doing ok
I’m going out of my joy)
I hope you get to see your face
thank love for the hope
you have a good time at the end
(I’m sorry for you)
I love how I can do that
you have a good day love
(how I can get a good day)
I hope you’re having fun and with your family.
I hope you’re having a good time.”
(December 1, 2020 - 6:13 pm)
This is...actually really cool. I thin it would be better if it started on the "I hope you get to a great time" and changed the words around a bit so they flowed more.
(December 2, 2020 - 8:48 am)
Mn, I agree, this is really cool! It's sorta raw and a tad disorganized, but maybe that's part of it's charm.
(December 3, 2020 - 11:48 am)
The sea is like an endless desert,
brimming with molten emerald
and powdered pearl
The sea rages on forever,
like the forsaken souls trapped beneath
her storm-stricken troubled waters
She sings her haunting song,
full of bitter lament; tears dripping,
salting herself for what could have been
She softens jagged seaglass,
rounder; soothing seething anger
and easing broken edges
Her waves caress you softly; her beautiful colours
shining, welcoming sailors home and
saving those thought lost to society
For she welcomes all;
the sirens, the selkis,
the mer-people, all manner of marine-life;
And now she reaches forth to you,
her ever-glorious loveliness calling;
Will you take her hand, return to your roots of the sea?
Or will you tear away, sentencing yourself
to alone agonize
for all eternity?
(December 3, 2020 - 12:51 pm)
A Poem Made Up On The Spot
by Honeybee
A cold frosted window
the water of a running river
running towards home
following the path
made by the stars
The stars that I see in your eyes
when you look in the sky
those stars
The ones that make you forget
the pain and past because instead
the infinite sky is a blanket
and it wraps you in
and you look back out the
frosted window
see the water of the running river
and pull on your boots
and run, like the water
I look out the
frosted window
and see you.
(December 3, 2020 - 1:15 pm)
sometime in the evening.
drunk on cheap chocolate & cider i
tip my head back. and let the tears slide down the
back of my throat, cold & salty
as i stare into the eyes of the slightly messed up & lonely
girl in the mirror. lash line a mess,
pink-rimmed and dripping sparkly white
eyeshadow-mixed rivulets.
1, 2, 3, take a breath
at least i'm kinda pretty this way.
critique appreciated! I'm not sure I like the way I split up the lines but here I am
(December 3, 2020 - 3:55 pm)
Agghhh, so angsty! (T-T)
I like it though.
(December 3, 2020 - 7:12 pm)
Oop thank you
(December 4, 2020 - 10:04 am)
"Hmm," I thought,
"if he's her friend
he must be worth
getting to know."
P. S. He wasn't.
(December 3, 2020 - 3:58 pm)