Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
Topping with a poem I wrote for English class!
I am a silent image in a sea of black voids
I don’t know anyone
No one knows me
I am an energetic face in a one-on-one FaceTime
A crying one, a laughing one, a contemplative one
Full of a warm connection that even distancing can’t break
What do they think of me?
Am I a know-it-all? A try-hard?
Desperately trying to make conversation in awkward breakout rooms?
I’m imperfect & creative & full of odd thoughts
Brainstorming story ideas and debating the meaning of life
Ranting and comforting, sending hugs through the screen
I am a silent image in a sea of black voids
I don’t know anyone
No one knows me
(September 19, 2020 - 11:07 pm)
Ooh, I really like this! It has a sort of dream-like feel to it, and the italicized parts are really cool. I think my favorite lines are I am a silent image in a sea of black voids/I don’t know anyone/No one knows me. The repition of that is really nice! Good job!
(September 20, 2020 - 2:47 pm)
Ooh, I love this one!! I defenitely can relate to that feeling. I love it when poems do that, when they find a way to express the most niche feelings and make the reader feel seen, all in a way that rolls off the tongue.
(September 22, 2020 - 1:24 pm)
Definitely, this is really well-done and strikes a deep chord with me.
It sort of seems like one of those poems that most people don't quite understand this undertone of, but draws some incredible parallels to my own experiences; but who am I to really say? It's just my darker and more personal interpretation, honestly.
(October 1, 2020 - 7:03 pm)
Ok, I just found this thread, and I gotta say: Y'all's poetry is so amazing! I absolutely love love love all of it! Also, this thread's been here for nearly 2 1/2 years!!! Good job y'all! (Sorry about all the exclamtion points ;))
Also, I wrote this poem because I was inspired by Bluebird's entry on the poetry thread about dreaming about summer (back in 2017), and I am SO looking forward to fall I just had to write a poem about it. It's not as good as hers, but I think it's good enough. Critique is totally welcome!
Autumn
I’m dreaming of autumn,
of thick wool sweaters
and tall piles of leaves.
of Thanksgiving dinner,
with stuffing
and sweet potatoes,
and classic pumpkin pie.
I’m dreaming of maple syrup
swirling and tumbling
down buttery pancakes
on a chilly morning,
and of pumpkin patches,
scattered hay bales,
and garlands of leaves.
of bundling up
in knitted scarves
and fur-lined boots.
I’m dreaming of pumpkin spice,
of hot chocolate
with whipped cream,
of pumpkin bread,
light and fluffy,
spiced like apple cider.
of nippy air
and chilly breezes
that make you snuggle down
into your sweater.
I’m dreaming of leaves like fireworks,
of being able to say
“Fall is in the air,” and
“Leaves are falling,
pumpkin spice is calling.”
I’m dreaming of autumn.
(September 20, 2020 - 2:42 pm)
Bottles of nothingness,
ink, marbles, and sand.
And icy band clinging to the
ring-finger of my left hand.
Silent candles casting
sombre golden glow, as if mourning
my death, though I'm standing
right in front of them,
Trophies and certificates,
with no real meaning:
hollowness consuming,
darkness seeping
through each and every
one of their cracks and niches.
I hate this house,
it's beveled stain-glass;
I hate these wide, emtpy rooms,
Filled to the brim, but still,
truly just empty.
I hate those people,
the ones who "pity" me,
but also the ones
who wish they could switch
places with me.
There's no point in whining
over what you don't have,
nor is there any room for
wishful thinking and "what if"s.
For this is what
life has handed us,
so take it,
hatered,
and
boredom,
and
weariness aside.
For this time around,
at least,
see just how much
you really do have.
It will never quite
be the same
again.
(September 21, 2020 - 3:30 pm)
This is really good, the theme is very true! I should get back into poetry/songwriting.
(September 21, 2020 - 5:57 pm)
am
I
Alone?
What i hate to do still i will
Hope for my futures gone
every day just the same.
Emotions got the best of me.
I'm not allowed to sing
I'm
not
alone
What i hate to do i fight
my future wil be all right
every day is a different chance
i'm master of my emotions
all that i can do is sing
(September 22, 2020 - 10:02 am)
Well, I have to make bad ones first in order to make good ones, right? Lol I like this theme though.
The glowing fire
The orange, the light.
The fireball, so bright.
And when thinking of the sun,
We think of
The light in the sun.
But…unknown yet is
The dark in the sun
Yes, the dark in sun.
Believe it or not there is dark in the sun
The shadow in the sun,
The mystery of the sun,
We never think of
The dark in the sun,
Like the dark of our hearts
Is unknown to others,
The dark of the sun.
And a star one! I totally didn't search what ryhmes with shine and choose the coolest word though it might not make sense, what are you talking about? *sweats profusely*
Stars fall
Down the starwall
Of the sky
Stars fly
While they sparkle and shine
Last line option 1: Stars are semidivine
Last line option 2(makes even less sense): Memories of stars, langsyne.
(September 22, 2020 - 11:36 am)
Ooh I really like these! The insight in the sun poem is beautiful. For the ending of the star poem, I think you could change the last two lines to They sparkle and shine/Memories langsyne. I just thought that shortening the lines might fit better with the rythym of the rest of the poem??? I don't know, you can do what you want. :)
(September 22, 2020 - 5:23 pm)
Echo
~~~~~~
They say practice makes perfect
perfect
Repeat, repeat
repeat
The same thing over and over
and over
Echo, echo
echo
(September 22, 2020 - 4:55 pm)
If i'm being honest my contribution was less of a poem and more of "The voices in my head arguing politics at 3:00 AM
(September 23, 2020 - 8:44 am)
(September 27, 2020 - 8:56 am)
To the TOP!!!
(September 28, 2020 - 2:04 pm)
This is a poem inspired by the twin tower massacre thing
I let you go..why?
I blame myself for everything
for your death
for your unhappiness
for your love who died with you
At least I can know
You are happy up there
In the stars.
And this is another sad poem that has no inspiration
The sea is dark once more
except
you aren't here with me
I still remember your dark hair
and the ocean reminds me of it
You were an ocean girl
and you will live forever in the ocean
Your stormy eyes, I pictured as the crashing waves
Your dark hair, I pictured as the flowing kelp
Your pale white skin, I imagined as the white rocks
Your sandy scarf, I remembered as the sand
I will never forget you.
The ocean will help me remember.
Another sad poem (wow I think of a lot of sad poems)
Spring is here
but I cannot enjoy it
There is so much to be done
without you
Your sparkling eyes, your light laugh
I knew it would be impossible
Instead I sit there
Waiting
For you to come back to me.
(September 28, 2020 - 11:18 pm)