Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
Chilled dull grey
Streaking blackened waters;
A lucid dream,
a dreary day.
Graceful wisps of mist rise
Like smoke from a blaze
Or souls released from
their former resting place,
Once tethered to the depths,
Now set free to dance away
By my gleaming eyes
and charmed gaze.
(August 21, 2020 - 12:29 pm)
They ask me why
I turn all I touch
To ash and dust;
They wonder why I
Leap at a gust,
Lash out at flick,
And lick wood down to a barren bone.
You watch on in horror as I blaze
across the land, charring and broiling
As I see fit;
But that is because I am free --
Fire is free. --
To burn as it pleases,
To blister and incinerate
and devour the world,
If it so wishes.
So when given the chance,
'tis only natural I do the same;
After all, I am
but a simple
flame.
(August 21, 2020 - 2:40 pm)
You're poems have such a great rhythm Jaybells
(August 22, 2020 - 12:19 pm)
Thank you!
(August 23, 2020 - 1:55 pm)
Going with a poetry name now, I actually really like this free verse poetry thing! <3
Dancer
Tiptoes, ballet shoes, twirl in that tutu, be everything a little girl wants to be
Stumble, right yourself, don't fall, you cant disappoint
These shoes are too tight, they pinch at your feet, but you must keep going
Keep dancing, little bird, spread your wings and take flight
There's so many troubles but you’ll make it through the show
Don't worry, little bird, just an hour to go
Keep dancing, little bird, spread your wings and take flight
The stage is too slippery, you feel like you’re falling, but you must keep going
Keep that bright smile on, curtsy, promenade, you cant disappoint
Tiptoes, ballet shoes, twirl in that tutu, be everything a little girl wants to be
(August 22, 2020 - 2:24 pm)
I think I like this better than the other one! It's kind of... bittersweet, if ya know what I mean.
(August 22, 2020 - 3:34 pm)
Yikes, as someone who was trained up from the age of four to become a professional ballerina, this is so relatable; and especially the part about having to be perfect, having to plaster on smile all the time, and persevere constantly, it just hits hard.
Even though I'm not entirely sure that this is what was intended, this feels almost stifling, personally. It still retains that sort of glossy, perfessional, song-like appearance though.
Haha, sorry, that's a sorta weird description, it's just a tad difficult to put into words.
(August 23, 2020 - 2:02 pm)
Eek, sorry I did this in the wrong place, can you just delete it?
(August 23, 2020 - 1:53 pm)
Twirl, twirl, twirl;
Just a bit longer.
Spin, spin, spin;
Smile! Not so sombre.
Smooth movements.
Don't just jerk about,
like the puppet
you are,
Make your every move shout!
With an empty smile plastered--
Carved-- into your very being,
Make it shine! Not so dull.
Let life dance in your eyes!
Just like your feet about the stage.
Nevermind the strings that hold you up,
Nevermind your aching feet,
You must be better.
More.
Faster.
Each time;
Spin, spin, spin.
Now twirl, point, and leap.
Not another mistake, or
The Puppeteer your soul
shall keep.
(August 23, 2020 - 2:20 pm)
HeroesOfPoetry, this was heavily inspired by your earlier poem!
I was initially going for an even creepier vibe, but... yeah, I wrote it on the spot, so it's not quite there yet.
(August 23, 2020 - 3:20 pm)
(August 25, 2020 - 12:41 pm)
I'll save you,
soon
you'll be free,
just
like them, just like me;
Oh, but Darling,
don't
you see, nothing
can
be resolved quite so easily;
Soon we'll be
Off,
Far, far, away
There
is where we'll be happy-- just you see;
Oh, but Darling,
don't
you know, nowhere
is
far enough for them, they'll find me;
I shall find the bravest,
it is
then we will find
peace
at last, all chaos shall cease;
Oh, but Darling,
haven't
you yet learned, no one
is
truly trustworthy here, neither of the lands nor seas;
(August 24, 2020 - 4:28 am)
It was a perfect day,
a perfect night,
before that thing,
came to give me a fright.
When vertex form came to haunt me.
It crept onto my page,
let out a howl.
How I jumped then!
And oh how it growled!
When vertex form came to haunt me.
Parabolas I thought
I knew so well
when came that beast,
of which to you I tell.
It was the night vertex form came to haunt me.
(August 25, 2020 - 9:55 am)
OOh, that one's relatable! You always seem to have interesting ideas, especially for poems.
(August 25, 2020 - 6:15 pm)
That's hilarious! At first it seemed kind of dark until I realized what was happening xD
(August 27, 2020 - 11:57 am)