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Regular poetry thread

Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)

This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!

submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)

i think my worries are the holes in the ceiling

that peek through to the abyss

growing, ever-growing; black hole opens in the drywall and

sucks away my soul

my sleep paralysis demon is a region of spacetime-

but i suppose i’m too much of a coward to help myself even when

everyone says my solution is a phd in psychology

that sits on a brown leather couch and fake-smiles

but it’s okay, because it’s a collaboration. and it’s for me.

and really, i always wanted to be interrogated about my life,

how did you know?

and it’s funny, because you don’t.

you love a cardboard cutout of my sanity, of what’s safe and

i’m so fricking tired of being safe

(and you’re so fricking tired of me)

and can’t we please just pretend you care? can’t we pretend you listen?

so that someday when you actually do,

it might not be too late?

before this endless vacuum of space seeps in through the cracks,

before i suffocate from the duct tape wrapped around my ribs,

before someone else realizes

that cardboard can’t hold up a roof.

can’t you just pretend to love me?

submitted by Woodwind
(October 2, 2024 - 11:20 pm)

I'm sorry :(

*hugs*

Sadly very relatable... 

submitted by Jaybells@Woodwind, Lost, somewhere
(October 4, 2024 - 1:08 am)

ahh thanks Jay. I'm sorry it's relatable...

submitted by Woodwind
(October 4, 2024 - 2:57 pm)

You say I'm a diamond in the rough

Like the one on the band on your ring finger

I laugh because carved glass must look so similar 

To an untrained eye, 

One of the most durable and most fragile materials look like the same thing

At a first glance

But who ever gives more than that first cursory glance?

I know, not many, that's the only reason I've made it this far.

You say my heart is made of diamond,

So strong, so fierce and that I make you feel safe

I wonder how you'll feel when you realise it's actually glass

Just like I've been trying to tell you all this time.

submitted by Jaybells, Lost, somewhere
(October 8, 2024 - 4:21 pm)

we think we believe in

clocks until

time is tripping

through our fingers  

no numbers can explain

why the world pauses in

its rotation to watch her

knee brush mine

why minutes crumble beneath

my feet like dried leaves

as the countdown begins

don't put a limit on my ending

it will duck away

slippery like soap and seconds 

like the curl of her lips

picture a grasshopper 

a ladybug

let the finale evade our grasp

flit from our hands

it's sweeter that way 

when it taps me on the shoulder

I'll only think to stare into its eyes 

rather than hers.  

submitted by peppermint
(October 8, 2024 - 9:57 pm)

It’s written in the stars,

Our fates

They say

And when I look into that speckled void

Disaster is what I see:


A shattered heart, a broken wing

A pair of crumbling souls no longer able to sing.

I am the bull, and you the twins

Though it should be reverse, the truth remains that no one wins.

Easily frightened and flighty,

Full of passion and motion, thrill, fear, and anxiety 

Fluid, flirty, ever on the move

Projecting warmth, but ever-afraid of finding true love 

Is me.

Meanwhile you are strength, fortitude

A solid castle, the fort to be sought when trouble’s brewed 

A stalwart, gentle king you are

Always willing to search the land for your love, wide and far

You're free 

From the monsters that tear me up inside, 

You'll never quite understand, although kind

I am utterly undeserving of your affection 

Of your mirth, your love, your attention.

 

I stumble

Where you stand strong

And I fear we'll never last for long.

~~~~~

I wrote this earlier this week, but didn't post because it didn't feel finished. :/  I just added the last stanza to make it fit with the theme of "stumble" for the poetry contest, and I guess I kinda wraps up better?

submitted by Jaybells, Lost in the Underworld
(October 11, 2024 - 5:19 pm)

sometimes i wonder how i will make it through the next 3 years

1064 more family dinners

12 more haircuts and the 60 days of crying it’ll take to set them up,

plus asking 360 times to even have that conversation

believing there’s something wrong with me for 1532160 more minutes,

wishing i was someone else for what feels like ∞

living as myself for 0 if i’m still too much of a coward

in the 91929600 seconds i have to decide

waking up 1063 more times

if i’m lucky

and i’m so, so lucky

to have the time to know i have no right to feel bad for over 25536 more hours before

saying goodbye 1 time and for all

and then i will be my own person and

really, nothing will change. and i shouldn’t even hope,

for what is the point of getting through every one of those

1064 days 25536 hours 1532160 minutes 91929600 seconds

if i’ll keep counting afterward?

i don’t know.

but i guess at the end i can look back and wonder

why i didn’t treasure my time more,

why i bother being depressed when the sun is shining,

and why i’m so broken.

fractured into countless shards and i sit here, trying to pick up the pieces,

labeling each one oh-so-carefully

as if some part of me actually mattered.

1, 2, 3, 4…

submitted by Woodwind
(October 15, 2024 - 4:27 pm)

I'm sorry that it's like this, but it makes for a powerful poem. The obsession with countdowns and counting and waiting for a time that will not be what you think it is is very potent and relatable, I find personally.

submitted by Jaybells, Lost in the Underworld
(October 17, 2024 - 6:23 am)

I know what Euridice meant 

When she said all she wanted was to fall asleep,

Close her eyes and disappear like a petal on a stream,

A feather on the air

I know what Euridice meant about the cold

It hurts so much

So gods darn much

And tires you out in a way that you can feel the life draining from you

Like you're already one foot in the Underworld

But the Bright ones keep trying to pull you back

And it's hard not to resent them

For being so bright

For hurting you so by thawing your fingers with kisses

Before letting them freeze all over again.

They don't understand what it's like to be hungry 

To be out all alone in the cold.

But it's also so hard not to fall in love with their radiance

With that sweet, biting warmth of hope.

It hurts so much when you're let into the light

But it only gets better

So tantalisingly much better

Until you remember that Night falls at the end of every day

And it's your turn to be Persephone

Returning to your own personal Hadestown, Sisyphean

A place that's yours, but you've grown to hate

For it becomes a smothering heat,

A mechanical, fossil-fueled light

And you know that soon it'll end,

The winds will blow once more

And you'll be back into the cold

The anticipation is so thick that you almost want the cold,

Just for the aching wait to end;

For your love is busy

Composing his song to save the world

A world he knows so little of

And you are on your own, all alone

Because trust is such a fragile, brittle thing.

When it comes down to it he’ll look back, wondering

And you don't have time for that

Because in your world, the past has already passed

And you have to start walking,

There's no looking back.

submitted by Jaybells, Lost in the Underworld
(October 16, 2024 - 1:50 pm)

mood. wow! this metaphor is amazing. ahhh Jayyyy I'm sorry *hugs*

submitted by Woodwind
(October 16, 2024 - 5:06 pm)

I'm sorry this is a mood, but thank you for the compliments.

Much of it is very physical for me, so I feel you overpraise, though; like, the cold is very real to me, and so are Euridice's feelings, and so is the warmth that comes with the Bright ones, and the feeling of abandonment and ruthlessness when you realise that you're not the centre of their world the way they are yours (they are the one and only sun, and you are just another shadow they cast, despite what they might say), so you'll just have to move on like everything's fine when everything is so far from it. 

submitted by Jaybells, Lost in the Underworld
(October 17, 2024 - 6:31 am)

RYHME, HAIKU, RYHME

Determind to make
This haiku ryhme, no matter,
Whatever, it take
HAHA I did it
Didn’t take that long at all
‘Cause I’m very fit
Fit at poetry
That is, ryhming’s my game, bro
Growing like a tree
Am I good, or what?
Five seven five, do a jive
Think I’ll make the cut
To end this awesome
Rhyme time haiku, tell me I’m
The haiku possum :D 
submitted by Hawkstar
(October 17, 2024 - 10:27 am)

You're the haiku possum!!! :D

submitted by Jaybells, Lost in a Mushroom Forest
(October 17, 2024 - 4:17 pm)

-Half full, half empty

Trapped like bubbles in amber
No where to go
Placed under a 
Microscope
Always studied
Scrutinized
Just want to live life
Drowning with the crowd
One in a million is no longer special
Masks make faces alike 
Identities missing when you can’t show
Exactly what you’d like
Stiff in uniform
Clones in the making
Creativity is stolen
All the originals are gone
And no one has the brain
To think up more
A beat is pounded
Headphones on
Scream the lyrics
Dance it out on the streets
Closing eyes so sight can’t see
Feelings take up to much room
Emotions are overated
Do this
Do that
Only one thing is right
One thing
There can’t possibly be more than one way to do it
Not that anyone will let others try
Make mistakes 
Only then can they be fixed
Gotta let people off the leash
Can’t always lead others
They need to think on their own
And that way can’t be dragged
Everywhere they don’t want to be
Screaming
Crying
Wrecking
Shout
Remember that the ancient oak
Was grown over centeries
From an acorn small
Rebel small
Make it big
Mighty cliffs crumble
Against relentless waves
A flower can grow in barren lands
If it has stubborness
Overflow the cup
Flood the city
What do you think
Half full
Or half empty 
submitted by Hawkstar
(October 17, 2024 - 10:28 am)

Idk why but my first thought was that this would be a rad Kpop concept. Very teen energy (that's a good thing in this context).

submitted by Jaybells, Lost, somewhere
(October 17, 2024 - 4:23 pm)