Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
The first time I wrote this, it was way better and slightly less dark, but I think I pressed the wrong button and it got reset. So we get this mess instead:
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I stand at the edge of the water
Terrified
Yet mesmerised
By what lies underneath
No one's left to see or speak
Just silence here
And the gentle lapping of those dark waves
Mere centimetres away from my feet
I stare, thoughts and logic whisked away
By those cold ebbs and currents
They lick at a toe, then crawl up to my heels
My ankles tickle as the water starts to glisten
Lit by a peaking sun rising through the sky
Dawn breaks but it's too late
Legs are slowly swallowed up
Shoulders disappeared
It hurts to breath
But mouth stays shut
There's no to hear me anyway
(May 19, 2021 - 1:39 pm)
storybook friends
(May 19, 2021 - 3:09 pm)
Why is it that the morning star
Gets all the clout, captures so much attention?
Are not all stars beautiful?
Why must we elevate one to highest,
Brightest, most beautiful?
Before snatching them from the sky?
Just because he shines the brightest,
Wasn't he just born that way?
What did he do to deserve
Such attention or scrutiny, for that matter?
Why can't we appreciate all the stars,
For existing and shining bright;
Yet still be wary of elevating some
Above the others, as to love them all, equally?
(May 19, 2021 - 11:03 pm)
*dons beret and grabs notebook* This began as a childish acrostic poem, and ended as a professional masterpeice. Enjoy this amazing work of art.
Strawberries: an acrostic poem with an excess of parentheses
Sweet (yep)
Tart (sometimes)
Red (or pink)
Awesome (depending on your tastes)
White (on the inside)
Berry (jk not really)
Excellent (see “A”)
Rad (um… yeah)
Radish (the colors are the same? also I’m out of ideas)
Yum (for me at least)
(May 20, 2021 - 12:45 pm)
Always following the rules,
Trying to keep my giraffe head down;
I don't want to be special--
That's simply not me;
Let your hollow words of "genius"
"Prodigy" "Intresting kid" fall away
And look at the real me;
I'm just a house of cards
Built up pretty for everyone to see;
It may look cool on the outside
But it's all empty air on the inside;
At the slightest breeze you'll see
I'm not what you think I seem to be.
I'm just an unstable kid,
Nothing outside of troubled
Mediocrity.
(May 21, 2021 - 12:50 am)
Is this the Middle?
This unbearable waiting?
The featureless expanse
that binds me;
Regardless the size of the
steps I take,
The speed at which I take
them.
This agonizing place of limbo,
is this the Middle?
(May 21, 2021 - 2:14 pm)
I think I've been on this thread, like, once, but I recently did a poetry portfolio project (hehe alliteration) for schoola and i suppose I'll share some of mine.
This first one isn't actually part of the portfolio, I just wrote it in like 1 minute. The backstory is I had just sent my friend a video of my dog attempting to eat a firefly.
fly high in the sky, my little firefly,
glow bright among the stars and know
that down here on the ground,
a person and dog are standing by
for when you at last come down.
(May 23, 2021 - 8:42 pm)
I feel
As if I'm slowly dying
Fading
Life force sapped away
By all
These responsibilities
I don't think
I can continue on any farther
With only greys
To furnish my world
I see the grass
Swaying in a sour wind
Carrying ashes
In its foul, sad notes
With darkness creeping
Dark clouds hang deep
And all the lines blend
Would it help if I weren't alone?
(May 23, 2021 - 10:36 pm)
Movement
~~~~~
I adore movement.
Whether it be sitting shotgun
And watching the world dash by,
Or pumping my ballerina legs
And feeling my surroundings swim
To and fro' as I swing.
I love the feeling of muscles and warmth
Beneath me, as hooves drum out their familiar beat;
I run for the rush of wind and scenery,
And can't get enough of falling, tumbling through space.
I only feel disappointment when
The car stops
The pirouette draws to a close
Recess ends and class resumes,
The ride is over,
The song has ended,
The world crashes to a halt as I land.
And again I long for the world to return to its bristling
So I can escape to a world where nothing really matters;
Because there everything moves too quick to matter.
(May 23, 2021 - 11:17 pm)
I- How, its so good! I love it, its so true. <3
(May 24, 2021 - 3:21 pm)
At the top of it all, I stand.
But it seems like something less than I'd expected.
Mountains overseeing the world always looked so short;
Once you've to stood atop the summit,
Seeing the others that climb up about you sides.
The world felt so large, yet at the same time underwhelming.
I suppose my expectations were too much.
And when you see the top of the world of people
Things are no different, you've fought you way up a hierarchy of citizens,
You'll see the same: Disappointment.
Things are dirtier than their glittering gilded front, and you wonder why
You stepped atop so many others, just to get to this mess of a peak.
What was it all for? Who said they were fit for the job? Where are my answers?
Alas, I haven't any yet.
No prize for my lofty anticipations.
I wonder if it's something wrong with me;
Maybe I'm too young.
Maybe I just think too small,
Can't see or comprehend the big-picture.
But sometimes I wonder if those high-up, unachievable things
Just aren't all they're cracked out to be...
Maybe.
(May 25, 2021 - 8:21 pm)
stars fall and so do i
into glimmering seas
of purples and blues
and darks and lights
but mostly darks 'cause
night swallowed us all
but that doesn't matter
because colours spill
inside by head far from
the cold water and fallen stars
that sit, rippled by waves
all of it is magical
in a beautiful sad
broken way that
makes me want to cry
and laugh and gawk
but i do nothing
because im still falling
and nothing matters yet
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I tried out a little bit of a different style. What do you think?
(May 26, 2021 - 9:44 pm)
I love it.
(May 27, 2021 - 12:11 pm)
What's the difference
between suffocating and drowning?
What do you mean
when you insist I hold on?
Since when has it been
any of your business
whether I float or sink down?
Do you really think it's my fault I let go?
That I had a choice between falling or not?
Why do you assume I have a net,
a web of support just because some people do?
How can you blame me for stilling my limbs,
When my muscles ache, my heart feels like it'll burst
And it hurts so darn much to breath.
I have nothing.
I'm not in a position I ever will gain more.
You would never
understand.
Am I selfish?
Yes.
Am I a cynic?
Sure.
Am I alone?
Of course.
But you're different,
So what could you
Possibly ever
understand?
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This is my mental response to something I saw. I didn't start it, and wasn't actually involved, but I can definitely relate to how I imagine the other person felt. It's sort of like things you wish you'd said but never got the proper chance too, plus it would've made you sound sort of terrible anyway?
(May 26, 2021 - 10:36 pm)
this physically/emotionally/mentally hurt me to read. but kind of in a good way? my entire self was flinching away from it because it's putting all the things i don't want to accept right there in my face.
it's a really good poem.
i am such a mess right now. i'm not going to write out all the ways this hit me or all the ways this hurt because it's going to turn into me just talking about why i hate myself which is honestly unhealthy for everyone because i do not want to be dragged into the depths of guilt again.
but just know this was a beautiful poem and it hit me extremely hard and thank you for it.
(May 27, 2021 - 12:36 pm)