New poetry competition!
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New poetry competition!
New poetry competition!
It's really just continuing the last one, but I don't think a whole lot of people are checking that thread anymore. So here goes--
The new theme is music! You can write about how music makes you feel, or what it is. You can write about a musical instrument, or playing in part of an ensemble... or Hamilton...
Anyway, be creative, and have fun!
(I will be judging on Wednesday the nineteenth of October, so please have them submitted before then :)
submitted by Shoshannah Lily, Deep in a book
(October 12, 2016 - 5:09 pm)
(October 12, 2016 - 5:09 pm)
To Whatever End
~
The war is over
and there is a silence.
A quiet,
a resting-peace,
an exhale
of long-held breath.
The sky still smells
(slightly)
of smoke
but it's clearing
and the scents of the forest
are beginning to return.
They're standing on the porch.
Side-by-side,
not touching,
not talking
side-by-side, but very alone.
"We won," he says
and his voice cracks.
"I didn't think we would," she replies
turning to look at him,
at the arching curve of his jaw,
shilouetted
in the setting sunlight.
He still stands, gaze fixated
at the sky,
unmoving
but for his fingers tapping
one - two - three,
one - two - three,
on the splintery porch-railing:
"Was it worth it?"
He finally glances at her,
searching her face—
the cupid's-bow arch of her lips,
the smooth upturn of her nose,
her eyes like pools of liquid chocolate—
for reaction.
She stares back up at him,
mouth slightly open,
because he looks so different
than she's ever seen him,
vulnerable, unsure.
And her eyes drop
to their hands,
dangling
by their respective sides
inches apart,
miles away.
"I don't know."
She isn't looking at him
but she can hear the slow
long sigh
as he exhales.
He's tired.
He's so tired, so broken.
How hasn't she seen, before?
Before, before?
Before the war, when his left cheek was smooth,
absent of that hairline-thin, jagged scar
that he hides under hoodies?
Before, when he grinned lopsided at her,
so brave, so handsome, so freaking beautiful and stupid?
Before, when she was afraid they would lose,
he'd grab her shoulders,
pull her close,
so she could hear the quiet,
mingling thumps
of their hearts
and he would whisper,
"We will not lose.
We will go
to whatever end."
And he did— they did —and because, because,
the war is over.
And there is a silence.
And he is tired,
and she is scared.
They have won,
but she fears
she may
have
lost
him.
~~
(November 26, 2016 - 11:05 pm)
This is so good, Abigail!! Oh my goodness! So sad too!
(November 27, 2016 - 12:04 pm)
Thank you ^^
(November 27, 2016 - 9:08 pm)
Mine's not as good as any of these others, and maybe a little darker too, but I still wanted to enter it. I can write a new one if it's no okay, Admins.
To Whatever End, Whatever Cost
With nary a sight but the black wing of a crow
Sweeping over a battlefield, speckled with snow
I trudge onwards, hearing my breath rasp out with claws
That tear at me, sharp as steel
I force them to fall away.
Not today. Not today.
There--there! There!
Rage fuels my body, burning embers of pure hate
My limbs, stiffened by an icy cold, find power,
the will to go on.
With each footstep I sink into the snow
And with each step another tear gathers in the corner of my eye
Slipping down my frozen skin to softly indent the field below me
I ache,
I am weary,
Exhaustion drags at me like dark, lapping waves
Yet I find the strength to go on
But for what, I don’t know…
Somewhere, he is here.
I stare out across the war-ravaged field,
eyes tired and dripping with exhaustion
A choked scream escapes my throat
A pent-up cry of fear at what I will find
But I must search…
I must…
I…
To whatever end, I must go on…
(November 29, 2016 - 10:34 pm)
Well, okay then. This poem is a little... odd, but... We'll see where it goes.
---
Living in an hourglass
Feeling the everlasting, unstoppable rush of the sand as
Time
Ticks by.
We are in a world where every human face
Morphs and bends daily into a
Clock.
Where every second word we let slip from our lips is
Late
Early
In a hurry.
Time.
We think we rule our lives, that we are kings
But somewhere in the background a
Puppeteer stands, laughing at our
Naivete. Because he knows we are
Powerless.
He lets us play a game, pretending, like toddlers, that
We are the masters of our future
We can do anything.
But he knows he controls us in every move
Because we are the prisoners of
Time’s
Grasp. The prisoners of
Our own invention.
We fly helplessly onward, looking forward to
Things that we may never reach, looking back to
Things we can never come back to.
Our jail cell is invisible, yet invincible.
He ties us don with hour as ropes
Gaggs us with minutes
Blindfolds us with seconds
And the watches our daily struggle with the
Triumphant smile of a
Malicious overlord.
Once in awhile, he gifts us free
Time
And the laughs in his sleeve at the irony
As we choke greedily on the poisonous delicacy.
Free, he calls it, yet at what a price it comes!
Mixed in and bittered up with guilt and longing
And, as everything in our life,
Timed.
Because as much as we like to pretend we live in
Blissful ignorance
We know, deep in our hearts that every made us
Second
Every imaginary
Hour
Keeps sending us inevitably closer
Towards Whatever’s end.
(November 30, 2016 - 12:39 am)
Wow, Booksy Owly! I love your writing style and your topic is so creative!
~Poetic Panda
(December 7, 2016 - 4:22 pm)
Rampion and Jacob (Otherwise known as Rapunzel and Jacob)
Falling, You're falling.
I see you. As do I.
Watch as we are torn apart.
Wordless scream.
Pain,
Heart shattered.
That I will endure,
for you.
No, don't!
Never to see that light you showed me again.
I love you.
Don't leave me.
Silence answers.
Mother killed you.
I'm here.
But I don't see you.
I'll find you.
You'd better.
No matter
Whatever Whatever
Happens.
I will find you.
As will I.
I love you. I know.
(November 30, 2016 - 10:51 am)
Argh! It got all messed up! Here, I'll retry. This poem is supposed to be spoken by two people.
(Jacob) (Rampion)
Falling,
You're falling.
I see you.
As do I.
Watch as we are torn apart.
Wordless scream.
Pain,
Heart shattered.
That I will endure,
for you.
No, don't!
Never to see that light you showed me again.
I love you.
Don't leave me.
Silence answers.
Mother killed you.
I'm here.
But I don't see you.
I'll find you.
You'd better.
No matter
Whatever Whatever
Happens.
I will find you.
As will I.
I love you.
I know.
(December 1, 2016 - 12:46 pm)
Argh! I can't fix it! I'll try later.
(December 1, 2016 - 7:24 pm)
Whoa, these are all amazing, guys! Top!
(December 3, 2016 - 4:13 pm)
Wow. Can I ust say that you all are amazing, and that Aelin is going to have an extremely hard time judging this? I mean, honestly! These poems are all so spectacular and moving. And I'm not just saying that to be nice. :)
(December 5, 2016 - 9:19 pm)
Aw, thanks, Kestrel! I know my poem hadn't been submitted yet but I love and admire your kindness! :) Anyway, here's my poem! Enjoy!
They ride their bikes
The cool air rushing in their faces
The forested mountain path
Reviving their crushed spirits
She grins
She looks at him
She takes her hand
Off the handles
Cheering
He gasps
No!
But he is too late
She crashes
Her limbs
Splayed out
He cries her name
She does not answer
He looks down the mountain path
He can almost see the rose-laden gazebo
Where he would have proposed
Now it will never be
The wooded path seems to continue on
To whatever end
His tears seem to stream
To whatever end
In his heart
He knows
She will be with him
To whatever end.
~Poetic Panda
(December 6, 2016 - 6:33 pm)
oh no, I might cry. This is so terribly good and sad!
(December 7, 2016 - 8:32 am)
Oh my goodness, that was so sad! It reminds me of something I read in a Blue Marble issue titled Paralysis. You should look it up (google Blue Marble and then search Paralysis on their website). Your writing style and plot for that peice is really similar. That particular story is completely appropriate.
(December 7, 2016 - 8:34 am)
@Leeli, awww, thanks! Honestly, the poem was going to be a lot happier before its mood turned so sad. XD
@Rose bud, I'm so glad you liked the poem! Blue Marble looks cool! I've never heard of it before now but I'm checking out Paralysis!
~Poetic Panda
P.S. Firefox says ozar. Hmmm...Sounds like either Ozark or some brand name. XD
(December 7, 2016 - 4:26 pm)