New poetry competition!
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New poetry competition!
New poetry competition!
It's really just continuing the last one, but I don't think a whole lot of people are checking that thread anymore. So here goes--
The new theme is music! You can write about how music makes you feel, or what it is. You can write about a musical instrument, or playing in part of an ensemble... or Hamilton...
Anyway, be creative, and have fun!
(I will be judging on Wednesday the nineteenth of October, so please have them submitted before then :)
submitted by Shoshannah Lily, Deep in a book
(October 12, 2016 - 5:09 pm)
(October 12, 2016 - 5:09 pm)
Here's mine! This is kind of a story as well- really long, sorry!
The Red Piano
a little girl, dressed in white
looks through the window
and sees a sight
drums and guitars fill the room
but in the middle of it all
resting in the gloom
the red piano.
her
piano.
polished, shining,
simply good
made of darkened cherry wood
the lucious color of old red wine
full of sharp angles
and scratched out lines
she swore to herself
I'll buy it someday
I'll get money somehow, anyway,
there're more important thing in life
than money, right?
right.
~~~~~
a growing girl, dressed in gray
hoodie torn, pants starting to fray
her father had left last Saturday
he hadn't come back
it'd been six days
her piano sat under dull store lights
ready to play
ready to delight
her finger tapped the C sharp key
the shopkeeper screamed,
"get out! go! leave!
the sign says no touching,
can't you read?
you're always aroung here
just leave me be!"
so she left the store with a frown on her face
her red piano would have
to
wait.
~~~~~
a teenage girl, dressed in black
slouching over, like a hunchback
weighed down by her old backpack
filled with homework
and things she lacked
her red piano still stood tall
through the years
through it all
standing outide in the cold rainfall
she longed to play it
after all
it was hers.
she watched it since she was young
she wanted it so much that her heart stung
she counted her money
not enough
why did I ever think i'd get enough stuff
to make and sell and earn and pay
life is hard when your father's away
but she stayed strong
through the pain and the strife
the music, the music, had saved her life
when she left this small town
and moved far away
she'd come back to buy her piano
someday.
~~~~
a grown-up woman, dressed in blue
a smile on her face
looking through
the window she'd looked through all her life
seeing the piano
that kept her alive
money in hand
walking into the store
keeping her promise, she swore, she swore,
she swore on her life
and now she was here
she could almost hear the music in her ears
"you know what I'm here for
I'll take it home."
she knew in that moment just where it belonged
with her
for her
and her children to play
the red piano was loved that day.
(October 16, 2016 - 4:37 pm)
A Daft kind of Punk
Woah!
Hands in the Air!
Human after all
We are
Buyin’ it
Breakin’ It
Fixin’ It
After All
And remember:
Lose yourself to dance
ANd stay up all night to get- ohh
Up all night to get- owhhh
Up all night to get lucky; get lucky
And one more time…
Wait, don’t stop the dancin’- one more time
We’re gonna celebrate
Oh yea, alright; don’t stop the dancin’
Now, stop the music and go home; I repeat, stop the music and go home
Booooooo!
Hey! Ya ready? Hey! You ready now?
Yea!
Enter the Grid, a digital frontier
Try and picture info as it moves through the computer;
Is it ships, or cars, or MOTORCYCLES
Begin dreaming of this world, which you will never meet…
Untill…
Aerodynamite!!!!! Boom
Rock like a Robot
Even though you are Human After All
‘Cause this is the Prime Time of your Life!!!
Watch out for the Steam Machine, and the blips and beeps that come with it
Fly through the GRid
After all, it is the digital frontier
And after all, Superheroes, somethin's in the air…
And don’t let anyone slow you down.
Run ‘til you’re Derezzed
After all, you’re only in a video game…
Meet the Son of Flynn, he’s your boss
The future is here
This is the Prime Time of your Life, don’t waste it
ANd this may only be a Daft kind of Punk, but hey: Get Lucky!!
(October 16, 2016 - 7:29 pm)
If I win or get placed, someone can NanoMail me about it!
~~~
It sits in its case, a tool of wonder,
A magical thing made of wood.
Infinite possibilities of music and delight
Of joy, of laughter, of song.
With a breath of air, notes can come out
Notes that can make you laugh or cry
Or dance
Or sing
Or smile
Or sleep
Really, anything!
With a fingering or two, magic comes out
That is chicken soup for the ear.
Press a key (or two or three)
And you will see
It cleanses and brightens your soul.
Clarinet.
(October 16, 2016 - 8:17 pm)
Thank you for the wonderful poems, guys! Anyone else who wants to enter may do so before midnight on Tuesday. We'll have them judged by Wednesday evening.
(October 17, 2016 - 4:52 pm)
Welcome one and all to Sho's Judging (assisted by my brother, the one and only Batman!)
In third place, we have...
Rose bud with her Don't Listen poem! It's such a beautiful, haunting poem, full of emotion. We couldn't really grasp a meaning, but that isn't always necessary with poetry.
Batman says: Mermaids have feet?
In second place...
Mei! Thanks for entering the contest. I really like the sweetness of this poem, especially the line about the music being chicken soup to the ear. That somehow just... works!
Batman: Had fun guessing what this instrument was. Peace out-- I'm Batman.
(could someone message this to Mei on NaNo? Tell her I say hi!)
In first place...
Autumn Leaves! We love the way you picture things, and the way you alternate between nature and instruments is beautiful. Keep writing poetry!
Batman: Where are the violas? Violas are people too!
Me: Violas aren't people, they're instruments.
Batman: I know.
Me: Right...
Honorable mention:
Booksy and Clouded
We enjoyed everyones' poems. Autumn, you can pick the next subject.
(October 19, 2016 - 7:07 pm)
(October 20, 2016 - 1:13 pm)
I believe that Rose Bud's Don't Listen poem refrences the original tale of the Little Mermaid, in which the mermaid's tail is turned into legs for the price that with every step she takes, it will feel as though daggers or knives are stabbing her, worsening each time. Dark, but true enough.
(November 3, 2016 - 5:19 pm)
Hey, you're right! That was the original inspiration for the poem.
(November 4, 2016 - 6:27 am)
(October 20, 2016 - 9:16 am)
(October 20, 2016 - 9:16 am)
Hey guys, I'm really sorry I haven't posted today. I've been really busy with school.
On that note...... thank you so much Shoshana! I was totally not expecting to win! I checked this thread first thing this morning, to see the results, and it totally made my day!
Also, thanks Cho! I loved your poem; it was really haunting and beautiful.
Now, since I get to choose the next subject, I'm ask you to write about my favorite thing in the world: Fall. The pumpkin spice frappichinos, the boots, the leaves, the pumpkin carving, Halloween, and everything else that makes this time of year so amazing! I love fall poetry. :-)
Do I still get to enter a poem, just for the fun of it?
(October 20, 2016 - 7:36 pm)
Autumn Leaves, I was reading this and I started tearing up without realizing why. It's probably because I miss you so much!!! Your poetry is so amazing. You've grown up so much and...oh gracious, now I'm crying. Yes, just call me an emotional Nutter-butter. Well, I already had a poem on fall, but my brother recently updated the computer so now I'm all confuzzled. Ah, hear it is!
THE DEATH OF SUMMER
Fall is death in the guise of harvest.
Its tawny orange a stretching tiger
the reds a swooping pile of scarlet leaves
like scattered ashes.
The wind takes it upon herself to scour
the earth’s corners
mercilessly nagging until
the trees are bare.
(October 21, 2016 - 7:07 am)
Autumn Leaves, I was reading this and I started tearing up without realizing why. It's probably because I miss you so much!!! Your poetry is so amazing. You've grown up so much and...oh gracious, now I'm crying. Yes, just call me an emotional Nutter-butter. Well, I already had a poem on fall, but my brother recently updated the computer so now I'm all confuzzled. Ah, hear it is!
THE DEATH OF SUMMER
Fall is death in the guise of harvest.
Its tawny orange a stretching tiger
the reds a swooping pile of scarlet leaves
like scattered ashes.
The wind takes it upon herself to scour
the earth’s corners
mercilessly nagging until
the trees are bare.
(October 21, 2016 - 7:07 am)
Oh, thanks, Autumn! Also, when's the deadline?
Transformation
I run across the driveway,
boots thumping.
I'm glad it's not May.
Then I wouldn't be smiling,
nor Rey.
Staff in hand,
I glance back:
And see a rugged land.
Pull on the mask,
my transformation is complete.
(October 21, 2016 - 12:25 pm)
I don't see why you shouldn't write a poem, as long as you don't count it in the judging!
I'll write a poem later-- battery's almost dead right now...
(October 21, 2016 - 2:45 pm)