Poetry Competition III
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Poetry Competition III
Poetry Competition III
Someone, I think it was Rosebud, made the first two, and now they're dead, so I'll make a new one. I think I won that last one, so I'll post the topic. You write a poem on that topic then the winner gets to chose the next topic! And please don't let this die!
Okay, the topic is: Write about magic. Write about something magical, or some faraway magical land. Write about witches and dragons, fairies and talking animals. Write about real-life magic, or sad-cursing magic, or maybe even everyday-unnoticed magic. Write your best poem about magic, whatever you think it is!
submitted by Alexandra
(September 13, 2016 - 6:23 pm)
(September 13, 2016 - 6:23 pm)
Let's see... nature of nature... hmm... INSPIRATION STRIKE!
lol. It got a bit off topic at the end ;)
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Fall leaves change into vibrant hues
Syrup tapped from wooden taps
Coldness frosts the crystal grass dews
Branches bare and chilly ice snaps.
Spring air smelling clear and clean
Flowers budding while rains refresh
Foods are grown and sights are seen
The tiny bird within its nest.
Winter bleakness and grey skies
Fire defies ice as warmth and cool collide
Hot chocolate swirls while snowflakes fly
Snow banks hidden on all sides.
Summer weather gives its heat,
And it shares its sunny beams,
as water cools and icecreams meet
while sweet cream and cold are teamed.
(October 9, 2016 - 8:28 am)
SINKHOLE
Dirt dissolved into the mud
slowly, reveling
in the oozy, lazy wetness,
which squelched around
tall blades of grass
their tough nuts
that smelled of earth
and moistness,
reminding me
of tiny potatoes,
were too difficult to kill
so quickly
by the flooding water
that sunk and sat
in a brooding puddle
too shallow, even
for the ripples of mosquitoes
that would have skirted around
shallow edges
where a lone set of footprints
pointed towards
an abandoned
construction site;
low arches
and wooden frames
remained balefully hollow.
(October 9, 2016 - 10:45 am)
(October 10, 2016 - 10:50 am)
(October 10, 2016 - 10:50 am)
Ferdinando says "rter". Writer? That I am!
(October 10, 2016 - 10:51 am)
(October 10, 2016 - 10:51 am)
(October 10, 2016 - 10:51 am)
(October 11, 2016 - 3:01 pm)
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(October 11, 2016 - 3:02 pm)
(October 11, 2016 - 6:53 pm)
Nature... is it okay if it's a poem I'd already written for school?
If so:
A velvet black cloak
Covered the sky
With silver moon and stars awry
And, dusted in fire ember smoke
No one but the old trees spoke.
A cool night breeze
Alighted, on the lake,
Made the stillness of the water quake
And lap at tumbled rocks with ease
And make the mountains groan and wheeze.
All this the weary traveller eyed
While wandering the world
Then slowly sat on the ground and curled
Up so she could hide
From a place she’d never loved
But was unfortunately tied
And would have to return to soon
Instead of staying by the tide.
(October 11, 2016 - 7:57 pm)
In third place is...
Daisy! I really enjoyed the rhyming meter of your poem, as well as the feeling of all the seasons swirling into one endless loop.
In second place is...
Rose bud! Your poem was so mysterious and haunting, and the tall and spaced out style of it added to that feeling. I felt like it really delved into the meaning at the end, and my favorite line was "and wooden frames remained balefully hollow". There was a lot of beauty in that line.
The winner is...
Shoshanna Lily/Sterling Eclipse!
Congratulations! You won! I love how your poem ended on a question, as if the narrator is imploring with the reader about their problems. Also, the alliteration in the line "wafts withered leaves along" was a favorite of mine, because I've always like alliteration and other cool grammar. Finally, how they compare themselves to the waterfall and end it asking that because they're neither as strong as stone or calm of mind, could they ever let go of their fears?
Honorable Mentions:
Anonymous- I liked the line 'dusted in fire ember smoke', and your poem had a vivid beauty to it as well.
Cho Chang- Even though yours only had a few lines, it portrayed a lot of power and description in what there was.
(October 12, 2016 - 9:23 am)
Yayyy! Thanks so much!
I'm going to make a new thread so that it will get more attention.
(October 12, 2016 - 4:57 pm)
Thank you!! It did help that I got to witness my fourth hurricane, Hurricane Matthew.
(October 14, 2016 - 6:41 pm)