Poetry Competition III
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Poetry Competition III
Poetry Competition III
Someone, I think it was Rosebud, made the first two, and now they're dead, so I'll make a new one. I think I won that last one, so I'll post the topic. You write a poem on that topic then the winner gets to chose the next topic! And please don't let this die!
Okay, the topic is: Write about magic. Write about something magical, or some faraway magical land. Write about witches and dragons, fairies and talking animals. Write about real-life magic, or sad-cursing magic, or maybe even everyday-unnoticed magic. Write your best poem about magic, whatever you think it is!
submitted by Alexandra
(September 13, 2016 - 6:23 pm)
(September 13, 2016 - 6:23 pm)
Okay!
(September 14, 2016 - 10:36 am)
I'll join!
(September 15, 2016 - 7:15 am)
Yeah, I'll join! I'll write a poem today-tomorrow, then when I'm able to post again on Saturday, I'll submit it!
(September 15, 2016 - 12:31 pm)
I'm so glad you started this up again! My poem is about me making a secret message by staining a paper with a tea bag and leaving it in the hopes that someone would discover it and believe in magic. I didn't do that (or not that I remember), but it is TOTALLY something I would have done when I was little.
BELIEVING
I stained the paper
with a wet oolong teabag
sad and grey,
never living it’s purpose.
I doubt it was honored
that I left it
on the sink edge
dripping enough to
moisten the paint splatters below,
red and blue,
bursts of colors
that never completed
their goal in life,
overflows that never
kissed paper;
never ran
along its wrinkled edges,
never pooling in
unnecessary blots
by the untamed paintbrush,
its mane of wavy bristles
a vessel floating
in a sea of red and blue
touched by sunset.
If they could speak,
these never-used objects,
would they complain?
The tea bag would want
to be steamed in boiling water
its membrane of hazy skin
lazily floating.
Instead, I know it is angry
because it is forgotten,
never understanding,
never watching
as I arranged stained paper
among crushed leaves and bark
crackling under bare feet
excitedly, wondering,
just wondering,
what I was up to
because maybe,
just maybe,
I was taking a dream of mine
and twisting it,
patting it, gluing it,
patching it,
until finally it became someone else’s
whose fingers brushed the paper
tentatively, looking, reading
and finally believing in ancient messages
from other worlds.
The teabag did not know this,
it lay dripping, brooding,
because I was believing again
in books whose paper
never went to waste.
(September 15, 2016 - 3:57 pm)
Descriptions
You sit down next to me,
but you're looking up
at the sky.
Your
dark brown hair
is tousled, windblown,
a thoughtful smile
gracing your lips.
"Hey."
I return
the greeting, my pupils
following your
line of sight
to where a
hawk sits,
(I think it's
a hawk, anyway—
you're the expert on
animals)
upon a telephone wire,
beak upturned
at the sun,
light glancing off of
its brown-sheened
feathers.
"Isn't it. . ." You begin,
but trail off,
fixated
on its strong,
muscled shape,
built for flying.
I admire its wings
as it spreads them,
the shadows
rippling through.
"Yes,"
I say,
because it is.
It is everything you do not say.
You do not say
Bold
Beautiful
Strong
Free
because to say
just one
would be to say
too little.
I finally think of an
appropriate adjective
as it stretches its pinions,
and leaps up,
alighting on Zephyr's moist breath—
wind-warm and soft,
into the blackberry sweet sky.
"Magic."
(September 15, 2016 - 5:46 pm)
I'll join!
(September 15, 2016 - 6:10 pm)
~Faeries and girls~
A fay!
Foolish thing!
A fay!
Could it be?
A girl.
Foolish girl.
Such a wonderous thing, no?
One of them wee folk,
beware.
If you step into a fay ring,
you're as good as gone,
you may ne'er come back again.
~~
You may ne'er come back again!
You're as good as gone!
If you step into a fay ring,
beware!
One of them wee folk,
such a wonderous thing.
No!
A girl!
Foolish girl!
A fay.
Foolish thing,
a fay.
(September 16, 2016 - 3:40 pm)
Ooh, okay! I loved the last two contests!
It's Magic
When we're together
We're like two birds of a feather
When we're torn apart
I swear, it's breaking my heart
When you say hello
My whole mind's aglow
When you say goodbye
It feels like I could die
This pain, this desire
This love, this burning fire
It's tearing me apart, it's tragic
It's magic
(September 16, 2016 - 5:22 pm)
*clears throat* My poem.
Seeing Isn't Believing
'Seeing is believing'--
At least,
That's what they say.
But of course,
There's always more
Than what
Meets the eye.
Magic is everywhere.
It's in our
Bones,
Spirits,
And hearts,
and it floats in the air,
But it isn't always
Visible.
When a bird sings,
The magic in it's soul
Brightens ours,
And the magic flys away
On gossamer wings.
The world is magical.
You just need to believe.
(September 16, 2016 - 7:51 pm)
(September 17, 2016 - 1:11 pm)
Hidden Magic
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You warily push your way
Through the bushes
As you look around
You didn't mean to come here-
Just something seemed to pull you, urge you
Forward
Suddenly the bushes give way, and you stumble
Falling flat on your face
You push yourself back up, and gasp
In front of you is a perfect circle
Of dark purple violets
A sweet tune fills your ears
Tinkling, flowing, inviting you forward
Your eyes open wide and
You turn and run
Then as you stop for breath, a familiar tune
Starts up
You look around in belief
You're still there
It seems to drag you backward, no matter how
Hard you resist
Finally you give up and let it pull you into the circle
Then it stops abruptly, and the flowers wilt
You whirl around and run in fear, not caring or wanting to know
What just happened
Later, in your room, you empty your pockets
A paper wad,
Your pocketknife,
A few sticks and leaves you collected
Your pocketknife is metal.
Could it be- fairies?
You shake your head in amusement.
Hah. Fairy tales. No way are you believing that.
But still-
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(September 17, 2016 - 1:43 pm)
Please tell us who won!
(September 18, 2016 - 8:04 pm)
Oh, sorry, I forgot about this! And now it's on the second page! Well, the winner is...
Abigail S. with her Descriptions poem! And the runner up is...
Clouded Leopard with her It's Magic poem! Okay, Abigail S. can choose the new subject.
(September 19, 2016 - 7:13 pm)
Aw, thanks! Congrats, Abigail!
(September 20, 2016 - 11:38 am)
Hooray! I can't believe I won. :D
Anyway, the new topic is little moments. Pick one memory or instance, seemingly little in the scheme of things, and describe it. How did you feel? What were the sounds, touches and sights around you? Why do you think this tiny pocket in your life stuck with you?
(September 20, 2016 - 5:26 pm)