Poetry Competition III
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Poetry Competition III
Poetry Competition III
Someone, I think it was Rosebud, made the first two, and now they're dead, so I'll make a new one. I think I won that last one, so I'll post the topic. You write a poem on that topic then the winner gets to chose the next topic! And please don't let this die!
Okay, the topic is: Write about magic. Write about something magical, or some faraway magical land. Write about witches and dragons, fairies and talking animals. Write about real-life magic, or sad-cursing magic, or maybe even everyday-unnoticed magic. Write your best poem about magic, whatever you think it is!
submitted by Alexandra
(September 13, 2016 - 6:23 pm)
(September 13, 2016 - 6:23 pm)
Okay, here goes.
Writing
My hand moves across the page
Quickly scribbling down the words
Can't ever seem to
Go fast enough
To get my thoughts on the page
Before they disappear- lost forever
My mind is swirling, churning out word after word
Swirling, churning, thinking, learning
I sigh, set down the pen and push the pages away
I feel tired, so tired
Tired, yet- happy, in a way
As if I couldn't go one step further, then dropped
Onto the ground to find that I had finished, just by an inch
Or two
Completed the race
Against time
~~
When I write poetry, I tend to get off subject a lot. Ah, well.
(September 24, 2016 - 1:07 pm)
Unicorns, Egnimas, Witches
Hipogriffs, dragons, ghosts
Oh, all the things of what I love most
MAGIC!!:)
(September 24, 2016 - 3:47 pm)
Unicorns, Egnimas, Witches
Hipogriffs, dragons, ghosts
Oh, all the things of what I love most
MAGIC!!:)
(September 24, 2016 - 3:49 pm)
I actually wrote this a couple of years ago, but it seems to go well with the theme.
Noticing the Little Things
Resting on the highest needle
at the top of a pine tree, there is
a drop of water, left there by another
day’s moisture. Underneath glistening
leaves; stretching limbs of new foliage,
dewy pine straw and the tiniest shoots
of life, crawling among deteriorating
undergrowth, is a black beetle, tiny
arms moving immaculately in time
with the start and finish of cricket
songs. Time’s languorous attitude
rests, draped across a splintered
branch, staring at clouds and imagining
freedom from silver and black watches and
stately grey clocks residing under a
load of more work to do. I look at the
picture framed by my window pane
thoughtfully, and I imagine what it
would be like if everyone stopped for a
second, and looked around, under,
above across, and observed all
the details usually missed.
(September 24, 2016 - 4:06 pm)
Like a bird, soaring in the sky,
They're white, they're big, they're big, white birds.
Soon, I'll be up there, with them, flying high.
The big bird I'm in will rise and join it's herd.
I'm waiting for it to rise up,
To shoot into the blue and greet the sun.
To be able to look down, the clouds cream in the grand teacup.
I'll be taking off, littering the ground with my fallen burdens.
There's a roar, as the big white bird is running,
Faster than a car, so we may rise up like a feather...
The ground's dropping down, the view is stunning,
But most important, the sky and I are coming together.
Now the ground below is just patches of green and blue,
And soon it'll be gone, covered by the cotton candy clouds.
And I know that the old shapeshifter's tales are true...
Because I've transformed into a bird, too happy to sing aloud.
~~~
Okay, I wasn't that happy the first time I was on a plane, but it was really fun!
(September 24, 2016 - 4:51 pm)
Okay, so I'm going to go ahead and post my poem, but if for any reason I'm not in the competition then you can disregard it, I guess. Here goes:
Shooting Stars
As I gaze upon my new room
I gasp
There
On the ceiling
Is a cluster of glowing stars
Daddy!
I cry
He comes
And holds me up so that I can reach the plastic gem
I come back down to Earth
In his strong arms
Clutching my very own
Shooting star.
~Poetic Panda
(September 24, 2016 - 9:05 pm)
Ashlee! Lovely poem!
(September 24, 2016 - 11:02 pm)
Umm, Daisy? I don't see Ashley's poem. Maybe it just didn't show up for me, sooo, yeh. Just saying.
(September 25, 2016 - 12:34 pm)
(September 25, 2016 - 5:49 pm)
(September 25, 2016 - 12:15 pm)
Um, I'll post the results on Tuesday, the 27th.
(September 25, 2016 - 1:46 pm)
(September 27, 2016 - 2:14 pm)
(September 27, 2016 - 2:14 pm)
I'm excited!!
(September 27, 2016 - 3:13 pm)
In 3rd place we have... Poetic Panda! Your poem is great. The lines are perfectly divided as to not obstruct the flow of the plot, and gosh, the idea is so cute. <3
I am proud to award 2nd place to... Sterling Eclipse! The rhyming is jaunty and clever, not to mention those hauntingly pretty last for lines. Congratulations! *shakes hand profusely*
And in first place.
(Drumroll please.)
(DRUMROLL HARDER!)
That's very good, thank you... It's Rose bud! I love the format, the line breaks give it a magical, slightly disconnected feel. You're such a talented writer. I hope to buy a book of your poetry some day. "Times langorous latitude rests, draped across a splintered branch" is my favorite part. Remember, you get to choose the next topic (and you don't get to enter since you're judging).
Honorable mentions: Leafpool and Clouded Leopard
(September 27, 2016 - 7:08 pm)