Poetry Competition III
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Poetry Competition III
Poetry Competition III
Someone, I think it was Rosebud, made the first two, and now they're dead, so I'll make a new one. I think I won that last one, so I'll post the topic. You write a poem on that topic then the winner gets to chose the next topic! And please don't let this die!
Okay, the topic is: Write about magic. Write about something magical, or some faraway magical land. Write about witches and dragons, fairies and talking animals. Write about real-life magic, or sad-cursing magic, or maybe even everyday-unnoticed magic. Write your best poem about magic, whatever you think it is!
submitted by Alexandra
(September 13, 2016 - 6:23 pm)
(September 13, 2016 - 6:23 pm)
(September 27, 2016 - 10:14 pm)
The next topic is: water's many personalities. Be creative y'all! I'll post results in October-ish after I've written up all the schedules and stuff for the Griffinfeather school. Speaking of that, join the RP! It may look like just an eccentric school at first, but there is much more there than meets the eye...
(September 28, 2016 - 11:38 am)
Unless I'm very confused and mistaken, Poetic Panda is Ashlee. :)
(September 28, 2016 - 12:51 pm)
But I thought Ashlee left...?
(September 28, 2016 - 6:03 pm)
Water's many forms? Like ice, water, and gas?
~The Cycle~
Crystal clear
Beams of sunlight bouncing off
Sparkling and pure
I want to sink into it, yet it's hard, not soft.
Sun shining bright
Warm enough to unfreeze a fountain
Water by night
Trickling slowly down the mountain.
Down the waterfall
Drawn out by women from the lakes
Still and small
Drops of water to put in pots and make cakes.
Heating up
Water vaporizing, out the chimney and into the air
Remainders in the cup
And the vapor turned to clouds; but still there.
Heavy with the droplets
The clouds let them fall onto animals like the winter wren
Snow like white chocolate
As it turns to ice, and the cycle... repeats... again.
(September 28, 2016 - 6:27 pm)
That's one interpretation. Like I said, I LOVE creativity.
(September 28, 2016 - 7:58 pm)
1. Ashlee is a weekender, I believe.
2. Beautiful poem! I really loved that.
3. Bolton wants to say Hi to Anna.
HI, Anna, my looooveeeees!!!!!!!
(September 28, 2016 - 8:31 pm)
Ashlee is a weekender, right. I'm pretty darn sure that she said that when she was first on CB, quite a while ago, she sometimes posted under the alias "PandaGirl". Poetic Panda is, I'm pretty sure, a totally different person.
(September 29, 2016 - 12:08 am)
Hey Admins, can you please please please keep the spaces, thanks!
Me~
My friend said
That water
As a power
Matches me.
We played
Role playing games.
I don't know
Why water
Matches me.
But
Somehow
It does.
And I
Will never
Know why.
Because there
Is no more
Time to play
Role playing games.
No more
Recess.
And I can't
Ask.
Because
At lunch
My friend
Reads so
I can't
Ask.
And water
Must
Have a
Personality.
Because
Otherwise
I don't
Have a
Personality.
And it all
Cycles back to
Who am I?
Which I
Always ask myself.
And if water
Is me
Then
Who am I?
It all
Cycles back
The
Water cycle.
My cycle.
That cycle
Of mine.
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All of mine are horrible. I will never even get a honorable mention. I know, if it was rated, I would get last. But, I try to express my feelings through my poems and use something from real life. I don't know, I try to make it real, you know what I mean? So, please just read it and think about it. Thanks.
(September 28, 2016 - 9:01 pm)
Whoa, whoa, whoa. Let me just clear some things up here. I'm Poetic Panda! I have one pseudonym and one pseudonym only, and that's Poetic Panda. Ashlee is an AMAZING CBer, but she's not me!
~Poetic Panda
(September 29, 2016 - 11:12 am)
Here's my poem! I think this one works very well, and I tried to throw in a lesson too.
The Calmest Tempest
A young man I once knew sat down by my knee,
And with great trepidation he said, to me,
“My teacher, my mentor, my source of my skill,
I fear I’m involved in a trouble that could kill.
You see, I’ve been told that I’ll duel at midday
With a young girl named Lenore who’s as lovely as the day.
I fear if I strike her, she’ll wilt away,
For how can such a small thing fight in such a fray?”
I smiled at him, for I knew that young girl
With baby-blue eyes and yellow hair in a curl.
But how to tell my student the lesson he’ll learn
And find that a small flame can cause quite a burn?
And listen now, dear wonderer, for what I did do,
Hear and repeat this lesson that grew.
I said “Young one, please listen, and hear of my thoughts.
Imagine a leaf, with a tiny water drop.
If you saw that small leaf, you’d brush it aside.
You’d think no more than a fluttering fly.
But imagine, now will you, of a thundering storm.
With waves quite terrific and towering form.
Water is both great and it’s small.
It’s a tiny raindrop, it’s a looming, wet wall.
And it can freeze you and warm you,
And drench you and storm you.
And don’t forget we use it to live!
For our precious water many thanks we should give.
Yet at the same time it caused death and heartache.
In a torrential flood with strong claws that take.
So think, my dear pupil, don’t judge her
Don’t cause your foresight to blur.
If you find yourself judging and presuming this daughter
Remember that destroying, life-giving changing water.”
(September 29, 2016 - 11:26 am)
Wow, your poems are all so good!
(September 29, 2016 - 7:09 pm)
Aw, thank you!
(September 29, 2016 - 9:54 pm)
The droplet falls
(September 29, 2016 - 8:17 pm)
List
Someone
is making a list.
His name is Andrew and
he is trying to assign
(hypothetical)
roleplay powers
for everyone in our grade.
This is obviously not
an easy task, so
he beigns with our
English class.
My friend Georgia
and I
are trying to help,
sitting on the blue plastic
of the lunch tables, legs swinging
as we watch him tap his pencil
on his chin in thought.
"How about G here?"
I elbow my friend.
"Yeah," Georgia chimes,
"What power would I have?"
Andrew tilts his head.
"Maybe... water."
"Water?" Georgia sighs,
disappointed. "I would rather
have something fun
like invisibility."
I see
where he is coming from.
"You're kind of like a geyser." I explain.
"Warm and bubbly, but
now and then
you erupt."
Andrew writes this down.
"Perfect."
"How about me?" I question.
Georgia taps her temple
in mock concentration. "Hmm, maybe you're
water too."
Andrew nods. "It makes
sense.
You're kind of like
the ocean—
You can be calm and levelheaded,
but also intense (you know you you get
super determined)
sometimes."
"Seriously?" I shrug.
"Two
water powers?"
Georgia and Andrew
shrug back.
He writes it down.
"Hey, let's do you now." Georgia points
at Andrew.
"Me?" He says
in mock shock. "Okay.
This should be
interesting."
There is
a pause.
"I know!" I say.
"You make me think
of the water in a glass.
Refreshingly serene and
always good
when you need it."
Georgia flops back onto the bench dramatically.
"Ah, where will these water powers end!"
"I see no reason
for them to." Andrew scribbles
his own power down.
"Water fits
a lot of people."
He gestures to
Ben, who is fooling around
with his friends.
"Splashing, playful and sometimes annoying,"
His pencil directs itself to Ashley,
animatedly telling a story
to a group of people,
"Water in a
bubble bath,
constantly warm
and cheerful."
I laugh.
"I guess we don't need
this list anymore
if everyone
is water."
Georgia brightens.
"So if we're not doing the list
can I have invisibility?"
"You're still water." I smile.
"One side
of its many personalities."
(September 29, 2016 - 11:15 pm)