Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
Inspired by Bluebird’s prompt about the sky and the song Colors by Halsey:
skyfall~
you were a cornflower blue sky,
cloudless, we couldn’t see past
the brightness of the high noon sun
then your sun set and we saw you
fall oh so slowly that we could have
broken your fall under a trampoline
high on hope so you could bounce
back up
but we were so entranced because
it’s not everyday you see a falling
star
and suddenly you were burning,
burning, the fading sun drawing
streaks of dark gray clouds as
you tried to hold on— first you were
red, redder than a firetruck screaming
down the highway, then a split-second
and you burst through with orange before
you gave up, mountain’s majesty, fading
into the remnants of seven thirty light because
days get longer in the summer, nights get
shorter because darkness is never welcome
when there is so much joy
and then the darkness swallowed
you whole because every light casts a shadow,
but i suppose if there is no light, there is no
shadow, only darkness, always darkness.
~~~~~
As always, I'd love critique!
(May 23, 2017 - 8:44 pm)
September, this is amazing!! Ahh, I love all of the colors in this and the metaphors! The last stanza is especially awesome.
(May 24, 2017 - 7:23 am)
A way too long peom I wrote about change. It's more than two pages on Docs.
Change
change.
that constant companion,
the one that was always there,
standing by your side,
with its ever shifting form.
and you,
shifting with it.
you are changing as well.
is it your companion’s fault?
or,
is it yours?
that one thing that
looms over us,
threatening, yet comforting,
all the same.
comforting, in the knowledge
that nothing
will ever
be the same.
the world, is constantly in
motion. that it is spinning, spinning at a
thousand
miles per hour.
and it is changing,
the sun rising in one place, and setting
in another. each dawn bringing with it
a new day, each sundown, a new night.
and all the while the world is
shifting, the tectonic plates
that make up its
crust, floating on a mantle
of heat and fire.
while on those plates,
there are mountains,
and glaciers, and rivers made of pure
ice. and those glaciers are melting,
and those mountains are being worn
down, into dust.
and all the while,
new glaciers are forming,
and new mountains pushing up out of the
dust of their quondam counterparts.
and the world is still spinning,
as it ever was, and ever will be.
a world in constant motion is what
we live in. a world that will always change.
rebirth, even in death and ashes and dust.
and as you change,
you grow, you discover more,
about both yourself,
and this ever changing, effervescent world
that we occupy. we all change.
change is a part of life, just as death is a part of life.
but just because you know
you are going to die someday,
doesn’t mean you refuse
to live. does it?
because it is your duty,
to pass life on, to share it.
for your life is not just yours,
it belongs to the people
who care about you, who have given you life.
it belongs to the people you have met,
and those you have yet to meet.
to those who might have changed you life,
or whose lives you might change.
and it belongs to the world.
it belongs to the world that, inevitably,
created you. that nurtured you.
you are part of that changing world,
a necessary part, for a machine does not function
without all its pieces. and because you are changing,
you are in turn, changing the world.
the world that your life belongs to.
and the world, that belongs to you.
someone asked me once,
“do you ever wonder why we’re here?”
and i replied, “i don’t know.”
that is true, i still don’t know why,
specifically, we are here. i doubt i ever will.
but my best guess, is that we are here,
on this earth, to make a difference.
to change the world. to leave our mark.
to do something worthwhile
In our limited time. for the world, like all things,
is constantly changing. and if we were to try,
we could control that change.
not destroy it, no,
but manipulate it, make it our own.
i do not believe in any god or all powerful being.
i believe in the power
of ordinary people to make a change,
to change
the world.
for the world is not only changed
by great and famous men,
by leaders of countries, or nations.
the world is changed
by those who choose to change it.
You could be one of those people.
One of those people to change the world.
(May 24, 2017 - 9:35 pm)
Ooh, inspirational! I like it!
(May 26, 2017 - 6:50 pm)
Thank you September. I kind of just wrote it randomly because I wanted to write poetry.
(May 26, 2017 - 8:41 pm)
"If you need to talk
I'm always here"
Are you?
Why, then,
do you not listen
when I talk
Why do you laugh?
I wish it were true
I wish I could just turn on my shiny black and silver computer
and instant message you
or whatever
and you'd write back
well
I know you would
and we'd have a nice long emotional
dramatic
talk
But would it be real?
When I come to school the next day,
board the schoolbus
walk into homeroom
will you
ignore
me?
If we talk about you
will you change?
Do you want to be the person I can talk to?
because it feels good
you know
It feels like you really understand
do you?
Or could I break through your face, your drama, your
"we're together"
your
"it's hard?
Is it like a thin paper mask?
because I know
just from watching you
that it's not hard
that your biggest worry is that the boy you like likes you
but he won't text you.
Or are you suffering
and you're just
a really good actress?
A really good liar?
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I don't really know what that was, so that's why it might be a little unclear. I think I tried to convey too many ideas at once. I'm open to critiques, and you guys are all amazing poets. This was about this girl in my class who is usually just an annoying popular girl, but this poem happened because she has this thing on her social media that says something like "I'm here if you ever need to talk," and I'm trying to understand whether she means it. I also tried to separate this into stanzas, but I'm not sure if that worked.
(May 27, 2017 - 6:49 am)
Okay, I have a really bad case of poet's block and, also, I feel like the only good poem I've ever written is the one about summer that I posted here. Bluebird, Booksy, and September--and others, too, but mainly those three--how do you do it? I mean, how do you come up with the idea and then write about it, but just go on and on and say such meaningful or descriptive things, or philosophical things, even? Where do you get your ideas?
(May 28, 2017 - 11:52 am)
Aww, I hate poet's block! A lot of poetry I pull from things I've read or things that've happened to me, but sometimes I use poetry prompts. If you're stuck and trying to write, I'd recommend listening to music, and writing about that. Hope that helps!
(May 28, 2017 - 4:38 pm)
Aww, thanks Leapfool! Poet's block sucks. Some things that helps me are looking up aesthetic pictures or just pictures of things and then using them for inspiration, or writing about experiences/people/places I've been. I have a whole 15 page list of color similies that I came up with (e.g. marmalade orange and electrical tape black, which I used in my two most recent poems) Write down random thoughts and lines and don't be afraid to do a lot of editing. (Sometimes just a simple random fact (like how ultramarine blue was very expensive in the renaissance) can inspire a poem!
(May 29, 2017 - 10:23 am)
Another thing I've found helpful is writing with a certain theme, word, or line from a song/poem you like (just be sure to credit your inspiration!)
Here are a couple themes/prompts to try (I use tons of these, if you'd like more, they're really easy to find, just google poetry prompts!) :
Themes:
Darkness and light
Change
Emptiness
Falling
Growing up
Facing reality
Prompts:
Put your playlist on shuffle and start your poem with the first phrase you hear
Include the line, "and then we were starlight"
Write about a fall (from grace, from power, from a tree, etc.)
Write a love poem with out the word love
Describe an action using only colors
(May 29, 2017 - 3:05 pm)
Imma do one on change!
US
When we first met
We were both in ballet
I was seven
You were eight
You hated your glasses
But I always tried them on
You had an American Girl Doll
When I only wanted one
And then
We were on swim team
You had green goggles
I had pink
You refused to read
Your sister's manga
I watched her read it
And I loved it
And then we were
In tap together
I was still silly
You seemed to change
You always came early
When I always came late
I tried to mess with you
But you never laughed
Then I switched teams
Then your tap class switched
Then I started drawing
And you quit ballet
Then I quit ballet
Your sister lent me a book
About the Hunger Games
That I'd never be there to return
It's been years
Since we met
That day
In ballet
Now I'm 13
And you're 14
And I see you
Nearly every day
But you're
A different person
I can't blame you
I am too
I now have glasses
Like I always wanted
I have an American Girl Doll
And I can only imagine where yours is
I was playing you in P.E.
And I was on second
You were the catcher there
We exchanged words
I guess you never quit ballet
You quit tap
And you levelled up
In ballet -- to competitive
I didn't quit swimming
I did it year-round
And I just
Left your team
Amy.
(June 6, 2017 - 2:52 am)
I loved the passing of time in this!
(June 7, 2017 - 1:41 pm)
Also oooh! Color similies! I have to try those!
(May 30, 2017 - 10:21 pm)
this one's really short, again, I'd love title suggestions or critique!
untitled~
summer nights i find myself
wandering because sleeplessness
is a blessing and a curse when
you can’t turn your brain off
and all you do is think
because darkness is the best time for
revelations and lightbulb moments—
in the darkest of times, one must
always remember to turn on the
light, it’s dumbledore’s quote but i’ve
repurposed it.
(May 28, 2017 - 4:53 pm)
I think it should be: summer nights i find myself/wandering/because sleeplessness..... But that's just my opinion. And for a title how about Insomnia
(May 29, 2017 - 8:35 pm)