Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
I typed up a whole poem and then closed my laptop and when I opened it it all got deleted rip
(September 3, 2018 - 6:46 pm)
Here I wrote this because I have no self confidence
Swim Practice
Coach is yelling at us again
Telling us at how our last set was horrible
I can't help but think he's talking to me
And me specifically.
It's like I have a target on my chest
My suit,
My cap,
Telling everyone,
"Hey look!
It's that slow girl!
The one who can only beat ten-year olds!"
And still most of the ten-year-olds beat me.
I'm not close to anyone on the team
They don't want to be associated with someone who never wins.
Can't blame them
I wouldn't want to be associated with myself either.
I'm not on a relay team
Those are for fast kids
Guess I don't belong there
I don't win races
I'm in the slowest heat, and I still lose
Might as well be in the 9-10 group
~~~
Hope you enjoyed!
Swimming is an activity you can enjoy for life, no matter what your speed. It's good for overall health and can be both envigorating and relaxing. I'm not a racer, but I love swimming!
Admin
(September 11, 2018 - 9:39 pm)
Top, please, for amazing poetry!
(September 23, 2018 - 9:00 am)
C'mon! Back to the first page!
(September 23, 2018 - 9:02 am)
BACK AT IT AGAIN WITH THE SWIM POEMS
Except this one's positive. OK HERE WE GO
My Sport
My sport is NOT easy.
It's not splashing in the water with kickboards,
It's feeling your legs burn
As you finish a 200 sprint kick.
It's not treading water and talking,
It's trying to keep your head above water
While you watch the clock so you know when to stop.
It's not cannonballing into the pool, excited,
It's diving in and sprinting a lap,
Breathing heavily as you get out.
So like I said,
My sport isn't easy.
~~~
Hope you enjoyed!
(September 25, 2018 - 10:18 pm)
I love this! As a competitive swimmer for over 6 years, I can totally relate. The only line I might disagree with is the cannonball one... we cannonball into the pool all the time, especially at early morning practice where everyone gets their own lane ;) But great job!
(September 26, 2018 - 8:09 am)
Helllloooo everyone! I haven't posted on here in way too long which is such a problem, so I'm back with a poem! (Just my style XD)
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I love you more
Than I thought I could,
When I stood on the edge of the cliff
To the sea,
Asking the wind
Questions;
The ocean quizzed me in return
How much can you love?
It asked me
And I was sure
I said, I can love with the might of all the stars in the sky
I can love with the power of the waves crashing yonder
I can love with the passion of a fire burning brightly
I can love intensely, with the whole heart, body
Mind
And I can love in silence, unrequited
Undefined
But I was
Contradicted
By a steady voice that whispered,
More
You can love beyond horizons,
You can
Fall
Forever
And you can love like screaming, panting, tearing through the dark
And you can love in peace, like the gentle waves ebb over
Like the misty clouds that follow
Through the mountains and the brook,
How it tumbles
Through the forest
Like your heart inside your chest,
Beating softly,
Beating softly
Beating for
All
Eternity
And it picked me up and swept me
In a swirl of light and moon,
And it flew me through the nighttime
To a face I knew was you
You still looked unfamiliar
But I wiped away the fog,
And you came into such clarity
Like a light switched on too suddenly
When your eyes are full of clouds
That it hit me,
Threw me backwards
Like a dagger
Aching, pounding steel
I had never known
The power
Couldn’t have imagined
And I’d never really understand
The
Love
That I could feel.
(October 10, 2018 - 11:54 pm)
Soprano, this is SO GOOD! It's really beautiful and I love your style. I especially like the lines You can love beyond horizons,/You can/Fall/Forever/And you can love like screaming, panting, tearing through the dark
(October 17, 2018 - 7:09 pm)
Thank you thank you!! That means so much!! I also really like that line, it has such a nice cadence, I was proud of it XD
(October 20, 2018 - 10:31 pm)
TOPPP!!!!!!!!!
(October 14, 2018 - 7:20 pm)
This might thread of poetry SHALL NOT DIE!!!
(October 17, 2018 - 8:07 pm)
Huzzah, I have poetry to share.
(Untitled- I never title my poems XP XP)
Do you ever look at someone and wonder,
What is their story?
Have fragments of their soul flaked away to the wind?
Are they metal on the outside and paper Within?
Do they bore the weight of unfed Dreams,
Starving in their hearts for years?
Are they kind and courageous,
An Untouchable bubble of exuberance in their chest?
Is there past as dense and murky as a swamp,
Or pure as God's own heart?
What secrets lie beneath their eyes?
Are they counting money,
Or are they counting stars?
Do they know Love?
Or has Satan snatched their soul?
I guess I'll never know,
They're just a stranger on the street.
A stranger that I've wondered,
What is their story?
(October 18, 2018 - 7:48 pm)
I haven't written poetry in a while, but I wrote a poem yesterday! This one is from weeks ago that I never got to post, and I'll post the new one after that.
Clarification: I've never been to New York City. Hence the title.
imagining new york
he sits cross-legged
on a rooftop where he can see everything below.
his light brown hair is fluffy from the breeze and his eyes are blue
(not cold but warm; but they are empty).
below him, spread out, there is a city.
the people pass--millions, who all have their lives and stories
and troubles.
they hurry before the coming darkness, going home to
turn on lights and see their families and have dinner.
(he is staying where he is.)
breathing in, breathing deep--today he breathes without meaning
(his hands are empty; he opens his palms and
looks at them but places them in his lap.)
a sketchbook lies, untouched, by his side.
he is looking west. the sun is starting to set there but he
can't quite see it because there are buildings.
the color shines on his face anyway. it sparkles in his eyes
and paints his skin the warm yellow you see in photos.
(he shifts his balance a little and scuffs the toe of his
converse shoe on the cement.
he moves his hand towards his sketchbook but pauses--
today he can't draw;
he doesn't know why.)
this is a city where there is everyone imaginable
but no one that makes him feel less alone. no one
that makes him feel, today, that he could be able to
create something.
it's dark, shadowy on this roof. there is a flashlight
in his pocket but tonight he just wants to sit and
enjoy the sun's last rays and then the darkness.
he wraps his arms
around his knees and lets out a pent-up breath.
he feels small. he feels insignificant today, but then
also so significant that he could be the only one
on this earth, all alone. if he closed his eyes.
because he can still see people. they are there, but it's hard
for him to feel them
in his heart. two days ago he could still make art. but yesterday he
hit a wall and fell unconscious. he is still in
a dream, even though the wind on his skin is as
real as he used to be.
he's never felt like this. never felt so helpless and
lonely. he's always been strong.
today hurts. he wishes it would be over already
so he could laugh and dream and draw again but
he doesn't want to miss the colors of this sunset so
he stays. (he is still an artist whether
he likes it or not.)
this will pass.
he will be able to breathe again without
feeling like he could choke on the emptiness inside.
(on the roof up high, he can feel the darkness. it's
not sinister, but just real. this roof is dark but all
around him there are lights from buildings and
cars. the darkness wraps around him, warm
even though it's cold and feeling so real that maybe
he could touch it. he feels all the people around him
and suddenly feels real again. he hugs
his legs to his chest and smiles.)
(October 19, 2018 - 3:55 pm)
LEAFY DARLING I LOVE THIS
(October 20, 2018 - 11:01 pm)
Oh thank you! It's great to see you, by the way. <3
(October 21, 2018 - 12:31 pm)