Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
Cute! >///w///<
(July 12, 2024 - 5:50 am)
You say
You want to spend the rest of your life with me
But I know your eyes don't wander to the edge of town
Not like mine do
I know your heart doesn't ache for the ocean
To crest each wave like a new day, breaking
I know you haven't the slightest idea of the contentment
Having rough wind blow through your hair
I know you don't have any desire to leave this small world
Of familiar faces, you never will
You say
You want to spend the rest if your life with me
And I smile, squeezing cords in the palm of my hand
Smiling and squeezing the cords until they break.
(July 12, 2024 - 8:59 am)
Currently debating whether or not it would be weird to dedicate this to peppermint. :/
~~~~~
The waters coalesce,
Dew gathering on a leaf
Liquid bunching together in a metallic orb
Before slipping away---plunging
It sizzles before it can splatter, as I am near.
Where I step the grass blanches, withers and smokes
Thin white smoke that blackens and becomes thicker as it rises
And gathers around my head
A garland of destruction and waste
Ash and sand slip through my fingers, time passing
With the stench of the death and disease not far behind.
But I cannot stop walking,
I am drawn to travel
As a moth is drawn to a flame, both flickering.
My feet are magnetised by an invisible tide,
Pushed and pulled towards the ground on their own
My destination ever unknown.
But one day I saw you,
Walking among the fields
Flowers blooming beneath your feet
You breathe colour into being,
Spin loose words into tight poem-fabric;
It is not perfect, but it is beautiful.
It is vibrance and life you bring
Although not without a tinge of quiet sadness.
No, not sadness,
Just the knowledge that all things come to an end
The forests you traverse will one day blister and wilt
The waters you purify will soon return to marshy grime
The skies you float in will some day fill with strife and storm.
It seems to me acceptance, a quiet wisdom
Something beautiful and delicate and hopeful.
All I can do to preserve your works for just a moment more
To let them shine as they deserve
I must assure our paths do not cross, carefully dance
About your wake
But oh, is it difficult not to tread the beautiful path you do
It is tempting, my feet ache, gravitating towards it
But I know my path would be but a pale imitation
And dilution of yours.
(July 12, 2024 - 5:08 pm)
this is absolutely incredible, and I would be so honored if this was dedicated to me. your writing is genuinely some of the most beautiful I've ever read, and I am constantly impressed with your loyalty to posting on this thread. your comments on my poetry are the reason I have kept writing for so long, and I can't imagine what my life would be like without poetry today. I looked back through this thread, and the first time you commented on my work I was fourteen--which is crazy because I'm turning seventeen this month! I just hope you know how much I appreciate your work and your support of mine <3
(July 13, 2024 - 6:59 pm)
Alrighty then, it's officially dedicated to you!
(July 14, 2024 - 7:32 pm)
so I’m running down the black mat and
I’m not counting my steps because
I don’t have the rhythm for that and
I’m terrible at pole vaulting anyway and
when I launch myself into the air
I picture pointing my toes towards the sky and
arching over the bar and
flinging my arms up and
twisting myself into a
gentle landing on my feet and
it’s almost funny when
I manage to both knock down the bar and
land right on top of it and
now there are bruises starting to
spread across my back like
a spilled bottle of ink and
there is blush painted on my cheeks with
the messy strokes of a finger painting toddler
and the only thing to do is
to accept the failure and
laugh it off
except the problem is
that I always do that and
it’s not working anymore and
I think a part of you always knew that and
I think that’s why you would sit beside me and
pretend to be the meet announcer and
make stupid statements until
I didn’t feel quite so horrible anymore and
I think that’s why I let you and
I think that’s why I left you at the end of day and
I don’t regret that choice because
you were always too nice for me but
at the end of the day
I always cause more damage than I intend and
I’m sorry that I had to
knock down the bar and land on it and
I’m sorry that there are bruises beneath your chest and
I’m sorry that there is blush staining your cheeks and
I’m so sorry that I keep trying to laugh it off because
I know it’s not funny but
I don’t remember how to be sad anymore.
(July 13, 2024 - 1:52 am)
Partly inspired by Moonwolf's poem in the most recent round of the poetry contest.
~~~~~
One day / child you will fold sunshine
You will be able to bend / mould the stars
Into a softer / warmer light
A light that shines / covers us all / consumes us
You will battle night herself / dark serenade that she is
Woo her / befriend her / or vanquish her kingdom
You will fashion pulleys out of moonlight / levers out of the breeze
To lift your people out of the valley
And into the light you’ve woven across the sky.
(July 13, 2024 - 12:57 pm)
Wow this poem is beautiful. I'm forever in awe of your poetry skill :D
(July 14, 2024 - 8:31 pm)
Thank you! It's wonderful seeing so many skilled people here on the CB!
(July 15, 2024 - 7:53 am)
What Wildflowers Are For
The tears that have not yet fallen
For those that have been forgotten…
The memory has faded away like
An old photo that was made for
People to remember, yet no one does…
It is what the wildflowers grow for
When there is no one to bring any
Fresh cut roses every year…
The wildflowers remember them.
They are never forgotten through
Each fresh petal, a different aspect
And as wildflowers succumb
To the harsh frost of winter,
New ones will grow in the spring,
And the wildflowers continue
To remember the forgotten.
(July 14, 2024 - 8:33 pm)
I love this sm
(July 14, 2024 - 10:31 pm)
Thank you :)
(July 15, 2024 - 12:06 pm)
@Rick Rioridan fans, remember in the 1st book of Trials of Apollo, how Lester said he'd write an poem, and ode, to the the wonderful bacon? Well, I took it upon myself to write it ;D Enjoy!
Bacon is Good~ an ode to bacon, ambrosia of the mortals
Bacon is good
It is delicious
Crispy and crunchy and
Slightly nutritious!
It sizzles and splatters
Alarming amounts of grease
Omitting a smell so yummy
You don't want it to cease!
You'll eat it for breakfast
Then want it for lunch!
For dinner! Every snack!
'Cause you love it a bunch!
Bacon is good
I'm statin' the facts
In every helping I gobble
At least 70 pacts!
Bacon Is Good~ Haiku version
Tell me, dear mortal
Have you heard, of the food that's
So very yummy?
It's greasy, crunchy
Meaty with fat, cooked to crisp
It sings on your tongue
If I had to choose
All the courses for a feast
Just bacon we'd eat!
(July 17, 2024 - 1:45 pm)
I love these :D
(July 17, 2024 - 5:48 pm)
it's really terrible, but at least it got through my writer's block lol
I saw fireflies for the first time a few weeks ago and
they were so much tinier than I’d imagined,
like a single
clap
might extinguish one and
the night would become a cloying veil of shadows without
their little pinpricks of light, and so I watched and
I wondered if it was perhaps a mirror of hope in the of darkest times, the
fragility of happiness caught
in tiny wings,
winking out then blinking back into sight, and
I remembered that you can wish on a caught lightning bug but
they looked so beautiful and free, and
after all
with such a precious collection of wishes, who
would want to waste one on
someone
like
me?
(July 18, 2024 - 2:24 pm)