Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
I wrote one while I was on vacation, less than 24 hours ago.
Inches
I sit
On the edge
Of a
Triangle-shaped
Rock,
My legs hanging
Over the edge.
I look down
Past its
Grey-speckled surface
To look into the
Water,
Six inches away.
There's a boat
In the distance
On the horizon
Just below the sun
I look down,
Into the water,
Five inches away.
I slide to the side
Of my cold,
Hard perch,
And watch
The water rush
Into a nook,
Four inches away.
I squint at the sun,
Blazing a
Bright orange-red.
I hear the waves rush in
And I know I should move,
But I don't;
The water's three inches away!
I glance to my right
At the rock
I stood on
Barely five minutes ago
But it's gone,
The tide has swallowed it up,
Only two inches away.
I gaze out into the ocean
And think
How lucky I am
To be here
When everyone else is not
The water's an inch away.
I try to look back
At the sun,
But it's barely even there.
Then something hits my foot,
But when I look,
There's nothing there,
Only the water
That was six inches away.
(August 8, 2017 - 11:36 pm)
I wrote this last night--it's partly based on how I was feeling at the time and partly based on Shatter Me by Lindsey Stirling. I think it's the longest poem I've ever wrote.
BTW, I know I use it too but does anyone know who started doing the no-capitals thing?
Anyway....
Break With Tradition
i. all her life she's been told
"if you stop singing you'll die so
don't you dare break with tradition"
ii. so all her life she's sang that one song, in metaphor she's like a music box that has
no choice but to keep playing over and over
iii. it's so hard to be yourself when everyone around you is trying to blend in with the crowd
iv. and then she starts to wonder why, why she can't
sing her own song? i suppose before, she was just too
afraid of what others would think of her.
but now it's a question that keeps
repeating itself again and again in her head. why. why. why?
v. and all of a sudden, she makes up her mind and
she stops singing. no--more like she starts singing
something else, something new and different and
all her own. and it hurts. the pain is
excruciating, tears are streaming down her
face as she sings
but the pain is a welcome change from the
endless monotony of her old life--even though
it feels like she's being torn apart, she keeps singing. keeps
singing and tries not to cry out from the pain--
instead she puts it all into her song and the music
becomes more powerful, more enhanced.
vi. people are staring now, but she doesn't care. the
music pours from her lips and though she's nearly
blind from the pain, she feels so much joy because she's
finally doing what she should have done years ago--she's broken tradition and found herself.
vii. and then everything
stops and she stumbles, drops to her knees
but then she picks herself up again and breaths in deep, and suddenly
she realizes that she's free, the pain
is gone. she feels so much lighter now,
there is no pain and she is finally herself,
just her herself and
no one else.
(August 11, 2017 - 10:40 am)
@Leafpool, I'm not sure who started it. I was inspired to start writing poetry from The Slam, and at least 90% of the poems there are in no-capitals, so maybe it's always been around.
And ohmygoodness, your poem is beautiful!! There's so much feeling in it. This put me in awe, Leafpool.
(August 11, 2017 - 9:39 pm)
Wow. That's lovely, Leafpool! I especially like the kind of metaphorical, dreamlike quality of your writing.
(August 12, 2017 - 1:25 pm)
Thank you, both of you!
(August 13, 2017 - 12:08 pm)
Here's a poem I wrote, and I'm pretty proud of it. I'm debating calling it Life. What are your thoughts on it? (Sorry, the formatting will probably turn out a little messed up, but it's okay.
The Secret To Happiness
I. First, we must learn the ways we are
Different.
Dark
Light
Love one
Love other
See one
See other
Shine
Dim
Stars
Moon
Sun.
Each a glowing being
Burning out
It’s own path
But underneath layers of skin
Flesh
Muscle
Is bone, the same bone
No matter the difference.
II. Now we see
Inside every molecule
A burst of light
Shadows cannot extinguish
The single
Burning
Flame
That holds it’s own, deep inside
A fiery passion
A spark
Ignited by certainty
Wisdom
Contemplation
Beauty
Kept lit, perhaps,
Forever,
Or put out softly by a few whispered words
A small bright light remains forever
Love is gone,
Affection stays.
III. When time is right
We smile,
Breathe
Rays of light
Pour
Mingle
We fit,
Perfectly,
Together.
Small pieces
Of a dream,
A hazy future memory
Float and fasten
Tight to another,
Another fragment of imagination.
Slowly
S l o w l y
Something begins
To form.
IV. The first breath,
After months of heavy
H...E...A...V...Y...
And hours
Pushing and screaming,
Bursting forth in
A waterfall
Of love
Then tears
And suddenly all is still.
First breath,
Magic,
Still and quiet.
Then ripped apart
As though by a dagger,
Silence shattered,
A scream erupts
Tiny
Huge
Larger than life
But life
Is so small,
So tiny
Fully formed.
Looking up,
At last,
With a blink
A tear
And then
A smile.
V. Each day
Growing bigger,
Stretching, stretching,
Expanding
At an amazing
Velocity.
Each day
Something new
A bright light
A single word
And peal of
Perfect
Laughter.
Each night
Tired,
Exhausted,
Remembering,
Dreaming of nights before,
But
Sighing
Cooing
Rocking
Singing
Loving,
Glad
It’s now and not before.
VI. Smiling faces
Are what we choose to recall,
Through the growth
Bringing with it
Burning passions,
Desires,
Sticky secrets,
Cold, cold thoughts,
Friends blown away
Like tiny wisps of smoke.
Though,
In the end,
The only true friends
Are the ones still with us
When we come full circle,
Back to the time
When our flame ignites
And a new generation
From inside, surging forth,
Chooses to exist.
VII. The end draws near.
Every day,
Another
Full
Memory
Appears,
Brimming with excitement -
Remember the years?
Remember the friends,
The thoughts,
The dark,
The light,
The love,
The passion,
The tears,
The laughter,
The smiles,
The rays of light
And the people,
Who every moment
Out of million of milliseconds
Possibly spent elsewhere,
Were beside you,
Looking down,
Caring.
This is how,
With a full mind,
A full body
And a full heart,
We will depart this world,
Having seen all
Heard all
Had all
All we ever needed
To fulfill our duties
Reach our dreams
Before
We take
Our final
breath.
(August 14, 2017 - 8:08 pm)
OH MY WYRD THAT WAS AMAZING!!!! I have a book reccomendation for you. It's called Origin and it's by Jessica Khoury and it is amazing. Look it up. I feel like you would like it.
(August 15, 2017 - 1:54 am)
Awesome, I'll totally look it up. Thank you!
(August 15, 2017 - 5:18 pm)
Beautiful. I wish I could write like that. Bravo, SopranoTwo!
(August 15, 2017 - 3:19 am)
Awww, thanks! I'm sure your writing is amazing. <3
(August 15, 2017 - 5:19 pm)
This is soooo beautiful, Soprano! I absolutely love it! I think the title Life fits perfectly.
(August 15, 2017 - 9:33 am)
Thank you so much! I think I'm going to call it Life, and also make that the title of my poetry collection.
(August 15, 2017 - 5:20 pm)
I wrote this poem and wanted to do something with it, so here it is:
Always forward
Never back
Like the sun
And not the black
Keep on moving
Keep on going
Keep on soaring
Keep on glowing
Overcoming
Every problem
Every insult
Every phantom
Keep on moving
Keep on going
Keep on soaring
Keep on glowing
(August 19, 2017 - 10:02 am)
I love that one, Kitten! Especially the rhythm it has.
I wrote this last night. I also have another poem that I've been working on for several days and will post sometime in the next couple days; I'm still not satisfied with it.
{starlight eyes}
to me you are the night
sky. i could
compare you to so many things but the night sky fits you
best--mostly you are the vast stygian heavens but
sometimes the stars come out too.
when we sit out in the darkness together
and stare at the sky, bare inches
between us
the proximity is overwhelming. the stars are such
bright little specks in the sky and they're mirrored in your
eyes your starlight eyes i love your starlight eyes
i just want to stay
here forever with you and your
starlight eyes
sometimes you're here and sometimes you're not--i can't bear being apart from you
even though i can hardly
stand being next to you. i have a fire inside
that can't be
quenched, no matter how
hard i try, i feel so much for you and yet so little,
it's so impossibly hard to put this feeling into
words that both of us stopped trying long
ago and now because we can't do anything
else we just sit and gaze into each other's
eyes your
eyes your
starlight eyes.
(August 19, 2017 - 1:17 pm)
I love this! It's so beautiful!
(August 19, 2017 - 2:38 pm)