Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
This is really relatable, and Leafpool, this poem is amazing! I love how you broke up the lines and the metaphors. This is so beautiful!
(July 22, 2017 - 3:14 pm)
Thank you! :)
(July 23, 2017 - 3:25 pm)
People say that when
you put your ear to a shell
you can hear the sea.
In my opinion, those people don't know what the sea
sounds like, at least not where I'm from.
Where I come from, and where
i see the sea it sounds like
a collection of memories from
going almost every year since
I was old enough to walk,
the crash of the waves pounding
pounding
pounding on the shore
wearing the rocks down
to dust, the dust that they become
being swept away by the same pounding waves,
then pushed back up, an
endless cycle.
And the crys of the birds
and rustle of the trees on the shore,
I count those as part of the soundn of
the ocean.
So no, when you put a shell
to your ear, you cannot hear the ocean.
At least not how I know it.
(July 24, 2017 - 7:33 pm)
This is a great poem, Epic Fangirl! I live really close to the ocean and I think this captures it perfectly!
(July 25, 2017 - 12:17 pm)
I remember
Years ago,
When I used to
Wake up early
Every morning of every week,
Rolling out of bed
On the days we were late,
Barely taking the time
To brush my long dark hair
To go to camps in the summer
And after this summer,
I'll remember
Waking up early
Not to go to day camps,
But to follow my mother
To the peace and quiet
Of the library.
I could comb and style
My short brown hair
To stay at the library and draw
~~~
I would have written it for the poetry challenge, but dear me, I forgot to type my name in!
(July 29, 2017 - 10:20 am)
@Everyone- I kind of titled this thread badly, sorry, the only reason it is called Regular Poetry Thread is because I had made a poetry thread about two weeks before this one where we posted unedited poems as an exercise. So, just ignore the regular, sorry! I honestly thought it would die pretty quickly, so thank you all for posting your awesome poems :)
(August 1, 2017 - 4:37 pm)
I wrote this poem because I was inspired by the talk of creation on the poetry contest thread. I hope this doesn't offend anyone! I will ask the Admins to take it down, if it does. I was just really inspired and wanted to try my hand at my own beliefs...even if I don't know what they are! It is written in free verse...but I'm not really sure if I've got free verse down, so I'd love some tips if anyone has some to give! Anyway - here it is!
The Creative Thought
Some people say
That a great
creator
Made us.
Some people say
That we rose
From the dust.
They say that
God
Made all,
Or that dust
Shaped our bodies.
But who made
These words?
Who sparked
The inspiration?
Who made us
believe
These theories?
Our teachers?
Ourselves?
Who made the
Courage
That helped us
Fight
For our beliefs?
Who made the
Beliefs
That we now
Believe?
Where do
Thoughts come
from?
From God?
From dust?
From ourselves?
Is it possible
That we made
Ourselves?
Oh,
Please...
Say no!
I want to hear
The word
That man created,
Mixed with the
Beliefs
You have chosen
To
Follow.
I want to hear
Your thoughts
On the subject.
I'm open to
possibilities.
But why?
Because I chose
To be?
Or because
God
And
Dust
Chose me to be?
I don't know.
Like I said...
I'm open
To possibilities.
(August 3, 2017 - 8:28 pm)
This is an interesting poem, Silver! It really makes you think! Staying on the creation topic, here's the poem I entered for the poetry contest:
____________
They say that
Billions of years ago
We were
Particles floating around
In blackness
When a chemical reaction
Exchanged the darkness
For light.
How could
A thousand tiny particles
Randomly combust
Exchanging darkness
For light?
And how can an entire
Universe
Come into existence
In a trillionth
Of a second?
This is no accident.
They say
That billions of years
From now
Our world will
Explode
And once again
We will be
Particles
Floating around in blackness.
But how can
An entire planet
Be obliterated
Into
A thousand tiny particles
In a single moment?
They say that
All life is derived from
Single-celled organisms
Floating around
In black water
That crawled ashore
And became
Something
Greater.
They say that
We are just
‘Evolved’
From monkeys
Cousins
Of chimps.
How can
A thousand tiny organisms
Magically
Change
Into
Such
Complex creatures
As we?
Notice that
The missing link is
Still missing.
What if we
Aren't just
Glorified apes.
What if we
Have a purpose?
What if we were made
By something greater,
By Someone greater.
What if we weren't born just to die?
What if we weren't placed here just to live?
I'll tell you a secret.
It's true.
We are no accident.
If you look a little deeper, darling, you'll see the light.
If you really try, you won't have to push the truth away
Anymore.
(August 5, 2017 - 10:13 am)
Thanks! I enjoyed reading yours as well! I'm really not sure what I believe, as I stated in my poem, so I really enjoy hearing other peoples' beliefs.
(August 8, 2017 - 4:01 pm)
Let's bump this thread up to the top! Everyone's poetry is amazing!
I've had a little bit of a poetry slump recently, so I finally decided to look through a poem prompt book my mom gave me for my birthday. One of the prompts was to take a line from a book and write a poem including it, the result of which is below. The last line is borrowed from Olga Grushin's incredible novel, Forty Rooms.
I'd also love title suggestions.
———
But for handfuls of sand,
the box is empty,
gaping jaws of a toothless pihrana.
My frustrated hands fumble and the top snaps closed;
there is a lock, left still, unfastened.
Freckled with the salty droplets of Poseidon's spittle,
pockmarked surfaces—
my fingers trace. The sharp seams are
yesterday's swiftly fading imaginings,
the whispered fantasies of firelit eyes,
the adrenaline and the dark and
whimsy-dusted foolishness, a byproduct of
my half-forgotten fear.
In the daylight,
lacqurered sides have lost their menacing gleam.
The sinister treasure is once again only a wooden box.
(August 8, 2017 - 12:38 pm)
Numbers.
one.
Above all things I do not want a tidy life,
a life of smallness,
an existence littered with dirty dishes
and morning newspapers and
folded laundry.
two.
It is a fate almost worse than death,
I think,
to be a non-descript dishrag
in some insipid color,
hanging off the oven door in
someone's immaculate kitchen—
arm candy, an blank-faced accessory
to blustering incompetency.
three.
People tend to consider me an optimist,
but truthfully my dispostion is more of a simple lack of pessimsim,
(I'll allow the word 'realistic')
which in today's world is as good as naive.
four.
I have no sympathy
for laying crépe.
Failure is failure,
success is success,
and there is no need
to pretend that one is the other.
five.
In the human body there are usually:
206 bones
32 teeth
37 trillion cells
2 lungs
100 billion neruons
and
1 heart.
I can't help but wonder
if there's more to us
than these sums.
It's strange to think that every thought,
every experience,
every emotion,
I have ever had or ever will
is so reliant
on this hunk of meat,
so determined but so easily— shattered.
six.
Every inch of our uniqueness
hangs off of the same skeleton.
seven.
I am not clay, made to be molded, I am
a marble block,
a Michelanglo not yet
freed.
(August 8, 2017 - 1:16 pm)
Wow! I love both of those, Abi! Right now I can't think of any possible titles for your first one, but I'm thinking! And I really love the last verse of Numbers.
(August 8, 2017 - 8:06 pm)
Thank you so much, Leafpool! The last stanza of Numbers was actually taken from a poem I wrote earlier this year which I wasn't at all satisfied with (it was called Optimism). Those lines were the only ones I liked. :P
(August 8, 2017 - 8:52 pm)
Whoa, Abi, these are awesome! You are an amazing poet!
(August 8, 2017 - 9:18 pm)
(This is a picture because I am too lazy to type out the entire thing, and it will be messed up if I copy and paste) (Hopefully this will work)
(August 8, 2017 - 10:37 pm)