Poetry Contest

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Poetry Contest

Poetry Contest

Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!

The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth. 

The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*

Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair? 

I hope to see your poems soon!

~Booksy <3 

submitted by Booksy Owly
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)

Autum, I'm so sorry that I wasn't able to post anything.  I've been super busy this past week with schoolwork and stuff (I know that doesn't really cut it as an excuse, but it's true).  I think I'll be able to post under this theme though.   

submitted by Lucy B., age 13, Emmilvien
(February 11, 2018 - 6:05 pm)

Autum, I'm so sorry that I wasn't able to post anything.  I've been super busy this past week with schoolwork and stuff (I know that doesn't really cut it as an excuse, but it's true).  I think I'll be able to post under this theme though.   

submitted by Lucy B., age 13, Emmilvien
(February 11, 2018 - 6:30 pm)

Agh I'm so sorry! I completely forgot about this thread, I'm so sorry to have contributed to your feeling neglected. Please don't feel bad about the slow posting on this thread, I think it
has nothing to do with your prompt and everything to do with the fact
that this thread has just naturally slowed down as it gets hard to
consistently write to prompts, perhaps the novelty of the contest has
worn off a bit because the thread has been around for almost a year
(isn't that awesome!), and maybe new people looking at it don't
necessarily realize that anyone can enter without having done previous
rounds, that sort of thing. Also, the last two weeks were the start of a
new school semester, and I know I, for one, have been very busy getting
used to my new classes. Anyways, that was really long and I don't mean it to be depressing, I do think we can get this thread going again if we remember to check back and post our poems and keep it on the upper first page for a bit to attract more people.

And after all that, although it's a bit late... Congrats on your awesome poem!

I agree with Leeli that your portrayal of the snow and fun of winter as being good and beautiful is beautiful and awesome (I'm sorry, that sentence kind of ran away from me and I don't know what to do with it, but I hope it makes enough sense...).

As for this round, I actually just got a good idea for the prompt speed, but identity is also a really good prompt, so I'll come up with something! I'll do what I can to get it in on time!

submitted by Pied Piper
(February 11, 2018 - 7:54 pm)

The theme is speed, right? ok, so here goes: most horrible poem I've ever written, but ever since I had to write a short writing for school this year, I can't seem to write a poem - only writing!

 

The memories

Sliding past

Too fast.

The days turn into

One

Big

Colorful

Blur

Of feelings and emotions.

Speeding up

Leaving me behind.

But then,

I find the strength,

Deep,

Deep,

Deep,

Inside me.

And I become one, with the

One

Big

Colorful 

Blur

Of feelings and emotions.

And this time, also of life. 

 

submitted by Twirlgirl, age 12, The Mountains, Milky Way
(February 12, 2018 - 8:27 pm)

Aww, Autumn, I'm so sorry! I'll be sure to write a poem for you! 

submitted by September
(February 13, 2018 - 11:20 pm)

I'm so sorry Autumn! When I saw your post with the new theme, I thought, 'Huh, cool! I'll try to write a poem for that later!' But I guess it just kinda slipped my mind and I never did. I'm really sorry no one posted, but I just wanted to say that last round, when I made the new theme, it took a really long time for people to post, too, and even when they did, I only got around five poems (which was fine!). So it's not just you. I think Piper's right about the thread slowing down and people posting less and less. 

I'll try to post a poem for the new theme later, but no promises.  

submitted by Leeli
(February 12, 2018 - 10:31 pm)

Here's my poem.

My Identity

Me.

Artist,

Writer,

Swimmer.

Me.

Insecure,

Silly,

Weird.

Me.

Shoulders,

Watch,

Glasses.

Me.

D. C.,

San Francisco,

Germany.

I'm made of places

Experiences

Acctivities.

Many things that everyone else doesn't have altogether except for me. 

submitted by Lucy B., age 13, Emmilvien
(February 13, 2018 - 11:38 pm)

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i am shadows in the background; you 

know me so well 

through photoshop face filters

i cringe when I hear 

my own voice on audio, saying, 

i am : i am : i am

you know that i will come: smell the 

puppy dog drool and fresh flowers 

perfume dabbed behind my ears

mint gum and cold water 

we blow bubbles for the perfect

picture: smiles that sound like 

old history; sharing a secret

they’ll never know 

making earrings at the eclectic 

even though gold plated is never enough

we always did fine

dark hallways and lockers slamming shut

passing books between classes; three bookmarks

three people 

because we always had too much time 

and too much to say

the click-clack of computer keys

over the silent screams 

i am over the moon; i am the 

deus ex machina 

watch me fall because 

they’ll catch me 

submitted by September
(February 15, 2018 - 12:40 am)

(Insert pained gasping here)

(How??)

submitted by Leafpool, age Finite, This side of reality
(February 15, 2018 - 10:46 am)

Oh my gosh. This is gorgeous.  

submitted by Abigail, age Old enough, Inside my head
(February 15, 2018 - 6:56 pm)

thankss! 

submitted by Sept
(February 16, 2018 - 4:45 pm)

I think I’m going to judge tomorrow, if that’s okay.  Meanwhile, here’s a revised version of the poem I submitted to the regular poetry thread. This isn’t in the contest, but it is about identity.

I’m hazel eyes from the middle of spring

I’m auburn hair and freckles in the summer

I’m scuffed up seashell sneakers with mismatched laces

I’m racing in the wind with my best friend.

I’m trying to cartwheel but falling laughing in the grass

I’m T-shirts, sweaters, and elephant pants.

I’m flowers in the springtime and maple in the fall

I’m sitting with Hazel and listening to the rain.  

I’m dancing and I’m twirling, clapping out a beat.

I’m Indian and Danish, I’m Portland through and through 

I’m the music and the sky, I’m the trees and the flowers, I’m my friends and I’m alone.

I’m my successes and my fails, I’m my summers and I’m rain.

But through it all, I’m just another person

trying to live life with meaning

trying to live as best I can. 

 

 

submitted by Autumn Moon, age 11, Here
(February 15, 2018 - 11:09 pm)

I love that, Autumn! It's really good!

submitted by Leeli
(February 16, 2018 - 11:11 am)

I love it! Aggh, I didn't think you would judge so soon. I guess I don't have time to write a poem, then, but that's okay. I probably wouldn't make the deadline anyway because I'm really busy.

Question: if, as I'm assuming from the poem, you live in a Portland, do you live in Portland, Maine or Portland, Oregon? Because I live in Portland ME.

submitted by Leafpool, age Finite, This side of reality
(February 16, 2018 - 4:22 pm)

I live in Portland Oregon! I've never been to Portland Maine, but I know a bit about it and it sounds cool. Alright, judging time...

In third place... Lucy! I realize there was only three entries, but I liked your poem! My favorite part was the way you repeated the word "me". It gave the poem a rhythm and tied the whole thing together. One thing you could have done was make the last line more dramatic by putting in a pause- like

Many things that everyone else doesn't have altogether

except

for me. 

But that's just what I think. (I love weird pauses XD)

In second place- Twirlgirl! It was really hard to judge. I loved the way you used rhythm and spacing. 

And drumroll please...

In first place~ September! It was so close, I wish I didn't have to judge, but the last lines kind of decided it. I really liked the way you wrote them.

i am over the moon; i am the 

deus ex machina 

watch me fall because 

they’ll catch me 

Those lines really made the poem end great, and leave me with a lasting sense of what the poem was about.  What are you going to pick for the next theme?

(By the way, I'm still Autumn, I just decided to change my name to Blue Moon. You can see the post on the front page of Chirp at Cricket)

submitted by Blue Moon, age 11, Formerly Autumn Moon
(February 17, 2018 - 2:45 pm)