Poetry Contest

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Poetry Contest

Poetry Contest

Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!

The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth. 

The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*

Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair? 

I hope to see your poems soon!

~Booksy <3 

submitted by Booksy Owly
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)

Aw, thanks. Exclamation points are great, btw! XD 

Okay, anyway, I forgot to post the deadline. So I think January 1 will be the deadline for the new contest. If anyone isn't done or we ave only a few submissions, (or if I forget) I will extend the deadline. But please try to get your submissions in before the deadline if you possibly can. I know this season is a very busy time of year, so I'm going to say January 1 is a loosely planned judging day. 

Carry on! 

submitted by Leeli
(December 20, 2017 - 9:24 am)

Cold

Cold eyes

Cold face

Cold heart

Cold soul

Towards me

Warm eyes

Warm face

Warm heart

towards them

If you are capable of warmness

To everyone,

Why are you cold

To me? 

submitted by Lucy B., age 13, Emmilvien
(December 22, 2017 - 2:42 pm)

Top. Will post. Soonish. Possibly. I shall tryyyyyyyy.

Don't die, thread! You are too remarkable to die! 

"fcoi"

I still don't know what you are, Captcha. Will you care to reveal yourself to me, or will you just tell me unimportant things, such as "fcoi?"

*"fcoi fcoi fcoi"*

*Sad face*

**Puppy dog face**

You ares a dog anyway and yous are cutessssss 

*Aruff ruff* 

submitted by Stargirl, age 14, Earth
(December 23, 2017 - 2:18 am)

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Stargirl 

submitted by Toptoptoptoptoptop, age toptoptop, toptoptoptoptoptoptop!!!!
(December 26, 2017 - 10:41 pm)

Ice Crystal 

Ice crystal

Frozen thar

Ice crystal

On the car

 

Why

Do we have to scrape

Why

Can't we just escape

 

Gonna be late

A few minutes late

Gonna be late

You made us wait 

 

You can be pretty

Only sometimes

You can be pretty

But now, you cause whines 

submitted by Kitten
(December 27, 2017 - 12:18 pm)

Good job, Leeli! I'll post one if I get a chance.

submitted by Winterbranch
(December 30, 2017 - 2:13 pm)

Thamk you! I'd love it if you entered one. :)

submitted by Leeli
(December 31, 2017 - 10:47 am)

So, tomorrow was going to be the judging date, but since there are only two poems in as of yet, if we don't get any more by tomorrow, I will be extending the deadline until the fifth of January. 

submitted by POEMS DUE TOMORROW, age Chop chop!, Leeli
(December 31, 2017 - 10:49 am)

Okay, so I know this is bad, but can you extend it more? I just got back into school and have been super busy, so I haven't had time. If you don't want to, that's fine, but I get the feeling that other people are probably busy too. 

submitted by Stargirl, age 14, Earth
(January 5, 2018 - 8:06 pm)

Sure, I'll extend it an extra week. So judging will now be on the twelfth. 

submitted by DeadlineExtended!, Leeli
(January 7, 2018 - 9:33 am)
submitted by KittenOfTheTops
(January 6, 2018 - 9:55 pm)
submitted by Top! Please post!, Kitten
(January 12, 2018 - 2:59 pm)
submitted by Top! Please post!
(January 12, 2018 - 6:03 pm)

Hi, so I haven't written any poetry in a while and I'm not entirely happy with this (maybe it's just the somewhat-rhymes, I'm not used to thinking about rhyming...), but I don't want this thread to die (and if anyone feels like giving some helpful critique that'd be nice too) so here ya go:

 

Winter.

 

White on black on grey on white

your breath so cold it freezes sound

silently the darkness steals

our laughter, songs, our warmth and green

 

Blind, we wait and hope for light

and ev'ry morn we think of spring

buried deep, asleep, unheard

forgotten, like the birds that fled

 

'Cross a frozen waste of night

the wind blows powder-snow like dust

forming strange and shifting shapes

and we see naught but shadow-flakes

 

High above, the sky grows bright

the clouds retreat and ice reflects

summer colours, ribbon ghosts

they snap across the starry dark

 

White on blue on black on white

a crow cries out for sun and mate

winter cracks and sunlight steals

up from its prison 'neath the frost

 

Thaw.

submitted by Pied Piper
(January 12, 2018 - 7:27 pm)

Thanks for posting! I like the 'white on blue on black on white', and your use of interesting words. And the last word being separate. And the transition from winter to spring. And, well, I mean to say I like it. My poems are far worse. :)

submitted by Kitten
(January 12, 2018 - 8:47 pm)