Poetry Contest

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Poetry Contest

Poetry Contest

Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!

The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth. 

The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*

Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair? 

I hope to see your poems soon!

~Booksy <3 

submitted by Booksy Owly
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)

Ok, phew! I'm not the only one that likes school!

By the way, Leafy, I love the *____*'s! They made me laugh so hard! 

submitted by Twirlgirl, age 12, The Mountains, Milky Way
(March 7, 2018 - 4:45 pm)

So, after a bit of though I've decided on the new theme. Not change, because it's been done before on this thread. It's a cool subject, and I'm not saying we can't do it again, but I'm not choosing it. And school is also an interesting subject, but it's just not one I would choose. So, I had a hard time choosing a new theme because there were so many I liked but eventually, I picked one..... *drumroll* The new theme is....

Sunrise/sunsets. Take this however you want--you could write about the dawn of a new day, or describe a sunset, or whatever the heck you want to do. Have your poems in by the 22nd.  

submitted by Leafpool, age Finite, This side of reality
(March 8, 2018 - 10:35 am)

*sings* sunriiiise sunset, sunriiiise sunset... 

I'll have mine in soon :) don't blame me if it's on Fiddler on The Roof!

*skips away humming* "wonder of wonders, miracle of miracles!" 

submitted by Rose bud, MUSICAL THEATER CALLING
(March 8, 2018 - 9:47 pm)

Okay, so this is kind of from a book I'm writing, but in poem form. 

The sunrise

The sun is a glowing orb casting light in the darkness of night.

Gone is the monsters and nightmares, here is a new day.

Morning color spreads like dripping paint across the sky.

A soft glow of rose pink 

A bright burst of orange.

Welcome today

Good bye yesterday

Soon it will be tomorrow

And the sun will rise again.  

submitted by Neko Risingspirit
(March 9, 2018 - 1:02 pm)

Some moments are like a sunrise, bright and beautiful

the clouds turning orange and gold.

The sky turning from black

to violet

to blue.

Like a moment, a sunrise is short, and not many people see it

but you can tell it happened

by the day the sunrise brings.

submitted by Blue Moon, age 11, Formerly Autumn Moon
(March 9, 2018 - 7:18 pm)

New Dawn

Tiny shards of lights show against 

The deep black sky of night

Although most people are still sleeping quietly

The world seems too still, tensed

It is the instant before dawn

 

It starts slowly

Blink and you miss it

A small, faint glimmer of light

Hides beneath the horizon

Pale colors infiltrate the night

As an invisible hand begins to paint the sky

 

Now one can see it;

A beautiful glowing semicircle

Glowing on the horizon

A streak of orange

A streak of purple

The stars begin to fade

 

Then, suddenly, all at once,

The sun rises up

And up

And up

And the sky is purple and pink and orange and red all around it

And stars still twinkle

Illuminating, ornamentating the dark corners of the sky

And the darkness gives way to soft light

And the grass is sprinkled in dew

And the whole world is a shining jewel

Clean and new and big and bright

 

But as suddenly as it started--

It's over

The last star winks out

The sun rises above the horizon 

And all the colors have departed

That is, all exept one

For as the sun rises

Higher

and

Higher 

The soft lavender gives way to blue

Brilliant, radiant blue

 

The people wake up,

They begin to start their day

Most weren't lucky enough to witness the

Splendor and firey glory and color and stars and light and dark and--

 

They continue out

Not knowing, not having seen

And yet,

An artist paints beautiful pictures

Her hand paints the sky

A doctor heals the sick

Shows them the light that's hovering below the horizon

And a couple kiss

Alone, on the beach

And their faces shine brighter than the sun

And the people make their own

New

Dawn 

submitted by Shy Peacock, Tree of Life
(March 9, 2018 - 9:18 pm)

Wow, that’s amazing Shy! I especially like the lines:

And stars still twinkle

Illuminating, ornamenting the dark corners of the sky

and the darkness gives way to soft light

and the grass is sprinkled in dew

and the whole world is a shining jewel

Clean and new and big and bright 

submitted by Blue Moon, age 11, Formerly Autumn Moon
(March 10, 2018 - 12:36 pm)

Thank you so much! Yours is really good too! I tried to play with the rhyme scheme and the word "and" to communicate the images and emotions. Did you notice that? I used a rhyme dictionary way too much. I liked all of the metaphors and layers in yours, all of the things you didn't say. I love disecting poems. It feels like I'm on a scavenger hunt, peeling away layers to find hidden meaning.

My CAPTCHA says atad. No, I think mine is a bit more than a tad longer than yours :). That's the secoond word(s) I've gotten. 

submitted by Shy Peacock, Tree of Life
(March 12, 2018 - 5:34 pm)

A weeping crescendo,

Wavering for a second,

From reds, to oranges,

To a deep shade of purple,

Stars beginning to form,

And then-

A dark night sky,

After a sunset. 

submitted by Quirker, age 14
(March 9, 2018 - 9:44 pm)

digital darkroom 

i always miss the sunrise: 

i am tired eyes and cold water, 

retro alarm clocks that ring too loudly, 

darkened bathrooms that feel like moving through

20th century film cameras, hand cranked, 

grainy photographs in slow motion. 

i’ve never missed the sunset: 

i am tired eyes and bright lights

taking photos on camera phones, 

my room when the lights are on, blinding brightness

like the sun but concentrated, 

hunched over a computer screen watching it load.  

submitted by september
(March 13, 2018 - 8:43 pm)

Here's my poem - I hope I'm not too late!:

All is dark.

Dim.

Then a searing white line splits the sky.

Colors fizz through the early morning.

Orange, yellow, pink, blue.

The bright light hits a sparkling turquoise lake,

And it dazzles all who see it.

It causes hope and joy to swell inside me.

Then, slowly, the light fades.

People begin to trickle out of the buildings,

Until it turns to a continuous flow.

The street quickly becomes crowded, taking away the bliss.

But the joy and strength that sunrunse left behind...

Will never fade. 

 

submitted by Twirlgirl, age 12, The Mountains, Milky Way
(March 15, 2018 - 7:11 pm)

her sunrise was today

her sunset, today

why

why, sunset

why could you not save us

the daytime

the daytime

she didn't have the daytime

whose idea was it

to have sunsets

at all

why can't

we just

savor the daytime 

submitted by Kitten
(March 16, 2018 - 11:49 am)

Judging on Thursday!

submitted by Leafpool, age Finite, This side of reality
(March 20, 2018 - 12:10 pm)

Whooo! Same day as my play! Can't wait - but I have a cold, so I'm really hoping I get better before it or I don't know how I'm going to do my part!

submitted by Twirlgirl, age 12, The Mountains, Milky Way
(March 21, 2018 - 2:28 pm)

I hope you get better in time! 

submitted by Leafpool, age Finite, This side of reality
(March 21, 2018 - 3:39 pm)