Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
(March 22, 2018 - 12:22 pm)
Results! First of all, I had a hard time judging this round, especially for first place, because everyone wrote great poems! Second, sorry that I couldn't go more in-depth into my choices for placing, because 1) I'm bad at complimenting people, it always comes out really awkward and 2) I'm also short on time (aren't I always) so, I guess, apologies are due. Here are the results anyway.
Honorable mention goes to Quirker! I liked the "weeping crescendo" simile that you used, and also the imagery and how it's simply, purely the description of a sunset.
In third place we have September. As always, this was a great poem! If I can criticize you a bit, with no hard feelings intended, I'd say it wasn't your best work but I liked the way you worked in photography metaphors!
Second place--Kitten. This poem had a cool rhythm that I don't always see in poems. And I loved the lines "why, sunset/why could you not save us" and "whose idea was it/to have sunsets/at all"
First place goes to Shy Peacock. This was a beautiful poem, I loved how you used a lot of description and I liked the overall feel that the poem had. Congratulations!
(March 22, 2018 - 12:24 pm)
Sqeeeeeeeee! AaaaAAAAAAAAAHHH!! I. Just. Won. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
I saw this and I actually squeeled! Thank you so much Leafpool, it really means a lot to me. Congrats to everyone who participated, especially to Quirker, September, and Kitten! I think I'll post the new theme and due date tomorrow or the next day.
(March 22, 2018 - 4:13 pm)
:) You're welcome.
(March 23, 2018 - 2:49 pm)
Hm. Or maybe tomorrow...
(March 24, 2018 - 8:15 pm)
Um, Shy? Are you still here? What’s the new theme?
(March 31, 2018 - 11:48 am)
Ack. Sorry! I went on vacation for 5 days. The theme is magic, as I'm about to post.
(April 2, 2018 - 7:23 pm)
Sorry I'm so late, but I'm here to anounce the new theme and due date!
The theme is magic. Whether it be about a fantasy spell, your favorite card trick, a wish come true, or just the small wonders that are everyday miracles, write a poem about magic! It can be about your belief in magic (or lack thereof), or your favorite book, or your wand, or your pet unicorn, or... *trails off dreamily*
Okay, so whatever it be about, try to get your poem in by the 17th!
Good luck, and happy writing.
I hope your poems are magical!!
(April 2, 2018 - 7:30 pm)
Hmm... I think I'll go for an unconventional kind of magic.
Magical
Coach says the team isn't trying hard enough.
Coach says we need more motivation.
And it's magic
Magic
That I got over my asthma
That I could go fast despite the pain
That I could do it
That I could...
Coach calls me after practice
"What is it?"
"You know why I never worry about you?"
"Why?"
"Because I know you always try hard."
It must be magic
Magic
That someone thinks of me in that way.
That someone knows I try.
That someone feels like I'm worth it
Even though I feel like I'm...
~~~
Yes. It's bad. I know. It's bad. It doesn't go that well into the theme.
(April 3, 2018 - 1:24 am)
I won't be submitting another poem, but I'd like to say
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAT????????!!!! I got SECOND? That's just... wow. Wow. I never thought I was going to write a good enough poem to compare to all you amazing writers. Thank you.
(April 8, 2018 - 1:09 pm)
I was looking for magic
turning over every rock, going 'round every bend
I looked into the sky and wondered about the little bits of light,
twinkling in the sky like sea spray splashed up into the moon
Maybe they're faeries, or fireflies, or a million other things, sprinkled across the sky like silver glitter fallen from the bag.
But I never never found a true sign of magic
the butterfly with the elvish body could have been a hoax.
But I think I found something better in the rain and in the wind
I won't say I found everyday magic
in the sun rising and bringing us the day,
or in the heartbeat of a little animal
tucked in close to me.
No, saying I found everyday magic is too corny
it's what some teacher or little kid's book would say.
But I do know what the little bits of light are now
they're millions and millions of stars.
(April 10, 2018 - 8:08 pm)
Wow, I love that so much, Blue Moon! It's amazing!
(April 23, 2018 - 8:13 am)
Hi Booksy!
This doesn’t have anything to do with poems, but I am an older CBer(Young Writer) who has returned and changed their name to Licensed Bookworm. A few CBers were wondering if they could call me Booky for short, and I just wanted to make sure that it’s okay with you. I don’t think there’ll be a conflict, but if there is, you have name seniority! :D
-Licensed Bookworm/Young Writer
(April 16, 2018 - 11:31 am)
Booksy....hasn't been around for over half a year, sadly, but it would probably be okay if you were called Booky, although to avoid confusion something like Bookworm might be better.
(April 17, 2018 - 9:13 am)
Or Wormy XP
(April 17, 2018 - 5:38 pm)