Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
*hugs* I'm sorry Lucy. If you ever need to talk about it, you know you can come to the CB. I'll be praying for you and your family. :,-(
(July 22, 2017 - 3:06 pm)
Oh Lucy! That's so sad! You probably already know this, but we are here for you if you ver need to just vent your feelings. *Hugs*
(July 22, 2017 - 3:26 pm)
Oh Lucy. Hold onto hope, okay? We're here for you.
(July 22, 2017 - 6:13 pm)
Oh, Lucy! *Hugs* I'm always here for you, Lucy. If there is anything I can do, just let me know okay? We're all here for you. <3
(July 23, 2017 - 5:46 pm)
Oh my gosh! I can't believe it! Second place!! Congratulations to Biblio, Ruby, Rose, Booksy, and everyone else for writing such amazing poems. :) I love this thread.
(July 22, 2017 - 3:02 pm)
Oooh, I have something for this! It's a poem based around the fact that Ultramarine blue paint used to be so hard to make that it was worth its weight in gold, and how some artists look down on other artists whose style is more abstract.
ultramarine
they worship the
classics, not making
room for new ideas
until they're buried
6 feet under in
a colorful decaying mind
their minds are dim and
dark with a splash
of ultramarine
(reserved, treasured,
beautiful)
we are the generation of
synthetic paint
painting the sky as
blue as we want it
to be
we don't follow the
old rules, we splatter
colors and scribble
wildly and we make
art because
we are
art
(July 22, 2017 - 3:07 pm)
Supernovae
I am not one from here
I am not a mindless creature of mud
Like so many others
Was it red, the day of my creation?
Did the sky burst in a tomato-soup scarlet
From which blood came?
Was it electric blue, a blinding white?
Or was it many-colored, like Picasso
Took a brain dump?
I am greater than this
To call me an animal is shame that will not be forgotten
And I have a long memory
They say the birth of creation wasn't enough
Only the light gasses were made
Hydrogen, Helium, Lithium
A watery cocktail
Not thick enough, not potent enough
Too thin a blanket for me
I am bolder than this
While others are preoccupied with their petty squabbles
I take in the night sky
The universe enfolds me
But stars~
They horde the heat, the fiery power
Until their death
Shrinking to the size of a Ping-pong ball
And then exploding over millions and millions of miles
Only they can forge me from the very bones
Chains, best left unbroken
I am higher than this
And I will return
Once
To my birthplace
Encased in a metal bird
Maybe it's foolhardy
The black curtain of space does not forgive
But what can I say?
I will let it take me once again
For I am made
Of stardust
AUTHOR'S NOTE: Scientists believe that the Big Bang, the supposed start of the universe, was actually not hot enough to create any more elements than Hydrogen, Helium, and a whiff of Lithium. However, supernovae, the inward collapses and explosions of supergiant stars, actually had enough heat to forge the other elements, including carbon, the organic element that humans and all other living things are made of. So, life was supposedly born from dying stars. How cool is that?
(July 22, 2017 - 6:05 pm)
Oops~ Not all the italics carried through! Here's the original version, I hope it works-
Supernovae
I am not one from here
I am not a mindless creature of mud
Like so many others
Was it red, the day of my creation?
Did the sky burst in a tomato-soup scarlet
From which blood came?
Was it electric blue, a blinding white?
Or was it many-colored, like Picasso
Took a brain dump?
I am greater than this
To call me an animal is shame that will not be forgotten
And I have a long memory
They say the birth of creation wasn't enough
Only the light gasses were made
Hydrogen, Helium, Lithium
A watery cocktail
Not thick enough, not potent enough
Too thin a blanket for me
I am bolder than this
While others are preoccupied with their petty squabbles
I take in the night sky
The universe enfolds me
But stars~
They horde the heat, the fiery power
Until their death
Shrinking to the size of a Ping-pong ball
And then exploding over millions and millions of miles
Only they can forge me from the very bones
Chains, best left unbroken
I am higher than this
And I will return
Once
To my birthplace
Encased in a metal bird
Maybe it's foolhardy
The black curtain of space does not forgive
But what can I say?
I will let it take me once again
For I am made
Of stardust
AUTHOR'S NOTE: Scientists believe that the Big Bang, the supposed start of the universe, was actually not hot enough to create any more elements than Hydrogen, Helium, and a whiff of Lithium. However, supernovae, the inward collapses and explosions of supergiant stars, actually had enough heat to forge the other elements, including carbon, the organic element that humans and all other living things are made of. So, life was supposedly born from dying stars. How cool is that?
(July 22, 2017 - 8:39 pm)
Although this is a great poem, and an interesting concept...how could the universe be formed in a single bang. I believe it was handcrafted by an all-mighty creator.
My CAPTCHA says mudp.
(July 22, 2017 - 10:28 pm)
(July 23, 2017 - 7:42 am)
I believe that too... I actually believe both may be true.
(July 23, 2017 - 7:45 am)
Yes, that was me. It's the first time I ever used an alias except on an SI. Anywho, I wanted to say that I thought believing both may be true was an interesting point of view I hadn't heard of yet. I hope my post wasn't offensive in any way.
(July 23, 2017 - 8:15 am)
My first Rondel (so it's not very good) about how we never get a white Christmas, taking place to winters ago.
Southern heat never stops for Christmas
Although the sky grows cold and dull
And golden leaves shiver through fall
Somehow the snow always missed us
The laughing breeze became capricious;
Every day cut shorter come nightfall
But southern heat never stops for Christmas
Although the sky grows cold and dull
In short sleeves, I watched the stillness
As the Christmas wind began to waltz
I waited for a chill, but the winter seemed to stall
Closing my eyes, I wished for a cold crispness
Though southern heat never stops for Christmas.
(July 24, 2017 - 11:34 am)
Also, Ashlee, thank you so much for your judging! That was really encouraging to everyone and you had some great notes.
(July 24, 2017 - 11:55 am)
Top this thread!
(July 25, 2017 - 8:53 am)