Poetry Contest

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Poetry Contest

Poetry Contest

Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!

The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth. 

The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*

Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair? 

I hope to see your poems soon!

~Booksy <3 

submitted by Booksy Owly
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)

*hugs* I'm sorry Lucy. If you ever need to talk about it, you know you can come to the CB. I'll be praying for you and your family. :,-(

submitted by Leeli
(July 22, 2017 - 3:06 pm)

Oh Lucy! That's so sad! You probably already know this, but we are here for you if you ver need to just vent your feelings. *Hugs*

submitted by Epic Fangirl
(July 22, 2017 - 3:26 pm)

Oh Lucy. Hold onto hope, okay? We're here for you. 

submitted by Jarvis, age ???
(July 22, 2017 - 6:13 pm)

Oh, Lucy! *Hugs* I'm always here for you, Lucy. If there is anything I can do, just let me know okay? We're all here for you. <3

submitted by Silverwaxwing
(July 23, 2017 - 5:46 pm)

Oh my gosh! I can't believe it! Second place!! Congratulations to Biblio, Ruby, Rose, Booksy, and everyone else for writing such amazing poems. :) I love this thread.

submitted by Abigail S., age 13, Nose in a Book
(July 22, 2017 - 3:02 pm)

Oooh, I have something for this! It's a poem based around the fact that Ultramarine blue paint used to be so hard to make that it was worth its weight in gold, and how some artists look down on other artists whose style is more abstract. 

ultramarine 

they worship the

classics, not making

room for new ideas

until they're buried

6 feet under in

a colorful decaying mind

 

their minds are dim and

dark with a splash

of ultramarine

(reserved, treasured,

beautiful)

 

we are the generation of

synthetic paint

 

painting the sky as

blue as we want it

to be 

 

we don't follow the

old rules, we splatter

colors and scribble

wildly and we make

art because

 

we are

art 

submitted by Bluebird
(July 22, 2017 - 3:07 pm)

Supernovae

I am not one from here

I am not a mindless creature of mud

Like so many others

 

Was it red, the day of my creation? 

Did the sky burst in a tomato-soup scarlet

From which blood came?

Was it electric blue, a blinding white?

Or was it many-colored, like Picasso 

Took a brain dump?

 

I am greater than this

To call me an animal is shame that will not be forgotten

And I have a long memory

 

They say the birth of creation wasn't enough

Only the light gasses were made

Hydrogen, Helium, Lithium

A watery cocktail

Not thick enough, not potent enough

Too thin a blanket for me

 

I am bolder than this

While others are preoccupied with their petty squabbles

I take in the night sky

The universe enfolds me

 

But stars~

They horde the heat, the fiery power

Until their death

Shrinking to the size of a Ping-pong ball

And then exploding over millions and millions of miles

Only they can forge me from the very bones

Chains, best left unbroken

 

I am higher than this

And I will return 

Once

To my birthplace

Encased in a metal bird

Maybe it's foolhardy

The black curtain of space does not forgive

But what can I say? 

I will let it take me once again

For I am made

Of stardust

 

 

AUTHOR'S NOTE: Scientists believe that the Big Bang, the supposed start of the universe, was actually not hot enough to create any more elements than Hydrogen, Helium, and a whiff of Lithium. However, supernovae, the inward collapses and explosions of supergiant stars, actually had enough heat to forge the other elements, including carbon, the organic element that humans and all other living things are made of. So, life was supposedly born from dying stars. How cool is that? 

submitted by Jarvis, age ???
(July 22, 2017 - 6:05 pm)

Oops~ Not all the italics carried through! Here's the original version, I hope it works-

Supernovae

I am not one from here

I am not a mindless creature of mud

Like so many others

 

Was it red, the day of my creation? 

Did the sky burst in a tomato-soup scarlet

From which blood came?

Was it electric blue, a blinding white?

Or was it many-colored, like Picasso 

Took a brain dump?

 

I am greater than this

To call me an animal is shame that will not be forgotten

And I have a long memory

 

They say the birth of creation wasn't enough

Only the light gasses were made

Hydrogen, Helium, Lithium

A watery cocktail

Not thick enough, not potent enough

Too thin a blanket for me

 

I am bolder than this

While others are preoccupied with their petty squabbles

I take in the night sky

The universe enfolds me

 

But stars~

They horde the heat, the fiery power

Until their death

Shrinking to the size of a Ping-pong ball

And then exploding over millions and millions of miles

Only they can forge me from the very bones

Chains, best left unbroken

 

I am higher than this

And I will return 

Once

To my birthplace

Encased in a metal bird

Maybe it's foolhardy

The black curtain of space does not forgive

But what can I say? 

I will let it take me once again

For I am made

Of stardust

 

 

 

AUTHOR'S NOTE: Scientists believe that the Big Bang, the supposed start of the universe, was actually not hot enough to create any more elements than Hydrogen, Helium, and a whiff of Lithium. However, supernovae, the inward collapses and explosions of supergiant stars, actually had enough heat to forge the other elements, including carbon, the organic element that humans and all other living things are made of. So, life was supposedly born from dying stars. How cool is that? 

submitted by Jarvis, age ???
(July 22, 2017 - 8:39 pm)

Although this is a great poem, and an interesting concept...how could the universe be formed in a single bang. I believe it was handcrafted by an all-mighty creator.  

My CAPTCHA says mudp.  

submitted by A Different Opinion
(July 22, 2017 - 10:28 pm)
submitted by Nobody Really Knows, age be both, It could be one, It could
(July 23, 2017 - 7:42 am)

I believe that too... I actually believe both may be true. 

submitted by Jarvis, age ???
(July 23, 2017 - 7:45 am)

Yes, that was me. It's the first time I ever used an alias except on an SI. Anywho, I wanted to say that I thought believing both may be true was an interesting point of view I hadn't heard of yet. I hope my post wasn't offensive in any way. 

submitted by Leeli
(July 23, 2017 - 8:15 am)

My first Rondel (so it's not very good) about how we never get a white Christmas, taking place to winters ago. 

 

Southern heat never stops for Christmas

Although the sky grows cold and dull

And golden leaves shiver through fall

Somehow the snow always missed us

The laughing breeze became capricious;

Every day cut shorter come nightfall

But southern heat never stops for Christmas

Although the sky grows cold and dull

In short sleeves, I watched the stillness

As the Christmas wind began to waltz

I waited for a chill, but the winter seemed to stall

Closing my eyes, I wished for a cold crispness

Though southern heat never stops for Christmas.

 

 

submitted by Rose bud
(July 24, 2017 - 11:34 am)

Also, Ashlee, thank you so much for your judging! That was really encouraging to everyone and you had some great notes. 

 

submitted by Rose bud
(July 24, 2017 - 11:55 am)

Top this thread! 

submitted by Top!, age TOP HATS!, Toppington
(July 25, 2017 - 8:53 am)