Poetry Contest

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Poetry Contest

Poetry Contest

Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!

The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth. 

The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*

Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair? 

I hope to see your poems soon!

~Booksy <3 

submitted by Booksy Owly
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)

I'm writing a form poem but I might not have the syllables equal (I've been frantically digging through synonym finders to find words with more or less syllables) on every line by the deadline! So...you may or may not get a dream poem in form. 

submitted by Rose bud
(July 10, 2017 - 12:01 pm)

Good luck writing it in time, Rose bud! Even if you don't finish it before the deadline, we'd love to read it anyway. (And ah, yes, synonym finders. I love them and loathe them.)

submitted by Abigail S., age 12, Nose in a Book
(July 11, 2017 - 8:47 am)

Oh for heavens sakes, Rosy, your poetry is always so amazing that a few syllables won't make a difference. I'm jelous that you can even write a poem that's in form, wow! Good luck, though!

submitted by Booksy Owly
(July 11, 2017 - 11:22 am)

This one is really rather nonsensical and dissolved into a tangent of sorts. Take out of it what you will.

——— 

empty space

i live

in the in-betweens

in the dreams and the diamonds and the

crystal wristwatches,

before time was invented and after it wasn't.

i live

in a one-story skyscraper

on the edge of a sphere

where anything can exist

but nothing does. 

i know more than it is possible to understand.

the universe has no secrets—

everything is there,

stacked on the shelves; just

waiting

for someone to dig it up

but you all have lost your shovels

and video game controllers

won't do.

it doesn't matter anyway. 

the meaning of life is spicy food and skydiving,

and chaos and thunderstorms and

making a mess, life is for

taking, for marathons, for hurricanes,

for stars.

life is not for

something

as perfectly ridiculous as 

dreams;

which (of course) means

life is not for

someone

as perfectly ridiculous as

me.

submitted by Abigail S., age 12, Nose in a Book
(July 10, 2017 - 4:57 pm)

That was really good Abi. I especially like that last part, "life is not for/something/as perfectly ridiculous as/dreams;/which (of course) means/life is not for/someone/as perfectly ridiculous as/me." It really symbolizes that life is absolute chaos sometimes, and that sometimes it cannot be exactly that.

submitted by Epic Fangirl
(July 10, 2017 - 8:15 pm)

Oh my goodness, I love that one Abi! The metaphors and imagery are simply sublime.

submitted by Booksy Owly
(July 11, 2017 - 11:18 am)

I like writing them off the top of my head.  It's fun!

Dreaming

Dreams.

Fleeting, memorable,
Beautiful

Dreams.

Looking down
On us like
Birds in the sky

Or the stars
Up in space.

If you reach up and touch one,
You'll see it's sparks
And feel the energy
Coursing through your veins.

And then you'll try
To achieve that dream,
And imagine
How it will feel
To accomplish that dream.

Dreams.

Fleeting, memorable,
Beautiful,

Dreams. 

submitted by Lucy B., age 13, California
(July 10, 2017 - 8:36 pm)

I'm working on mine! I've been brainstorming verses and I have phrases floating around in my head. I feel like for once I might actually write something worthwhile.

submitted by Leafpool, age Eternal, Hidden in the forest
(July 11, 2017 - 9:37 am)

Leafpool, your writing is always worthwhile. Don't be so hard on yourelf.

submitted by Epic Fangirl
(July 11, 2017 - 12:11 pm)

Ooh, I'm excited! 

submitted by September
(July 12, 2017 - 1:06 pm)

Here's my entry, I would love some critique!

Dreaming with open eyes

i used to look for stars on clear nights

i used to complain that i didn’t want to sleep

and force my eyes open through the yawns

because i preferred dreaming with open eyes

 

now, i only long to spend a moment unconscious

the clear night sky is tinted with smoke

and i can’t sleep 

i can’t

sleep

i can’t

but i still remember what it feels like to look for stars

i’m not afraid to dream with open eyes

for dreams, the sleep is merely a disguise

 

i’d like to say i learned to fly on broken wings

i used to be a lark 

i’ve turned a nightingale

but i can fly

i can

fly

i can

if only i believe

i used to see the world in pink and blue

but i refuse to see nothing but shadows

 

come for me, aim for me

they’re not okay with me, fighting me

i used to dream of being beautiful

but now i only wish i were invincible

for i can bear scars but i can’t bear blood

i can’t

blood

i can’t

but as long as there is night there will be day

i believe in the sunrise i believe in someday

 

everything crumbles, every home

every heart, every wish, every hope

but not every dream

they can’t explode dreams

they can’t

dreams

they can’t

as long as hearts beat, drums beat, boots beat

i can’t sleep but i can

dream

 

 

submitted by Booksy Owly
(July 11, 2017 - 11:15 am)

This is so much better than what I wrote, Booksy. This is just, it's just, I can't. It's too good. Wow. 

submitted by Leeli
(July 11, 2017 - 5:36 pm)

OH MY GANDALF THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! Just so, so powerful. THIS IS WHY I LOVE YOU GUYS' POETRY!! BECAUSE IT'S AMAZING AND POWERFUL AND FULL OF EMOTION!! Ok, no more caps lock. Sorry about that. But you people do write amazing poetry.

submitted by Epic Fangirl
(July 11, 2017 - 6:02 pm)

It's so awesome!!  I would NOT be surprised if this won. 

submitted by Lucy B., age 13, California
(July 11, 2017 - 10:24 pm)

Oh my gosh, I love this, Booksy!! <333

submitted by September
(July 12, 2017 - 1:04 pm)