Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
I'm writing a form poem but I might not have the syllables equal (I've been frantically digging through synonym finders to find words with more or less syllables) on every line by the deadline! So...you may or may not get a dream poem in form.
(July 10, 2017 - 12:01 pm)
Good luck writing it in time, Rose bud! Even if you don't finish it before the deadline, we'd love to read it anyway. (And ah, yes, synonym finders. I love them and loathe them.)
(July 11, 2017 - 8:47 am)
Oh for heavens sakes, Rosy, your poetry is always so amazing that a few syllables won't make a difference. I'm jelous that you can even write a poem that's in form, wow! Good luck, though!
(July 11, 2017 - 11:22 am)
This one is really rather nonsensical and dissolved into a tangent of sorts. Take out of it what you will.
———
empty space
i live
in the in-betweens
in the dreams and the diamonds and the
crystal wristwatches,
before time was invented and after it wasn't.
i live
in a one-story skyscraper
on the edge of a sphere
where anything can exist
but nothing does.
i know more than it is possible to understand.
the universe has no secrets—
everything is there,
stacked on the shelves; just
waiting
for someone to dig it up
but you all have lost your shovels
and video game controllers
won't do.
it doesn't matter anyway.
the meaning of life is spicy food and skydiving,
and chaos and thunderstorms and
making a mess, life is for
taking, for marathons, for hurricanes,
for stars.
life is not for
something
as perfectly ridiculous as
dreams;
which (of course) means
life is not for
someone
as perfectly ridiculous as
me.
(July 10, 2017 - 4:57 pm)
That was really good Abi. I especially like that last part, "life is not for/something/as perfectly ridiculous as/dreams;/which (of course) means/life is not for/someone/as perfectly ridiculous as/me." It really symbolizes that life is absolute chaos sometimes, and that sometimes it cannot be exactly that.
(July 10, 2017 - 8:15 pm)
Oh my goodness, I love that one Abi! The metaphors and imagery are simply sublime.
(July 11, 2017 - 11:18 am)
I like writing them off the top of my head. It's fun!
Dreaming
Dreams.
Fleeting, memorable,
Beautiful
Dreams.
Looking down
On us like
Birds in the sky
Or the stars
Up in space.
If you reach up and touch one,
You'll see it's sparks
And feel the energy
Coursing through your veins.
And then you'll try
To achieve that dream,
And imagine
How it will feel
To accomplish that dream.
Dreams.
Fleeting, memorable,
Beautiful,
Dreams.
(July 10, 2017 - 8:36 pm)
I'm working on mine! I've been brainstorming verses and I have phrases floating around in my head. I feel like for once I might actually write something worthwhile.
(July 11, 2017 - 9:37 am)
Leafpool, your writing is always worthwhile. Don't be so hard on yourelf.
(July 11, 2017 - 12:11 pm)
Ooh, I'm excited!
(July 12, 2017 - 1:06 pm)
Here's my entry, I would love some critique!
Dreaming with open eyes
i used to look for stars on clear nights
i used to complain that i didn’t want to sleep
and force my eyes open through the yawns
because i preferred dreaming with open eyes
now, i only long to spend a moment unconscious
the clear night sky is tinted with smoke
and i can’t sleep
i can’t
sleep
i can’t
but i still remember what it feels like to look for stars
i’m not afraid to dream with open eyes
for dreams, the sleep is merely a disguise
i’d like to say i learned to fly on broken wings
i used to be a lark
i’ve turned a nightingale
but i can fly
i can
fly
i can
if only i believe
i used to see the world in pink and blue
but i refuse to see nothing but shadows
come for me, aim for me
they’re not okay with me, fighting me
i used to dream of being beautiful
but now i only wish i were invincible
for i can bear scars but i can’t bear blood
i can’t
blood
i can’t
but as long as there is night there will be day
i believe in the sunrise i believe in someday
everything crumbles, every home
every heart, every wish, every hope
but not every dream
they can’t explode dreams
they can’t
dreams
they can’t
as long as hearts beat, drums beat, boots beat
i can’t sleep but i can
dream
(July 11, 2017 - 11:15 am)
This is so much better than what I wrote, Booksy. This is just, it's just, I can't. It's too good. Wow.
(July 11, 2017 - 5:36 pm)
OH MY GANDALF THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! Just so, so powerful. THIS IS WHY I LOVE YOU GUYS' POETRY!! BECAUSE IT'S AMAZING AND POWERFUL AND FULL OF EMOTION!! Ok, no more caps lock. Sorry about that. But you people do write amazing poetry.
(July 11, 2017 - 6:02 pm)
It's so awesome!! I would NOT be surprised if this won.
(July 11, 2017 - 10:24 pm)
Oh my gosh, I love this, Booksy!! <333
(July 12, 2017 - 1:04 pm)