Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
Ooh, if this was submitted in a contest I think it would win! I like all the imagery and strong vocabulary, and the fact that there are two points of view makes it all the more interesting!
(January 11, 2020 - 9:04 pm)
OMG, thank you SO MUCH!!! That really means a lot to me, because you are honestly, SO GOOD and active and fhrkdfgwdkfhjskd THANK YOU!!! I also thought it became too story-ish and not poem-ish at the end. So, yeah :)!
(January 12, 2020 - 8:13 pm)
Eek, I'm glad someone thinks so highly of me! I get rather intimidated by trying to manage to stay on here so often, and it's always surprising to get praised like that, thank you!
(January 13, 2020 - 8:11 pm)
Dark stages lit
by blinding yellow lights,
tape marks positions for
the aspiring stars,
Ready to join
the universe beyond
their old wings.
(January 11, 2020 - 9:31 pm)
i want to write some words
tumbleweed in a desert and the sand plasters inside your
lungs cuase this place is
neverending and the news anchor is raving about some
tweet that's already gone into an
abbyss of words and thoughts and people who can never realize that
this will all be gone someday and i always wonder
how people can still ask questions whose
answers rest with god and are never to
dance on the unholy tongues of humankind because
we reamin ignorant to our ignorance in our
inflated problems and
chipped nails and honking horns and bad days that will
never add up in a world where
first world problems dominate the plain when
staration and poverty lie on the horizon burning as an
icarus by the setting sun while halley's comet burns a trail through the
memory of an unbroken sky, we are made of the
tears of the heavens and to the sky we shall return
(January 24, 2020 - 10:12 pm)
Beautiful. Normally I'm not a big fan of poems that split all the lines in the middle of the sentence, but here I think it creates a sort of momentum when you read it that adds to the effect of the poem.
(February 9, 2020 - 10:14 pm)
And so the lolcat-child doth said;
"If it fits- Alas!- I sits." And so it sat,
On the tiny chair upon the mat,
As the rain came pouring down.
The dripping sky did quaver in its head,
And thought "This rain! oh, it shan't be my best"
The clouds did try to power through the rest,
Although the child began to frown.
Quoth he, "Why can't the rain just e'er leave me alone?"
"When eves't I try to sit, it falls,"
"The roof a-sending water down the walls,"
"Until the drywall breaks into decay!"
The rain replied with pitious bemoan,
"I must continue till the wind a-comes-"
"Fiercely with its tower-topping hums,"
"And blows my sorry form of danger-flood away."
The child- in a tit-for-tat, spoke,
"Catch me outside, how 'bout that"
And left the flooding shed to see the rain-
Who facepalmed in its ever-shrinking pride,
and cried,
"You foolish child, just go back inside!"
The child didn't listen then, and fell into a puddle, miles deep.
He didn't want to try to go to sleep,
For he had turned into a giant squid.
The rains, although no less annoyed
Did try to calm themself henceforth,
For the irritating child of questionable demeanor managed to not drown.
The end
(January 25, 2020 - 8:57 am)
Ha! This reminds me of the Jabberwocky a little bit- a nce rhythm and fancy mannerisms that's just nonsensical but still has a clear story. I like this!
(January 25, 2020 - 3:31 pm)
This is really funny! I like how the language is sort of archaic, but the termology is all very modern, it's rather jarring.
(January 26, 2020 - 8:37 am)
Thank you both XD
(January 27, 2020 - 1:37 pm)
A strain of starlight pulled from the moon
Fending the sun away,
An echo of song lost to the faeries'
Warning keen,
Figure disorted by purple mist,
Haze seeming all-encapsuling,
But yet does Ra show his face
Casting toils and hardships
Upon the enormous writhing snake.
(February 7, 2020 - 1:23 pm)
Dancing In the rain (Sunshower)
On spring days where I live
The rain falls down
Cloaking me
In a gentle shower
A sunshower
On spring days when I thrive
The clouds show tears
Tears of joy
Even the sun has come to watch me dancing
Dancing in the rain
(February 9, 2020 - 12:43 pm)
Here's one I wrote this past fall. It's written with a sort of couplet rhythym, alternating between moment and memory.
The Veil
Yesterday's braid
Yesterday's beauty
Weaving my fingers,
Unweaving the memories
Pizzicato plucks
In the chord of my autumn locks
Cascading in a waterfall down my back
Glissando, thumbnail on waking hour
The stage lights shining colliding reflecting on my eyes
As I now gaze upon the sun
Daydreams of
Drifting off into the black of fade-out house lights
Black lace and fabrick
A blanket, a veil through which I see the world
Yet-
I wonder
Is it a veil through which I see
Or, as it is my soul,
Are these my eyes?
(February 9, 2020 - 10:23 pm)
That's really good, CingusMoon. You're a natural!
I would post a poem, but my sister wants the computer now.
(February 16, 2020 - 3:51 pm)
Thanks, WordSong!
(March 4, 2020 - 11:06 am)