Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
I love this. It's so sweet & simple, but also a little bit sad.
(March 1, 2022 - 10:20 am)
thank you :)
(March 1, 2022 - 10:31 pm)
I suppose you were lost --
lost to the stars, that is;
It has always been that way.
When no-one else could find their way
in this big, dark, unknowable world,
You alone guided us all, unknowingly becoming
our saving light.
There is much you don't know
about life and light alike.
But I supposed you never asked
to be a leader either --
You never asked
for our simple naivete
to imprint upon you;
To follow where ever you lead
despite you yourself not knowing
Where the stars would lead you.
You have always been lost to the stars
Even as we sat by fire-light --
Yes, and we have all lost you with time
Now we sit, alone in this cold fire-light
We have lost our glowing starlight
We are now alone.
~~~~~~~~~
Half-inspired by peppermint's last poem! It had such a pretty, magical campfire-at-night-glow to it; which then led me down that thought process, while also tied to the stars. (0///w///0)
(February 28, 2022 - 12:11 pm)
nOoOoooo, thE sPaCiNg! TwT
(February 28, 2022 - 3:33 pm)
I love this! I liked the conclusion a lot, though it was sad. I feel honored that I gave you some inspiration!
(March 1, 2022 - 10:36 pm)
Thank you!
I am fascinated and terribly satisfied when ideas sometimes string into new forms, and become their own thing! It's so beautiful and inspiring and makes one feel clever for connecting the dots in a creative way~
(March 2, 2022 - 4:38 pm)
Silence rings, deafening to dead ears
Grey-filled eyes, thoughts lost to their peers.
Cold and dark -- then, ever darker
How can one like this learn, ever become smarter?
Maybe that is it, why they sound those deafening bells
Perhaps that explains their burning those bloodless shells.
They want to to end, silent and dreary,
All while eyeing the coffins, prejudiced and far too weary.
(March 1, 2022 - 8:40 am)
There are three types of people--
Those alive, those dead,
And those lost at sea, they say.
The clouds now darken, 'round the falling steeple,
As I lift up my head, thinking of words I never said
The boat pulls away from the bay.
All that happens is a faint ripple-ripple;
Soon it'll be to late, to the dragons they'll be fed;
'Cause now there is no hero, destined to forever-slay.
(March 1, 2022 - 8:52 am)
the rhyming pattern for this is so cool! it took me a minute to notice it, but it adds a neat feel to the poem.
(March 1, 2022 - 10:40 pm)
:)
It was a little forced on my end, but still cool, I suppose. (It didn't help that I was writing this in the middle of class, I'm sure...)
(March 2, 2022 - 4:41 pm)
You dance to a song
The world does not dare to hear
Alone in this silent realm
Unburdened by petty inhibitions or fear;
How do you continue on
Each day yet another butterfly-dance?
While with your shining light
You give us hope that we still have another chance.
~~~~~~~~~~
If you can't tell, I've been heavily into rhyming poetry once more. :p
(March 2, 2022 - 5:29 pm)
Pretty! ~~~
(March 5, 2022 - 11:33 pm)
a breath of wind
snowflakes dance outside the window, and
i
am
okay.
i
am
enough.
wind chimes echo my melody,
singing to the tune of summer,
though it is still snowing. they make me feel whole.
tops of trees, stretching to the sun.
they will never make it, but they still try.
it could be tragic, but instead it is beautiful,
because the sun gives the trees what they need
even from a distance.
discolored bricks, cracks running through.
i am a part of history,
grey-white skies filled with birds,
squawks fading into the distance as i stand knee deep in
freezing cold water.
the world is silent and motionless.
i
am
okay.
i
am
enough.
i smile and close my hands around the empty air,
bring a breath of wind home with me for my dresser.
and snowflakes dance outside my window,
beautiful little things caught up in fleeting gusts of wind.
(March 3, 2022 - 12:13 pm)
The light, positive aspect of Winter caught in this poem is so beautiful~ <3
(March 4, 2022 - 4:02 am)
Thank you. <3
(March 4, 2022 - 3:57 pm)