Poetry Contest

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Poetry Contest

Poetry Contest

Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!

The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth. 

The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*

Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair? 

I hope to see your poems soon!

~Booksy <3 

submitted by Booksy Owly
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)

Does anyone else think we shouldn't have contests? I'm always put down, never ever in the mentions, or the places. It's just...depressing for me! I'm very proud of my writing, but whenever I put it in the contests, it never wins! So basically everyone's saying that my writing and poetry is terrible!

-Anon.  

submitted by Anon.
(December 11, 2020 - 4:18 pm)

@Jaybells:

You won! Congrats! New theme? 

@Anon: 

No, that's not how I feel at all. A contest is a fun thing for you to write poetry with a theme. I don't do it to win, and I'm sure most people here don't either. If you feel like that, you don't have to post in contests if you don't want to. For me, contests are also ways to improve on writing/drawing/etc.

Just because you don't win doesn't mean the judge is saying your poetry is terrible. I have not read a single poem on this thread that is "terrible" and personally, I think being the judge is very nerve wracking and stressful. Everyone has amazing poems, and judging anything is hard, and you don't want to hurt anyone's feelings. By being upset by the verdict, you're making their job more stressful. I know that it doesn't feel good to lose, but it is not that everyone is saying your writing and poetry is terrible. Do you hear me? It's NOT.

If you feel that you are getting offended by the contest, you don't need to participate. Other people are having fun, and to each to his/her/their own, y'know? If contests aren't fun for you, don't feel like you have to do  them. <3

I don't know how helpful this is or if it just made you feel worse, but yeah, that's my opinion

submitted by @Anon. and @Jaybells, age 12, Atlantis
(December 12, 2020 - 10:03 am)

I think the contests are really just for fun. It's a game. Just because you've never won doesn't mean that people think your writing is bad. There's a ton of entries most times, and it's impossible to mention everyone. If you don't want to feel like no one appreciates your work, you don't have to play. Sorry if this comes off a little stiff, but it's true. 

submitted by Nyx@Anon., age 13 years, earth
(December 12, 2020 - 10:18 am)

Hi, Anon.

I will first say that I'm really sorry about that. I think it's possible I'm someone who made you feel this way. Feeling left out isn't fun.

I want to tell you that nobody here ever wants to call your work terrible. When judges say that it was a hard round to judge, they mean it. They could think your work is wonderful, but also think everyone else's work is wonderful too. Often judging comes down to personal preference, so while someone can acknowledge you create beautiful poetry, it might simply not be their preferred style.

I have loved the poetry contest since I first started participating about two and a half years ago. It took me about a year to win. But I kept submitting the poems because they were fun to write and it was nice to hear feedback on them. This is a casual contest, with no prizes or even bragging rights really. We continue because we like to write poems.

I'm going to encourage you to please keep writing. Poetry is hard! It's brave of you to write poems. All of your poems are works of art. We do not think they are terrible. Keep writing. Keep posting on the Regular Poetry thread. Ask for feedback if you would like. But the contest has been going for a long time, and I think a lot of us would be sad to see it go. Again, nobody wants to be mean. Nobody wants to put people in last place. There have been plenty of people who waited very, very long to place or win. Over time your style ight change and evolve. If you want to keep trying the poetry contest, please do. If you think it's not for you and won't encourage you, then you don't by any means have to participate. We don't want you to be discouraged.

submitted by Luna-Starr@Anon
(December 12, 2020 - 10:26 am)

Okay, first of all, I'm late and other ppl basically said what I wanted to, so yeah, what they said. I just wanted to add that a lot of poetry and writing is up for interpretation. One person may think it's not very good, and another person might think it was the best one submitted! I know I've seen poems that I thought were beautiful not even get into the judging. Please don't take a little contest like this to heart. 

submitted by Azalea, age 13 , Earth
(December 12, 2020 - 2:28 pm)

@Anon, yes, I am late, apologies. But I think I needed to apologize for making you feel left out, especially because I was the judge last round and I really didn't want anyone to feel like I was discounting their work. I thought each and every one was amazing, and judging was soo hard for me. Honestly, all of you are so amazing that sometimes I read some of the poetry on this thread for hours just because it's all so good. If you want to keep trying, go ahead, but if you want to stop, that's cool, too. Just know that I really didn't mean to make you feel upset, I'm so sorry that I did.

submitted by Silver Crystal, age Infinity, Milky Way
(December 12, 2020 - 11:27 pm)

@Anon, I do hear you, but I also agree with everyone else, and would like to reiterate that no one is saying your writing is terrible. It seriously isn't. Every entry I've ever seen in these contests have been amazing. But if poetry contests aren't the way you want to share your poetry, there's also a regular poetry thread, which is pretty popular. (That's what the link is down below). Also, keep is mind that judging poetry is entirely subjective. For every one judge that doesn't place your poems, there's one who would've. Anyway, just know that every entry I've seen is amzaing. The result of contests is by no means a determiner of your skill.

Regular poetry thread:

 

 

submitted by Snazzycakes, Dancing in the rain
(December 13, 2020 - 9:17 am)

Mn, I totally agree; I have a lot of stuff that is successful, but I have plenty of pieces I really like but never really recieved much attention or got anywhere. There's no good in tearing yourself up over the past-- but it can still be wise to look back and improve.

Sorry if that's a bit redundant.

submitted by Jaybells, age Obscure, Lost in the Universe
(December 14, 2020 - 1:55 pm)
submitted by @Jaybells!, age you won!, new theme?
(December 11, 2020 - 12:07 pm)

Yikes, sorry about that! The next theme will be... Reflection(s)!!

They'll be due by the 28th, and judging will be announced the next day.

Looking forwards to all of your entries~ 

submitted by Jaybells, age Obscure, Lost in the Universe
(December 14, 2020 - 1:19 pm)

I almost legit did reflections for my theme last round XD What're the odds. Anyway I'll probably sit this one out but I'll be back in a round or two.

submitted by Silver Crystal, age Infinity, Milky Way
(December 14, 2020 - 10:37 pm)

Narcissus is a Greek figure who fell in love with his reflection. This poem is told from Echo's point of view. I dont have time to explain, search it up or read Heroes of Olympus :D 

Narcissus~

does the glare of the sun hurt your eyes?

do you get uncomfortable sitting there

day after day after day?

i know i would but

im

not

you 

so my echoes mean nothing

although i wish 

they did. 

 

out of the hundreds who love you why would you pick me

when i cant even say your name unless someone says it for me?

i know i would care but

im

not

you

so my whispers mean nothing

although i wish

they did 

 

when your pool is gone will you still love yourself?

or will you devote your time to somebody else?

maybe me

i know i wouldnt but

im 

not

you

so maybe my love means something

like i wish

it does 

 

--

i dont expect a ranking this is just for fun <3 

submitted by dreamiing, lost
(December 15, 2020 - 12:39 pm)

But really, this is amazing, dreamii.

I have a couple things to say before I shower praise on your poem, though XD

1. Hera was a jerk.

2. Narcissus was a jerk.

Okay, now that that's over, I will shower praise on your poem.

I loved the repetition of "im/not/you". It adds so much power to your poem; Echo is willing to forgive anything Narcissus does because "im/not/you". 

Her love is tangible. But also something the myth doesn't hightlight- not only is her love tangible, her heartbreak is too.

You can feel her falling apart as she watches the one she loves (ugh, i still don't know why she fell in love with someone who's name is what the word narcissistic comes from) fall in love with his own reflection (like, what?!) and not even be able to do anything about it; you can feel her helplessness, her pain.

It's raw emotion, love and sadness and helplessness all woven into one tapestry of Echo. Not Echo and Narcissus, Echo. 

I hope that made sense. 

submitted by Luminescence, age 12, Atlantis
(December 24, 2020 - 3:33 pm)

Glass Reflection

Glass reflection,

Reaching out

With starlight-stained

Hands, wanting

Only

To touch

The moon.

The stars

On the other side

Are small,

Wet things,

Unfit

To hold magic

In their cores.

The moon

On our side

Is round,

Fat,

Full of magic.

Reflection,

Wanting magic,

Desperate

To save their world

From falling

Forever.

If no one

Needs

Their reflections,

Will the world

collapse?

 

submitted by Wreeboo, age Immortal, Nowhere and Everywhere
(December 15, 2020 - 10:34 am)

ooh, mysterious. 

I love the fantasy feel your poem gives, it's like there's a whole universe on the other side of the moon, y'know?

I also love the last bit "If no one/Needs/Their reflections/Will the world/collapse?"

Because I thought about those lines... and it's true. We need our reflections to know what we did was wrong and we need our reflections to do right, we need to be able to look back on ourselves and say "why did I do that- i shouldn't have done that- why did I do that?" and feel awful so we can do better next time.

I love what magic symbolizes in your poem- it's not magic in a Harry Potter sense. Magic in your poem is us. Your reflection is magic, your reflection is you... you are magic. You don't need to reach out and touch the stars, the stars are faraway and the stars are not reflections. The moon is a reflection of the sun, the sun's other side, the sun's magic.

I might have literally interpreted that the way I did without you actually trying to write the poem with that in mind (happens to me all the time haha, where people see significance where there actually was none... intnetionally anyways), but I did, and I think thsi poem is amazing.  

I hope that made sense, my praise of all y'all's poetry has been rather nonsensical lately... 

submitted by Luminescence, age 12, Atlantis
(December 26, 2020 - 2:33 pm)