Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
Oh gosh I did not expect to get second! I wrote that poem at the last minute!
(November 27, 2020 - 11:34 am)
Hehe me too
i find that the best poems are those written on random impulses, sometimes without even a theme
(November 27, 2020 - 1:28 pm)
The stormy ocean was a raging bull,
Soft and strong, Push and pull.
Howling winds, intense seas,
Nothing will stop this rough breeze.
Will I survive?
Will this storm slow it’s pace?
All it does is race, race, race.
The boat is sinking, slowly and quietly,
Though the people aboard are screaming wildly.
This blustery cold weather,
Wrapped in a sweater,
Sadly, I will never see my home again.
Into the reef I go,
Down, Down, Down, below.
Then something grabs me,
Should I let go?
(November 27, 2020 - 10:36 am)
This is so vague but whatever. I mean, poes are kinda meant to be sort of interpretive, right...? I hope...
The world is silent,
Still.
The birds quietly whistle,
Trill.
The cold water
Laps at my feet,
Anchoring them
To the wet sand.
Snow covers the sand
Around me
And jagged shards
Of ice stab the
Dark waves.
I know
That I won’t make this journey
Alone,
But I wish I could.
I know she’s beside me,
Looking out at the water
And listening to
The birds
With a smile on her face.
I wish I could leave her behind,
Leave her safe,
Leave her warm,
Instead of the cold
She will face
On this journey.
But
I know
She will come
She’d rather be cold
By my side
Than warm
Away.
(November 28, 2020 - 2:28 pm)
I love love love love love love love this. The sacrifice that the "she" in the poem is making is reflected in such a starkly clear, beautiful way. The entire poem is so striking, but I especially love the lines I know / That I won’t make this journey / Alone, / But I wish I could. It so beautifully portrays the sacrifices each person is making. Beautiful.
(November 28, 2020 - 8:55 pm)
Thank you! I'm glad you like it because I don't like it as much as some of my old nature-based poems buried deep in the recesses of my disastrous closet.
(December 1, 2020 - 11:17 am)
This is short, actually the tail end of a different poem that I liked better alone. I think it's nice.
Return from the dive
The dark below me
Mezmerizing blackness
Calls to me
But I must return
Swim skywards once more
It tears my heart in two
To turn away
(November 29, 2020 - 7:12 am)
(December 1, 2020 - 10:57 pm)
over the ticking of time we have stood on the shore watching waves
curl until they crash down around us in
an explosion of while foam and fury rushing at every little piece of us as the water tries to
eat us alive, chew us up and swallow us whole over and over again and yet it
never seems to be enough, not to knock me over so long as i face each wave
standing on my feet, my body unbreakable against the unrelenting sea.
(December 2, 2020 - 11:10 am)
This is an acrostic, I forgot to mention!!
(December 7, 2020 - 12:38 pm)
I'm not sure if this technically counts as "ocean," but here's my poem...
Sometimes I lie in bed at night, tossing and turning,
and feel an ache grow inside of me,
unable to still my unreasonable nerves.
I imagine myself diving into a deep body of still blue water.
I jump off the edge, arching, diving,
never mind that I’m too much of a coward to dive in real life.
My hands enter the water smoothly,
then my shoulders, torso, hips.
The water coats my body like a sweet soft hug,
soothing my fidgetiness.
It’s still and calm underwater,
peaceful like the endless tapestry of the night sky.
I’m surrounded by the cool stillness,
the velvety touch of liquid.
Above me is just water,
below me is just water,
everything is water.
I feel safe.
(December 2, 2020 - 3:49 pm)
Here's my entry!
~~~
Ocean-side
sliding waves,
shifting sands,
footsteps gone
with the tide,
we walk,
hand-in-hand,
friendship as pure
as the thistledown tide
twirling in the waves
splashing each other,
the water burns,
so salty,
but our memories,
so sweet.
laughing together
a sound like silver rain,
hugging and whispering
late in the night
when everyone else
is asleep.
jumping together
over waves
and into the pool,
holding contests,
most creative jump,
prettiest dives,
and loving it
when the other person won
naming caterpillars
as we walked
to the beach
back to the ocean
together,
every day.
(December 2, 2020 - 5:09 pm)
This is so heartwarming and nostalgic! Just laced with so much emotion!
(December 9, 2020 - 6:20 pm)
I actually *really* love this one, so let me know what you think! I'd love some constructive feedback/criticism, as long as it's worded politely, please.
Hey There Ocean
Hey there ocean,
with your seafoam smile
and sun glinting off
your shining blue eyes
Alive.
Hey there ocean,
queen of seas, skies
king of earth below my feet.
anything and everything,
forever and always
Hey there ocean,
with your gentle waves
and sandy beach begging you
to stay but you never do
You can’t.
Hey there ocean,
queen of the world
king of it, too
fleeting but permanent
you’re gone but you always come back
Hey there ocean,
with your blue loneliness
and the birds just
don’t understand.
It hurts.
Hey there ocean,
queen of your heart
king of loud silence
the noise is unbearable
though no one’s making it
You wish.
Hey there ocean,
with your wild protests
fruitless, pointless
sandy beaches calling you
I know you wish you could
let go but you can’t
Never could.
Hey there ocean,
queen of endurance,
king of being fine
you’ll be okay
you always have
Hey there ocean,
with your sad seafoam smile,
and sun glinting off
your shining blue eyes
Shining with tears.
Hey there ocean,
queen of nothing
king of nothing
you’re not fine
not anymore
(December 2, 2020 - 6:18 pm)
I love this too! The one piece of criticism I have is that the phrase "hey there, ocean" is just a bit too casual, and because of that, it kind of takes away from the beauty of this poem! Maybe "hello there, ocean" would work? It's pretty similar, but less casual... Anyway, it's a beautiful poem; good job!
(December 3, 2020 - 5:24 pm)