Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
Or wait, did I get the date wrong? Sincerest apologies if I did XDD
(November 20, 2020 - 4:03 pm)
oh no I just realized i got the date wrong and it's November 23.
*facepalm*
(November 20, 2020 - 4:04 pm)
Here's my entry. Emotions, right? I hope I remembered the theme correctly.
Emotion Musics
I can hear it
With every beat of the drum
Every sound of the keys
Every strum of my guitar
The feeling grows louder
You can hear too
I see it in your eyes
You thought it was impossible
“Feelings don't have voices”
That’s what you said
I proved you wrong
You hear their voices now, too
Happiness has a lilting voice
Trilling, leaping
Dancing among us all
You see her now, I know
She calls to you
Sadness has a quiet voice
Or one so loud
You can't ignore it
He crawls to you
Begs for your attention
Sadness has a place here, too
Anger has a pounding voice
Unmistakeable
You hear him from miles away’
Or so low and burning
You can't tell until he’s here
He has his place and time
Fear has a trembling voice
Too hesitant to step outside
To come away from the familiar
She clings to you
To what she knows
Comfort her
She has her place here, too
Love has the strongest voice
You can hear it through all the others
He unites them
Makes them one
Their voices rise together
Laughing, crying, howling, trembling
Loving
Anyone can recognize their voices
Once they hear it
(November 21, 2020 - 11:18 am)
Hi! I have no idea if I'm submitting this too late (It's my first time with this competetion) and it's probably not as good as the amazing ones already up, but here is mine based on the word 'emotion':
The Price of Emotion
A single tear carves down my face
cutting deeper than blades
mingling with blood
soaking its way down to my exausted soul
staggering with the pain
of a hundred razor thin cuts.
Each tear that falls
lands in my heart
slowly dragging it down with the weight of liquid grief.
There is no escape from this prison,
terrible yet ineveitable,
that all must face
with trembling courage
and splintering faith.
The handprint that you left on my heart
is cracked and fading
and the only sound to keep me company
is your ghostly laughter
from another world.
This is the fee of human emotion
each smile and memory
radiating warmth of times past
is burdened with unavoidable pain.
This is the fee of human emotion.
And now,
with a shredded soul
and a drowning heart,
I am finally paying the price.
(November 22, 2020 - 7:24 am)
This is really good @Silver Crystal! I love the flow and the symbolism. You did an amazing job!
(November 26, 2020 - 9:13 am)
Make sure to submit your poems before the end of tomorrow friends! I'll hopefully post the results on the 24th ^^
(November 22, 2020 - 2:17 pm)
Um I hope I got the topic right, but:
The River of Emotions
I drank from the river
of emotions
and
when I arose
my head spun
with the light
of thousands of candles
flickering, fighting
to stay alive,
to stay whole.
I sat down
again
and the candles stilled
their flames,
waiting,
waiting,
for the rush
that came
when I stood again.
It felt
as though
a great
entitiy
was smashing my skull
with a hammer
and screaming.
The emotion-candles
in my head
swirled
and their flames
singed the old candles
and relighted them
and then came
the tears.
A new river
flowed from my eyes
and at the edge
of my vision
I saw
a little girl
drink from the
new river
that had streamed from
my tears.
(November 23, 2020 - 1:27 pm)
(November 24, 2020 - 4:04 pm)
(November 25, 2020 - 12:08 pm)
I'm working on it! I'm pretty busy so it might be another day or two, sorry about that
(November 25, 2020 - 2:42 pm)
It's Ok! no need to rush, I understand if you're busy! I'm just really excited! <3
(November 26, 2020 - 8:27 am)
Alright friends, here are the results! There were a lot of poems this time around and I enjoyed reading all of them, so I'm really sorry if I couldn't get you onto the rankings but I liked everyone's poems! Anyway, without further ado, we have:
Honorable Mention - aqua! Your poem had some pretty cool and powerful images, and the last two lines especially were really beautiful!
Third place - Sunbeam. Your poem was full of gorgeous words and imagery, and I love how vividly you described these two people's relationship.
Second place - tied between Wreeboo and Nyx! Wreeboo, you did a great job of illustrating how feeling emotions for the first time would go, and I love the way you tied it back to the beginning at the end of your poem, like a cycle. Nyx, the way you fitted personalities to emotions was really impressive, and I think your poem captured everything really well! Nice job, you two.
First place - *drumroll* Silver Crystal! This poem was lovely. I found all the description to be really striking, and the last line, "I am finally paying the price", was very haunting and powerful. Congratulations, you won!
Sorry I didn't go into a lot of detail on this, I don't have a lot of time, but if any of you would like further thoughts on your poems feel free to ask, because I have some praise and some critique for all of them! But for now, congratulations Silver Crystal!
(November 26, 2020 - 9:03 pm)
Oh my gosh I was not expecting that! Thank you Leafy, I'm glad you liked it :) Everyone else was so talented and amazing, I'm surprised I won XD Anywayyy I choose ocean as the new theme, but I don't know if that has been done before; if it has, tell me and I'll change it. Judging will be Dec 10 in two weeks. I can't wait to see what everyone comes up with :D
(November 26, 2020 - 10:38 pm)
Congrats Silver Crystal and all participants! Your poems were spindiddly!
(November 26, 2020 - 10:42 pm)
Congratulations everyone! Everybody's poems were so good.
Can you critique my poem?
(November 27, 2020 - 10:15 am)