Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
I haven't written poetry in.... forever... so this is probably terrible, but I'm just doing it for fun. I'm not sure where the ending came from, but at the end of the poem I'll explain how I started.
~~
Standing at the window,
watching the leaves falling.
But no. This is here-
where the leaves don’t turn red
orange
yellow
and they don’t fall beautifully.
“Just hanging in there,
till I die and wilt away,”
is the song they seem to sing.
Watching fall colors
has never been a pastime of mine
Because, after all,
it’s just a pretty way of dying.
~~
So, I live in Los Angeles, California, and the leaves don't turn pretty colors here. They just turn brown and make wilted messes on the floor. That's how I started. How I ended, I really don't know. It might just be me telling myself I'm not missing anything. But who knows?
(October 8, 2020 - 9:53 pm)
Wow, admins, that posted fast!!
Also, I forgot to ask,
how has your day been going?
Are you asking me? My day went well. I worked on some fun magazine things, spent some time outdoors on a beautiful fall day, had great tacos for supper, and now I'm hearing from Chatterboxers, my favorite time of the day!
Admin
(October 8, 2020 - 9:57 pm)
Ooh, I love this one! 'Specially the imagery and flow.
Yikes, it'll be hard to compete against, though... Hm, just wait for us!
*runs off to agonize over the details*
(October 9, 2020 - 3:41 am)
Autumn Prompt ~
The leaves twirl gracefully to the wilting bed of flowers
Red and orange and yellow and brown
Swallows chirping above me, flapping to another place
The moon shining, full and bright
clouds floating above
How beautiful Autumn is
It's an amazing nature scene
(October 8, 2020 - 11:54 pm)
The leaves, once green,
fall
in flurries of colors,
over the heads
of children,
walking slowly.
They crunch
beneath feet,
turning to dirt,
changing.
From windows,
they’re stared at,
as they fly
up above and back down
to the earth,
beautiful,
and somehow sad.
Autumn
is when
things either die....
or they fly.
(October 9, 2020 - 1:17 pm)
Ohhhhh this is awesome! The whole thing is beautiful, but I love the ending especially.
(October 11, 2020 - 8:10 am)
October
~~~~~~
You told me you hated the rain in October
You told me you hated how wet and cold it was
How it was too damp to admire the falling leaves anymore
You told me you hated when the water soaked through your clothes because you forgot your umbrella
And how the rain drops were an icy shiver
And how it made you long for snow or hot summer days, not this chilly inbetween
You told me you hated the rain in October
I told you beauty is in the eye of the beholder
(October 9, 2020 - 5:01 pm)
@Hawthorne, I love this one!
(October 10, 2020 - 1:33 pm)
Thanks!
(October 10, 2020 - 1:43 pm)
I feel like I'll regret not waiting awhile to see if this poem is actually any good, but I really wanna post this...
Autumn Comfort
Leaves crunch rhythmically
under her feet
crisp air, colors new
& the hurt fresh,
so she focuses on
a tree
and the way its seasonal death
can make someone feel
a little more alive.
<ayime> I think she's saying "Ay I'm E"! Hey, that's right!
(October 10, 2020 - 4:14 pm)
I’ve finally figured out
why I love autumn.
When the days get shorter
and the leaves start to change,
time feels less slippery.
We’ve made it out of Marchgustuary.
The world is still spinning.
No longer are we stuck inside
by necessity,
terrified of the virus in our midst.
Now, we are hibernating,
seeking warmth, community, and shelter
from the dark evenings
and pounding rain.
We cluster close together,
in spirit, if not in body,
and wrap ourselves in blankets,
and cradle hot mugs of tea in our hands.
We’ll make it through this
together.
(October 12, 2020 - 8:03 pm)
I wrote a poem about autumn a couple weeks ago, can I stiil enter it?
Also, @Kitten, I love your poem! It makes me feel all warm and comforted. Great job!
My CAPTCHA, Roxy Foxy, says pocio. According to Google, that translates to potion. You said a word! Well, sorta. But still. *throws confetti*
(October 13, 2020 - 5:09 pm)
Of course you can!
(October 13, 2020 - 7:19 pm)
I've never liked autumn.
"It's my favorite season" she said,
as I looked out on the wet road under a dreary sky and dull, dead leaves.
"It's my favorite season" she said,
as summer ends and the life is sucked out of us as we turn back our heads to books with lines and lines of gibberish,
When I thought of autumn, I thought of death, and wet, colors fading brown.
"It's my favorite season" she said,
Suddenly I look up and the trees are beautiful, the leaves take on shades of red, orange and yellow. That isn't enough, but then...
I remember pumpkins and chilly night air whispering to me the haunt of the dead,
And whispering under my breath,
"It might be my favorite season" I said.
I still don't like school lol
(October 14, 2020 - 6:41 pm)
Awesomesauce! Here it is!
I wrote this poem because I was inspired by Bluebird's entry on the poetry thread about dreaming about summer (back in 2017), and I was SO looking forward to fall I just had to write a poem about it. It's not as good as hers, but I think it's good enough. Critique is totally welcome!
Autumn
I’m dreaming of autumn,
of thick wool sweaters
and tall piles of leaves.
of Thanksgiving dinner,
with stuffing
and sweet potatoes,
and classic pumpkin pie.
I’m dreaming of maple syrup
swirling and tumbling
down buttery pancakes
on a chilly morning,
and of pumpkin patches,
scattered hay bales,
and garlands of leaves,
of bundling up
in knitted scarves
and fur-lined boots.
I’m dreaming of pumpkin spice,
of hot chocolate
with whipped cream,
of pumpkin bread,
light and fluffy,
spiced like apple cider.
of nippy air
and chilly breezes
that make you snuggle down
into your sweater.
I’m dreaming of leaves like fireworks,
of being able to say
“Fall is in the air,” and
“Leaves are falling,
pumpkin spice is calling.”
I’m dreaming of autumn.
(October 14, 2020 - 7:08 pm)