Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
Apparently I skipped this round. I couldn't think of anything to write about, so...
This new theme looks cool! I will write something, I don't know what yet.
(May 14, 2017 - 11:42 am)
The formatting got off. I'll fix that later.
(May 14, 2017 - 4:49 pm)
Love the prompt!
The End:
i am not like you, you
see: i see the beauty in The End while you just
run and slam the door behind
you. i know, this day will never be the same again
unless we live it: happily ever after, not just
once upon a time. teach me, how do you treat
your life like a sprint when everything for me is
a constant marathon? how do you leave without even
saying goodbye? you were always one for slamming
doors while i, i always had to close them gently
and you watched as i sobbed final farewell
through the keyhole. because you were already
ten steps ahead. and i, i always had to linger a moment
behind. i, i think the end is even more beautiful
than a beginning. can you imagine having a world
of unfinished starts? no, the final closure is worth far more
than whatever may come. let me take my moment: there will be
plenty of tomorrows left for you to rush into. breathe in the air
that will never be yours again. we will never be here again, we will never
be us again. is not bittersweet finality more perfect than
the unexpected? no, you say. you do not understand. but i,
i am not like you, you see: i see beauty in
The End.
(May 15, 2017 - 12:30 am)
Well, I'm not sure if this is exactly what you asked for. But here goes nothing
[Untitled]
Rockets' red glare and
Bombs bursting in air and
Red-white-and-blue over all
Swords crashing and
Smashing and
Guns blasting us down and
The blood flying all around
With the glare of the rockets and
The bursting of the bombs and
The screaming and crying and dying
The flag's still flying
And we still have hope.
(May 15, 2017 - 2:41 pm)
Ohh, I'm joining if that is no problem for you, Bluebird! Here's my poem I've shared before, I just had to alter a line to include "the end" in it. For anyone whom may not know, it's from the perspective of Marjane Satrapi during the Iranian Revolution. Good luck everyone!!
Death of the Dove
Fall back, fly back
Time of 1979
Your hands to our words
Like whips across our existence
Force your pathetic modernity
Religious falsehood
Down the throats of my people
Centuries of human dreams
Down the River of Styx
Your lies made you silent
Until you rose once again
Women made to ghosts
Men monsters of the night
Hunters, gatherers
You brought my people back
To our ancient times
Ancestors
Fools
You cage us now like psychopaths
Miserable western circus animals
Forced to fall into bidding
Kissing your feet
Disgusting, rotten with tyranny
Blade to one’s throat
Blackmailed into submission
The unborn cry
For futures, fates stolen
Their mothers chained in a cloak
Of impenetrable darkness
Who is to stop your insane madness?
Is it safe to come out?
Your bombs held above our heads
Our spirits cry
Fire licks the walls of every home
Within ourselves
Held tightly, cannot be set free
Do not let me go
I sit here, crying until the end
Following your footsteps without purpose
Children, so simple, we do not know
As one, I pulled strings of others
Why? To satisfy hunger
A country of a thirty-nine million
Raise their hands in everlasting joy
Sixty thousand under our feet
Yet you, my terrible
Heartless friend
Has been found ostracized
Cut off from a seemingly
Eternal stronghold
Rejoice for the king is gone
One shall live
Without the darkness of your power
Families in peace
Homes restored
Our men, now free from fighting
Women without veils
Yet
The death of the dove
Has come
(May 16, 2017 - 1:21 pm)
That is SOO beautiful Ashlee. And sad at the same time. Here's my poem (I'm joining by the way. Hope that's not a problem)
Beauty and Sadness
I watch
as the once newborn rose
withers, and dies.
I listen
as the once strong music
fades, into silence.
I feel sadness.
At the beauty that once was.
At the strength that has now failed.
I am in awe of this beauty and strength,
but sad, at it's end.
Lots of things in life are like this.
Beautiful
and sad.
Is it the sadness that makes it beautiful?
Or is it knowing
that this beauty will not last forever,
that makes us sad?
The thing about sadness,
is that it wouldn't exist without happiness.
Just like the beggining,
could not exist without
The end.
(May 16, 2017 - 6:51 pm)
Thank you so much! And awww, yours is so sad! Lovely, but sad nonetheless.
(May 18, 2017 - 12:22 am)
Awesome poems, guys! I'm judging in 10 days.
(May 17, 2017 - 6:49 am)
Wow, I love everyone's poems! Can I join?
(May 18, 2017 - 6:30 pm)
Yes. Everyone can join!
(May 18, 2017 - 9:05 pm)
My entry! I'm crossing my fingers that the formatting turns
a particularly finite universe~
we never talk about
the end, haven’t
you realized? it
dances on invisible
strings— now you
see it, now you don’t-
darling, don’t you
want to know? you try
to catch it, as if it were
some sort of elusive
butterfly that you chase
but when you finally get
to it, it slips through your
fingers and disappears
but always comes back
to taunt you, love, haven’t
you known deep down,
you let it slip through,
that one glimpse, that one
moment of triumph was
all you wanted, that more
was simply too much, too much
that you didn’t want to know, so
you let it go, you let go because
knowledge is power, but knowledge
is also pain.
we never talk about
the end, but you,
you were always
braver me, you dared look
while i shut my eyes because it's a
suffocating sort of silence that
fills up the room like the kind
you always try to ignore but
you can still feel it, thick and heavy
on your soul, you can still feel it,
so i pretended not to notice because
i could not bear the thought of us
being oh so temporary, but i suppose
we are a particularly finite universe
everything comes to an end eventually,
we both know that but you always
choose to look ahead, to see, to know and
i always choose here and now, to stay in
the moment, to enjoy it because ignorance
is a blinding sort of bliss
but still
we never talk about the end.
(May 18, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
I'd like to join.
(May 19, 2017 - 3:16 pm)
YES, DO IT. Do it now. Post your poem for all to see. Why do I keep on spelling poem wrong, its really annoying.
(May 19, 2017 - 7:47 pm)
She Cried When the Allies Called Him
She cried as she watched him leave.
His strong frame
Silhouetted by the setting sun.
He walked tall,
Soldiers uniform worn proudly
On his back.
He had long dreamed
Of standing with his countrymen,
Tall.
Ready to defend England.
The allies had called him.
And he was more than ready
To come.
She cried
Because she knew
There would never be another evening
Spent
At the Summer dance
With him.
Never be another day
Spent
Fishing in the creek by the house.
She cried
Because she knew
He was never
Coming back.
(May 20, 2017 - 3:26 pm)
Night
The sun
It peeks out from behind a cloud
It's warming my face
So nice
The cloud goes away
It's so bright
Oh sun, I love you
But you go away
It's night
The moon is not as nice as you
But you will come again
This is not the end
Of happy, happy light
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I just wrote this on the spur of the moment. It's not the kind of poem I usually write, but I think it turned out all right.
(May 21, 2017 - 10:31 am)