Poetry Contest

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Poetry Contest

Poetry Contest

Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!

The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth. 

The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*

Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair? 

I hope to see your poems soon!

~Booksy <3 

submitted by Booksy Owly
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)

The world has silenced me, erased my voice---

Through its cruel smiles and piercing cold eyes,

And sugared words that question every choice

As if the truths I tell are merely lies;

 

I am a caged bird whose song is suppressed,

Searching for freedom---which was through my words;

A little mermaid whose voice is oppressed,

Wishing I chose not love, but to be heard;

 

But through writing, I can finally speak---

Without the world hating my every phrase;

Through my poetry, my voice is unique,

Heard through lyrical rhymes and rhythmic ways;

 

The world had silenced me---not anymore---

For my poetry is an open door...

~~

My first time attempting to write a sonnet! :) 

 

submitted by Moon Wolf, age lunars, A Celestial Sky
(November 12, 2024 - 12:19 am)

Wow this is really beautiful!! You did a great job <333

submitted by Hawkstar
(November 12, 2024 - 4:09 pm)

Wow, that's good! I'm surprised this is your first time writing a sonnet--it's so smooth...

The first stanza in particular is so elegiac (which is ~kind of~ a synonym of poetic but I thought that because this is a poem, that's implied) 

 

submitted by Lyric@Moon Wolf, age :D, spinning in a circle
(November 12, 2024 - 10:52 pm)

tysm!!! <33 that means a lot 

@Lyric I love your poem as well! it feels really beautiful <3 

submitted by Moon@Lyric&Hawkstar, age lunars, A Celestial Sky
(November 12, 2024 - 11:30 pm)

You're welcome!

And thank you :D 

submitted by Lyric@Moon Wolf, tangled mess lol
(November 14, 2024 - 8:55 pm)

this is awesome! i love how you used a traditional poetry format to write about the importance of poetry/writing :D very fitting!

submitted by pangolin@Moon Wolf, age she/they, Outskirts of the Galaxy
(November 13, 2024 - 4:29 pm)

ahh thanks!! :)) it was interesting to try a different style of poetry that i'm not used to

submitted by Moon Wolf@pangolin, age lunars, A Celestial Sky
(November 14, 2024 - 12:55 am)

because language is the currency of communication

and it’s hard to get someone to listen to you better than they do when you tell a story,
because it’s fun to bend words until they nearly break, to make the skies
burn red with blood at a couple of words; 
when i make worlds, i am their god. [the people, 
no matter how many commandments i give them,
still do what they like.] and because 
i read a book, five years ago, ten months ago, two days ago
that changed me, and now i want to change someone else,
and because i like to, because i started writing years ago
and i haven’t looked back.
submitted by WordSong, age Forever, Under a Rock
(November 12, 2024 - 4:27 pm)

inkspell

 

the pen is mightier than the sword

someone, sometime, said in a room cloaked by sunrise

because the sword can only destroy

but the pen has that ultimate gift that generations fought for,

it's the culmination of the dream that was born when fire first sparked in our hands,

it's the gift and the promise, the past and the future, the sun that gives us flight because we are one step closer to infinity--

it gives us the unending power of creation,

sets loose our imprisoned thoughts

and gives us worlds that are all we once desired.

it sways us to the pointless powerful promise of its unbroken harmony.

and in a world where we are shattered,

who are we if we pick up a sword?

who are we if we pierce the broken, obliterate the beautiful, crush the life that seeks hope?

who are we if we do not turn instead to the solace for our wounds,

if we do not try to peace back the puzzle pieces of a world that five-year-old minds wanted to destroy?

swords can never kill completely

if we remember the secret of invention,

the key of life,

the ways to duplicate our laughter and give birth to these children of the sky...

let us reimagine this sword-shattered world

and recognize the strength in our pens

and know that we,

wardens & keepers of a better world,

live because of our inkhearts.

submitted by Amethyst
(November 15, 2024 - 6:03 pm)

wow I love this poem! I really like how you use "the pen is mightier than the sword" in your poem, and how swords destroy while pens create...

(it reminds me of the story I'm writing about a war, also) 

submitted by Moon Wolf@Amethyst, age lunars, A Celestial Sky
(November 16, 2024 - 1:08 am)

Tysm!! I wasn't entirely sure of how good it was, so that means a lot. I really love your poem as well; it feel so lyrical, and it's amazing that you managed to fit it into the structure of a sonnet.

submitted by Amethyst
(November 16, 2024 - 9:14 pm)

My paper is the sky,

My pen is a ballpoint sparrow streaking

Across the dependable, colorless sunset,

Each line a new horizon,

Each word a memory of 

My bright bird's flight path.

 

My paper is the earth,

My pen is a black ink hoe digging

Into the rich, deep soil,

Each line a row of new life,

Each word a rare orchid

Of violent violet hues.

 

My paper is the canvas,

My pen is a a fountian brush painting

Words into poetry,

Each line a breathtaking landscape,

Each word a perfect detail,

A whisper of past, present,

And future. 

submitted by AvaraStar, age 13, Hobbiton
(November 15, 2024 - 8:41 pm)
submitted by @PT, judging!, no pressure tho :)
(November 17, 2024 - 11:53 am)

Here I am, judging! Congratulations everybody, I thought all your poems were so good and I really enjoyed reading them! Super exciting what y'all came up with.

Honorable Mentions:

AvaraStar: I love the extended metaphors! They really give strength to the poem. My favorite is the 2nd stanza, where you describe the pen as a hoe planting seeds in the earth — “Each word a rare orchid / Of violent violet hues.” Beautiful imagery! I also love how you tie it all together at the end by explaining the significance of each line & word of a poem. I think poetry is super cool because every word has a huge impact and your poem illustrates that really well!

Moon Wolf: wow, a sonnet! You did a great job with the rhyme scheme & rhythm. The whole poem is very well-written, and you have a great use of imagery. I like how you kind of personified the world as something that is stifling you, and then wrote about how poetry allows you to express yourself. My favorite lines are at the end: “The world had silenced me—not anymore— / For my poetry is an open door…” It’s very intriguing and I love your poem!
3rd Place - Lyric:  This poem is really beautiful! I like the short lines. The bluebird who wanted to fly into the stars, and the galaxy inside your mind, and nuclear fusion. I love the line “wanted the stardust / gilding every feather.” eek it’s such pretty imagery throughout the whole poem! And the last stanza is outstanding. It leaves a big impact on how your writing is created in your mind, I think? The memory and emotion fused together to create something. I love it, great job!
2nd Place - WordSong: Really amazing poem. I like how the tone is kind of serious and nonchalant at the same time. My favorite lines are “to make the skies / burn red with blood at a couple of words” and “because i started writing years ago / and i haven’t looked back.” The poem is lovely and short but it is still really powerful. The idea that an author is the god/creator of worlds is really cool. The message about the importance of writing to you comes across really well and, I also like the way the words fit together, it feels nice to read them aloud. :)
1st Place - Amethyst:  I LOVE YOUR POEM. The idea that pens create worlds and swords destroy them, and that we are “wardens & keepers of a better world” and it is our job to build back up through writing what has previously been destroyed. Every line feels super important and adds so much, like that writing gives us the “unending power of creation.” The message is hopeful, like it’s calling people to action and I really love it. Congrats, Amethyst, you are our next judge!

submitted by Phoenix Tears, age 15 she/her, Judging
(November 17, 2024 - 11:00 pm)

Oh my gosh, thank you so much!!! I wasn't expecting first place, and it means a lot <3 Everyone else's poems were spectacular - you're incredible writers, and I can't wait to see the poems you come up with for the next round.

Without further ado, the next theme is aqua and I'll be judging on December 1st.

submitted by Amethyst, squee :D
(November 18, 2024 - 7:48 pm)