Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
The world has silenced me, erased my voice---
Through its cruel smiles and piercing cold eyes,
And sugared words that question every choice
As if the truths I tell are merely lies;
I am a caged bird whose song is suppressed,
Searching for freedom---which was through my words;
A little mermaid whose voice is oppressed,
Wishing I chose not love, but to be heard;
But through writing, I can finally speak---
Without the world hating my every phrase;
Through my poetry, my voice is unique,
Heard through lyrical rhymes and rhythmic ways;
The world had silenced me---not anymore---
For my poetry is an open door...
~~
My first time attempting to write a sonnet! :)
(November 12, 2024 - 12:19 am)
Wow this is really beautiful!! You did a great job <333
(November 12, 2024 - 4:09 pm)
Wow, that's good! I'm surprised this is your first time writing a sonnet--it's so smooth...
The first stanza in particular is so elegiac (which is ~kind of~ a synonym of poetic but I thought that because this is a poem, that's implied)
(November 12, 2024 - 10:52 pm)
tysm!!! <33 that means a lot
@Lyric I love your poem as well! it feels really beautiful <3
(November 12, 2024 - 11:30 pm)
You're welcome!
And thank you :D
(November 14, 2024 - 8:55 pm)
this is awesome! i love how you used a traditional poetry format to write about the importance of poetry/writing :D very fitting!
(November 13, 2024 - 4:29 pm)
ahh thanks!! :)) it was interesting to try a different style of poetry that i'm not used to
(November 14, 2024 - 12:55 am)
because language is the currency of communication
(November 12, 2024 - 4:27 pm)
inkspell
the pen is mightier than the sword
someone, sometime, said in a room cloaked by sunrise
because the sword can only destroy
but the pen has that ultimate gift that generations fought for,
it's the culmination of the dream that was born when fire first sparked in our hands,
it's the gift and the promise, the past and the future, the sun that gives us flight because we are one step closer to infinity--
it gives us the unending power of creation,
sets loose our imprisoned thoughts
and gives us worlds that are all we once desired.
it sways us to the pointless powerful promise of its unbroken harmony.
and in a world where we are shattered,
who are we if we pick up a sword?
who are we if we pierce the broken, obliterate the beautiful, crush the life that seeks hope?
who are we if we do not turn instead to the solace for our wounds,
if we do not try to peace back the puzzle pieces of a world that five-year-old minds wanted to destroy?
swords can never kill completely
if we remember the secret of invention,
the key of life,
the ways to duplicate our laughter and give birth to these children of the sky...
let us reimagine this sword-shattered world
and recognize the strength in our pens
and know that we,
wardens & keepers of a better world,
live because of our inkhearts.
(November 15, 2024 - 6:03 pm)
wow I love this poem! I really like how you use "the pen is mightier than the sword" in your poem, and how swords destroy while pens create...
(it reminds me of the story I'm writing about a war, also)
(November 16, 2024 - 1:08 am)
Tysm!! I wasn't entirely sure of how good it was, so that means a lot. I really love your poem as well; it feel so lyrical, and it's amazing that you managed to fit it into the structure of a sonnet.
(November 16, 2024 - 9:14 pm)
My paper is the sky,
My pen is a ballpoint sparrow streaking
Across the dependable, colorless sunset,
Each line a new horizon,
Each word a memory of
My bright bird's flight path.
My paper is the earth,
My pen is a black ink hoe digging
Into the rich, deep soil,
Each line a row of new life,
Each word a rare orchid
Of violent violet hues.
My paper is the canvas,
My pen is a a fountian brush painting
Words into poetry,
Each line a breathtaking landscape,
Each word a perfect detail,
A whisper of past, present,
And future.
(November 15, 2024 - 8:41 pm)
(November 17, 2024 - 11:53 am)
Here I am, judging! Congratulations everybody, I thought all your poems were so good and I really enjoyed reading them! Super exciting what y'all came up with.
Honorable Mentions:
AvaraStar: I love the extended metaphors! They really give strength to the poem. My favorite is the 2nd stanza, where you describe the pen as a hoe planting seeds in the earth — “Each word a rare orchid / Of violent violet hues.” Beautiful imagery! I also love how you tie it all together at the end by explaining the significance of each line & word of a poem. I think poetry is super cool because every word has a huge impact and your poem illustrates that really well!
(November 17, 2024 - 11:00 pm)
Oh my gosh, thank you so much!!! I wasn't expecting first place, and it means a lot <3 Everyone else's poems were spectacular - you're incredible writers, and I can't wait to see the poems you come up with for the next round.
Without further ado, the next theme is aqua and I'll be judging on December 1st.
(November 18, 2024 - 7:48 pm)