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Doves and Hawks
Doves and Hawks single write
So the plot of this is that there are two political parties. The Doves and the Hawks. There are other third parties, like the Owls and Ravens, but they have no importance to the story. The Doves and Hawks are the two magor third parties. And each has a represenitive to run the country of Hummbya. But recently the two have not been getting along, saying that their party would be better at running Hummbya.
"Tisk tisk. Hawks are more important and able to run the contry then Doves." The Hawk ruler said.
"Now now, Hawks are eragont and have no sympathy. If they were to rule then only the first class would survive." The Dove queen whispered.
"Yes but if the Doves were to rule then the goverment would be in dept more then we already are. The bussness would go without people to run them, and all togeather die off. The economy would die off. And without jobs, we would die off." The hawk ruler growled.
"You would end up dieing off too, if the contry was only ruled by hawks. Without sympathy or basic needs, the poor would all die, the middle class would be taxed so much they would be poor, and die off. And you need to tax someone, so, eventually your richest person would go into dept and die without basic needs." The Dove queen responded.
They stared at eachother for a long moment. "Without the Hawks you would die."
"Without the Doves you would die."
There was a long moment of silents. "I have an idea. What if we split the contry in half. Each of us gets a half. One part Doves and one part Hawks."
The hawk ruler smiled. "Well see which one gives in first. Make it a deal."
They shook on it.
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Now there is two parts of Hummbya. The Hawk side and the Dove side. All Doves are on one side, and all Hawks moved to the other. The theird parties made their own part on the top cornner of the contry, called the Otherpart.
Rules:
As you can tell this is a single write. I will take everyone in 48 hours that joined but once I start you cant make a charrie sheet.
The Hawks as told in the obove passage are hard hearted and strickt. Most Hawks are bussnes men or woman, they belive in millatary forces, and belive that the poor are poor because of their actions and should becom rich on their own terms with no help from the goveremnt.
The Doves are sweet and sympathetic to all. Most are teachers or doctors, they belive in neotagation over war and help the poor no madder how it effects the economy and how indept the goverment becoms.
There can be as many people as possible if you join in the next 48 hours. You can have two charries.
You can either be a Hawk or Dove. They are people and usually look no different from eachother. If there are too much of one type then I may change someone's charrie to a different party.
You must be between 10-16 unkess you want to be the rulers. There is a Dove ruler and a Hawk ruler. There are rulers of the other parties and you can make a charrie sheet of the other parties but they surve no importance to the single write and may not be used.
charrie sheet:
Name:
Age:
Party (dove or hawk):
appearance:
Personality:
what you want to do when you grow up:
what your parents job is:
backstory:
my charrie sheet:
Name: Barbary Whitewing
Age: 14
Party: Dove
Apperance: blond, curly hair, teal green eyes, tan skin, always wears a silver necklace of a dove.
Personallity: a little over sensitave and carring. Disslikes the Hawks because their rude and inconsiderate and dont care that peole other then them live in the world. She often cares about her friends problums more then hers and when shes not fealing good or hurt she still feals for everyone else and pretends shes fine.
What you want to do when you grow up: she wants to becom an artist or a writer, and often draws and writes.
What your parents jobs are: Her mom works for the local theater, and she doesnt know what her dad is up too since the Hawks were seporated from the Doves.
backstroy: goes to the local high school moved from across the contry to be on the dove side with her grandmother and mother. Her father went to the hawks side.
submitted by Claaws
(October 15, 2016 - 1:02 pm)
(October 15, 2016 - 1:02 pm)
Wow, it was exactly a month since I've last posted. Hum. It's been awhile since I started this...three months....wow....
~Barbary
How weird. They were all kids. Everyone here were kids. I looked back over at the girl sitting next to me, and realized I didn't even know her name yet. "Hey, what's your name?"
"Catheryn. You can call me Cat, though."
"I'm Barbary. You can call me Barb, or even Barby. I don't really mind." Catheryn snickered. I smiled and rested my head on my knees.
I scanned the clearing again, this time picking out someone I knew. "Hey! You! The boy who told me about this!" I shouted, waving my hands.
He turned to look at me, smiled, then went back to what he was doing. I sat confidentially for a moment, before looking over at Catheryn, maybe for support or maybe for an answer, I really didn't know. She just smiled though, and laughed to herself. "What? What's so funny?" I asked.
"That a nurd like him had the guts to ignore you." I was stunned for a sec on what she said, and let it sink in. I always thought we were all equal. The birds and the populers....
Wait, if we were all equal, everyone would be a popular. Does that mean we are all Hawks in the inside?! "For one, I didn't ignore her, and for two, I am a nurd, and I have guts. I had brought guts to join this, right?"
"Let me guess." Catheryn said, sitting up. "College credits." He stood with his mouth open, and brow raised slightly.
"Actually..." said a demanding voice, stepping up to look up at him. "He's here to babysit. Me. To make sure I study my English and don't run away. Like I could." She stuck her tounge out at him. I snickered, and I heard Catheryn do so too.
He looked over at me embarrassly, his cheeks turning a tad pink. Then I saw Catheryn looking over at the only other boy here, ironically.
Who would think a bunch of girls to join a war?
(January 12, 2017 - 11:30 pm)
(January 16, 2017 - 11:57 pm)
Sveta~
I walk into the great, large building, with Daisy at my heels. Our parents had to leave after they sighned a waver, and a millitary co-general had lead us here. Aparently this is the section where all the kids are held, because to the looks of it, everyone in here were kids. And most were even girls. How strange.
I held my sisters hand and walked over to a bench with no one on it. It was actually kind of quiet, there werent that many kids here, and four of them were gathered around one bench. All of the noise were coming from them, echoing around the tall-ceilinged room.
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Ya, I know, that wasnt much. But I have to go, and Im trying to get this topped, so this is my topping paragraph. ;D
(January 19, 2017 - 11:52 pm)
(January 22, 2017 - 11:56 am)
Frank~
I caught Catheryn looking at me again. The girl Lee had chosen over me. How pathedic.
I leaned against the wall, sighing. Now, I realized there were only seven, maybe eight of us in here. I wondered absently if there would be more.
Suddeny the door opened, and a woman walked in. The Queen. I realized. The Dove's queen. Behind her walked a girl, with a pink head band ontop her small head.
I snorted. Was she thinking about joining this? That little kid had no chance against those Hawks.
As I thought of this, a name zipped through my brain. Lee. What if he joined this also, and I was forced to fight him? Then that would be his mistake. I thought, narrowing my eyes. If we do fight, I'll have no mercy. We are a Dove and a Hawk.
Of which we can never be friends.
Catheryn~
I tore my eyes of Frank to see a woman walk in with a small girl trailing behind. She looked oldy familular, maybe a TV star of somesort.
The nurdy guy froze, looking behind his sholder and his eyes going wide as if that woman was royalty. His apprintace, or whatever she was, rolled her eyes and looked behind her sholder. She too went riged.
Me and Barbary exchanged glances. What was happeneing?
The two girls that had just walked in and were cahtting quietly stopped their conversations to watch the woman stride threw the room.
Frank too, looked as if he was watching her, or deep in his dreadful thoughts.
Now the room was uncomfortably silent as we all watched the woman. Her boots echoed confidently off the floor, and bounced around the tall-ceilinged room. The smaller child's feet were less confident, more staggered, but her face held an expreshion that was bratty and stuck-up.
I looked back at Barbary. Her face was frozen like everyone elses, in shock or awa or something. But I was still confused on who this was. Barbary senced me looking at her and turned, whispering queity, "Its the Dove Queen."
Reena~
We stopped in the middle of the room, my mother looking over every last child there. I stood with ungracful pride, daring anyone to challange me. The white gold dove necklace hung around my mothers neck, catching the light and glowing. Everyone's faces lit with awa.
"Maybe you have noticed by now that you are all children here." She begain. Some nodded, others looked shocked. There were probably only seven or eight of them here. I didnt feel like atually counting them, but just from the looks of it. "Some of you may have joined for collage credits, or to get away from your parents." They all exchanged glances, except for the lonley boy leaning against the wall. "But we are not going to actually make you fight. You are here to be the faces of the new generation. You are here to give others new hope and faith in the Doves as the new rulers of this land!"
Everyone echanged shocked glances, and as my mother's voice finished echoing across the walls, the room fell into silents. No one dared to speek, to argue. Or agree. They didnt know what to think of this.
ANd to be honest, neither did I.
(January 22, 2017 - 12:54 pm)
WOW
(January 22, 2017 - 6:54 pm)
Oh wow, thanks Claaws! I'm so excited for this to start back up again!
(January 24, 2017 - 5:30 pm)
(January 25, 2017 - 11:47 pm)
Continuing!
~Sammy
Ashria and I walked into the large building at the center of the main Hawk's town. City Hall. Where everything important was held. "This is soooo awsome!" Ash jumped up and down, her eyes gleaming. "I can't belive we are actually in the Hawk's City Hall!"
I grinned. It would be a lie if I ddn't say it was the same for me.
We checked in as signing up for the war, and we were ushered into a great big room with a large ceiling covered in paintings of hawks and wars. I gasped in awa. "Hey, you, dorks," a large and scary looking guy with a girl at his heels, who looked equiliy as frightening, walked up to us. They looked older then us, maybe by three years, and way more frightening. Are these the type of people we are up against?
Ashria and I exchanged glances....
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Sorry guys, my brother is being annoying, good night all!
(January 26, 2017 - 11:25 pm)
~Matt
The exchanged glances. "Awa, how cute! These dorks think that they stand a chance against the people of this war! What are you even here for? To get beaten up?!" I snickered, turning to Raine and smiling.
"Well, I would be lying if I said that you didn't come to get beaten up." She responded, snickering. I glared at her with my brows half lowered, trying to prosess this. Did she just insult me?! "I'm kidding you big lump of sap!"
I let my brows raise in question. She stopped laughing and glared at me. "Geeze, I'm just trying to loosen the tension! We are all here for the same reason, right?"
"Ya, sure." I growled. "Hey, where is that pipsqueak? That asian boy who told us he would be here? I want to give that boy a lesson."
"Right behind you."
I whirled aroynd and saw, behind the two small dorks, a taller aiasn boy with a challenging glare across his face. I cracked my knuckles threateningly. "Bring it on." I growled.
~Lee
The two young ones blocking me and Matt from clearly seeing each other pushed themselves out of our sinister glare, and retreated to the side of the room to watch the fight that was about to unfold. "ARe you going to make the first move, or are you two chicken?"
I was half expecting the punch to my nose right then and there. My head cracked back from the intensity of the punch, before I crummbled foward. "How's that for chicken?" Matt growled.
I felt another punch attack my spine. A numbing pain shot through my body, but I had already thought out my next move. I leaned back and extended my legs, kicking Matt's calf's and ruining his next move, his fist already drawed back, now extended for balance. Now he was leaned fowards, and his stomich was exposed and not blocked, so I struck out with my fist.
He coughed, the punch wasn't that hard, but hard enough to make him gag, and maybe even knock the air from him. He swiped out with one of his fists, the other clutching his stomich, stricking me across the head. My vision blurred and I felt blood from my nose dripping down my lips and from my chin. I knew I had to get off the ground, fast. I blinked, casting a glance at Matt, and realized he had taken this time to recover from the blows I had given him. I must have given him a real beating.
I slowly rose to my feet, my eyes becoming blurry for a second before I regained my focouse and striked. My fist met Matt's jaw, who was still reconvering from the blow to his stomich. He staggered back, grabbed his jaw, blinked, narrowed his eyes, and stepped fowards to strike. "Woha! Hold on boys! Save this for the doves!" A man called, rushing over to stop the fight.
That's when I spotted the blood Matt had been coughing up on the ground and the blood dripping from his shins, realized my head was bleeding, and seeing my blood smeered on the floor and my hands. Matt gave me a look and licked his chapped lips. I knew what that ment. That ment, this isn't over.
~Raine
I watched as the two boys beat eachother utill they were bleeding from multiple places. When Matt was about to give another blow, a guy came rushing in. He pulled the two boys out the door to probably clean them up, and he was probably also pleased with their will to fight.
I turned to the two nurds, looking about 11, at one wall of the room, watching the fight with awa. But just as I started towards them, I spotted the girl that had beaten up Matt yesterday. I wondered where her dreamy-eyed friend was at.
I started my way towards her, and as I got closer I could see the expretion of ferious anger on her face. Like she was going to kill someone right here and there.
Too late, I saw her glance at me and a look of reconazation cross her eyes. Too late now, I didn't know what she was about to do. Better raise my chin and act like I didn't just see my boyfriend get beaten up by an Asain.
I continued walking over to her in a steady gaunt. Her eyes narrowed, and she prepaired to fight me off, if it came to that.
(January 30, 2017 - 11:00 pm)