Doves and Hawks

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Doves and Hawks

Doves and Hawks single write

 

So the plot of this is that there are two political parties. The Doves and the Hawks. There are other third parties, like the Owls and Ravens, but they have no importance to the story. The Doves and Hawks are the two magor third parties. And each has a represenitive to run the country of  Hummbya. But recently the two have not been getting along, saying that their party would be better at running Hummbya.  

"Tisk tisk. Hawks are more important and able to run the contry then Doves." The Hawk ruler said.

"Now now, Hawks are eragont and have no sympathy. If they were to rule then only the first class would survive." The Dove queen whispered.

"Yes but if the Doves were to rule then the goverment would be in dept more then we already are. The bussness would go without people to run them, and all togeather die off. The economy would die off. And without jobs, we would die off." The hawk ruler growled.

"You would end up dieing off too, if the contry was only ruled by hawks. Without sympathy or basic needs, the poor would all die, the middle class would be taxed so much they would be poor, and die off. And you need to tax someone, so, eventually your richest person would go into dept and die without basic needs." The Dove queen responded. 

They stared at eachother for a long moment. "Without the Hawks you would die." 

"Without the Doves you would die."

There was a long moment of silents. "I have an idea. What if we split the contry in half. Each of us gets a half. One part Doves and one part Hawks." 

The hawk ruler smiled. "Well see which one gives in first. Make it a deal."

They shook on it.

~~~~~~

Now there is two parts of Hummbya. The Hawk side and the Dove side. All Doves are on one side, and all Hawks moved to the other. The theird parties made their own part on the top cornner of the contry, called the Otherpart. 

Rules:

As you can tell this is a single write. I will take everyone in 48 hours that joined but once I start you cant make a charrie sheet. 

The Hawks as told in the obove passage are hard hearted and strickt. Most Hawks are bussnes men or woman, they belive in millatary forces, and belive that the poor are poor because of their actions and should becom rich on their own terms with no help from the goveremnt. 

The Doves are sweet and sympathetic to all. Most are teachers or doctors, they belive in neotagation over war and help the poor no madder how it effects the economy and how indept the goverment becoms. 

There can be as many people as possible if you join in the next 48 hours. You can have two charries.

You can either be a Hawk or Dove. They are people and usually look no different from eachother. If there are too much of one type then I may change someone's charrie to a different party. 

You must be between 10-16 unkess you want to be the rulers. There is a Dove ruler and a Hawk ruler. There are rulers of the other parties and you can make a charrie sheet of the other parties but they surve no importance to the single write and may not be used.

charrie sheet:

Name:

Age:  

Party (dove or hawk):

appearance:

Personality: 

what you want to do when you grow up:

what your parents job is: 

backstory: 

 

my charrie sheet:

Name: Barbary Whitewing

Age: 14

Party: Dove

Apperance: blond, curly hair, teal green eyes, tan skin, always wears a silver necklace of a dove.

Personallity: a little over sensitave and carring. Disslikes the Hawks because their rude and inconsiderate and dont care that peole other then them live in the world. She often cares about her friends problums more then hers and when shes not fealing good or hurt she still feals for everyone else and pretends shes fine. 

What you want to do when you grow up: she wants to becom an artist or a writer, and often draws and writes. 

What your parents jobs are: Her mom works for the local theater, and she doesnt know what her dad is up too since the Hawks were seporated from the Doves.  

backstroy: goes to the local high school moved from across the contry to be on the dove side with her grandmother and mother. Her father went to the hawks side.

submitted by Claaws
(October 15, 2016 - 1:02 pm)

Definetly in. Good plot!

Name: Raine Lynnsburg

Age: 15

Party: Hawk

Apperance: Long, straight chesnut hair, blue eyes, semi-tan skin, deep blue turtleneck constantly has a small red and white backpack with a hawk on it.

Personality: Mysterious, serene, brave and extremly sarcastic

What you want to do when you grow up: Wants to be in the military, carries a flashlight, bandages, rope, canteen and swiss army knife at all times.

What your parent's jobs are: Her dad is a prison guard; belives strongly in Hawks. Her mother is a dove, who writes poetry. 

Backstory: Raine's mother has influenced her- Raine does believe in helping people, but aches to fight. Her father will not listen to her mother- hence, Raine has chosen to live with her mother. 

Oh, btw, maybe if there is a war, Rane could discover how gruesome it is, and wish it had never started.

submitted by Pepper Star, The tardis
(October 15, 2016 - 4:47 pm)
Ooooo cool idea. :) 
Name: Sveta Burrham
Age: 16
Party (dove or hawk): Dove
Appearance: Mid-back length, silky smooth, pale blonde almost silvery hair. Dark blue, almost onyx eyes that gradually become slightly paler closer to the center. Tall, willowy figure. Strong, but not obviously so.
Personality: Loves to help those that need it, prefers to be outdoors rather than indoors, not good at hiding her emotions, smart, curious, likes mischief, likes to make people smile/ laugh, fun-loving
what you want to do when you grow up: I want to to do something with kids. Maybe a Children's Doctor or Phsyciatrics.
what your parents job is: Mom does Diagnostic Radiology (look it up- pretty interesting job) Father does things with finance and works from home
Backstory: Not really anything interesting. Has a pet falcon named Sasha that was gifted to her by her ollder brother, who does stuff with endangered animals for a living.
submitted by Kestrel, With my own...
(October 15, 2016 - 5:01 pm)
submitted by To the first page!!!
(October 15, 2016 - 10:17 pm)

Awesome, Claaws!

Name: Catheryn Maude O' Malleyn

Age:  14

Party (dove or hawk):Hawk 

appearance:Reddish-gold hair that falls to mid-back, dark green eyes, tall 

Personality: Sarcastic, loyal, friendly, fun

what you want to do when you grow up: Leader, or politician 

what your parents job is: Her mother is a general, and her father is the mayor of her town 

backstory: She grew up with a rigorous childhood, and yeah...

submitted by September
(October 16, 2016 - 1:58 am)

Cool! 

Name: Daisy

Age:  15

Party (dove or hawk): Dove

appearance: Hair to my shoulders that is a honey blond, Hazel slanted eyes, tall and thin. 

Personality: sweet, outgoing, friendly to all. 

what you want to do when you grow up: wants to do some community service job, such as a nursing program or a soup kitchen, to help people. Likes to read and write in her spare time, also likes to draw. 

what your parents job is: mother works at a library, father left her a long time ago. She doesn't remember him. 

backstory: Daisy grew up with just her mother (not in real life- just on here) and her mother taught her good values. Ok, ok, it's a little cheesy, I admit. 

submitted by Daisy
(October 16, 2016 - 6:28 am)

Name: Catalina Seabury

Age: 13

Party (dove or hawk): Dove...

Appearance: Short brown hair, sea green eyes, pale.

Personality: Smart, witty, playful. Loyal to friends and cold to enemies.

What you want to do when you grow up: She does want to run a business. She's good at poetry, however, and her parents want her to do that.

What your parents' job is: Poets

Backstory: Her parents are both Dove party. Catalina is somewhat swayed by some Hawk ideals, but still holds onto Dove ideas.

submitted by Brookeira
(October 16, 2016 - 8:21 am)
submitted by Spot saved!, age 13!!!!!!!!, Kaleidoscope Gryphon
(October 16, 2016 - 11:35 am)

Question: Is this a a political allegory?

Name: Sammy

Age: 11

PArty: Dove

Appearance: Tall, with black hair and blue eyes. HAs very tan skin.

PErsonality: Usualy is nice, but is very politacaly active as well. Very nasty to people who don't agree with him.

Dream Job: Lawyer

What his parents do: Both Mom and Dad are buisness people, though Doves.

BAckstory: Is involved in all polotics, and takes rhetoric as well. He has been ivolved in several riots. 

submitted by Gared
(October 16, 2016 - 11:19 am)
submitted by Weneedmorehawks
(October 16, 2016 - 11:41 am)

Name: Raven Turner

Age: 14

Party (dove or hawk): Hawk

Appearance: Long black hair died red at the ends. Intense, dark eyes. Short but strong.

Personality: Wild and extravegant and subject to crazy and highly unrealistic ideas that most people wouldn't think would work. Defensive and feirce. Very athletic and pretty smart. Willing to take risks, very creative.

What you want to do when you grow up: She doesn't quite know yet.

What your parents job is: Her mom is in the military and her dad is an artist.

Backstory: You can make it up :)

submitted by The Riddler
(October 16, 2016 - 12:57 pm)

Name: Quinton Edgewood 

Age: 16

Party (dove or hawk): Dove

Appearance: Long auburn hair, green eyes, glasses, pale skin.

Personality: People call him a bit weird, but he doesn't care. Think Luna Lovegood.

What you want to do when you grow up: He really wants to be an author.

What your parents job is: His mother is a teacher, and his father is part of a law firm.

Backstory: You can make it up for me, too.

submitted by Remus
(October 16, 2016 - 2:34 pm)

Name: Reeana Whispersong

Age: 10,  But precocious

Party: Dove

Appearance: Dyed pink loose hair, cat ear headband,short and small, tan, blue eyes that you lose yourself in

Personality: precocious, quiet, smart, a bit rebellious, trusting

When she grows up: a artist, instead of a Queen.

Parent's jobs: why, rulers of the doves

Backstory: grew up as a princess. Gets out allot, but wears a veil so that nobody can see her face to know she's royal.

submitted by Icy, age 12, The Forest
(October 16, 2016 - 7:40 pm)

Please don't kill my first charrie off.

Second!

Name: Lee Raptor

Age: 14

Party: Hawk

Appearance; any stereotypical Asian boy

Personality: Rough, with a nice side that rarely shows, sneaky, often crosses the borders

Grows up: an engineer to design machines of war

Parents: normal people who work at a laundromat

Backstory: normal, unlike him. 

submitted by Icy, age 12, The Forest
(October 16, 2016 - 7:46 pm)

Name: Ashira Fel (Please just call her Ashira)

Age: 11

Party (dove or hawk): Hawk, though they seem slightly evil: it just matches her.

appearance: Curly, dark brown hair; blue eyes; tan skin; thin.

Personality: Sticks up for what she believes in; persistent; perserveres; a very strong personality; still is nice.

what you want to do when you grow up: She wants to change the world, somehow. She wants to be a politian or the leader of a movement.

what your parents job is: They also have strong personalities, and are politicians.

backstory: Her parents raised her to be strong and stand up for what she believes in. Even though they have important jobs, they are always around for her, and are always there when she needs it.

submitted by Moonlight, age 11, Ellesmera
(October 16, 2016 - 7:52 pm)

Name: Prudence 

Age: 15

Party:  Hawk(her parents are in the owl party to crete some conflict;)

Appearance:  Deep set eyes and tan skin, long pool-like hair that reaches past her shoulders down to the middle of her back.  

Personality:  High and expectant of others, to anyone outside her comfort zone she is completely emotionless, to anyone inside her comfort zone: emotionless.    

What you want to be when you grow up:  leader.   Very simple.

What your parent's job is: they're leaders in the owl party (if its OK)

Back story:  Raised within the owl party before she grew tired of waiting and left to join the war.  

submitted by Kaleidoscope Gryphon, age 13!!!!!!!!, The Prism Sky
(October 17, 2016 - 7:21 am)