Chatterbox: Inkwell

I'm not sure if this is the right place to do this, but I need some feedback/constructive criticism on a piece of writing I am working on. I'll post it in parts, little by little. Thanks! Please tell me what you think. Also, it doesn't have a title yet. I'm open to suggestions.

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Chatterbox: Inkwell

Admin, can you give me the url for the poetry club I created? The one where we discussed "The Road Not Taken" by Frost and some Poe poems........

We had some really good thoughts.

Here it is:

http://www.cricketmagkids.com/chatterbox/inkwell/node/176516

Admin

Chatterbox: Inkwell

Story Writing Rp!

Ok so this is like the storytelling game.

Here are the rules:

I will start off the story.

You will continue it.

YOU MUST WAIT UNTIL SOMEONE ELSE HAS POSTED BEFORE YOU CAN DO IT AGAIN!

When the story is over I will start a new one.

Is that all? I think so. Here it goes!

Chatterbox: Inkwell

This is a place were you write anything that pops into your head like this.

There was a clang. Ali turned around to see a four-headed slimy slug gulping down the root beer like nothing was wrong. 

Chatterbox: Inkwell

Picture this. You're a wizard. (From HP's world) Sounds great right? But there's a catch. You're living during He-who-must-not-be-named's rule. You live in constant fear of him and his Death eaters. Unless you're one of them.

Okay! Only five people total please (not counting me), and maximum two charries please! Here's the charrie sheet:

Name:

Gender: 

Age: (Please do a realistic age. At least 13. Please.)

Chatterbox: Inkwell

Anyone want to have an online writing club? Like, every other month someone would post a topic for writing a short story or poem, and then people could write something and post it here, so we could read it. Price for joining: Ten of these tongue out-y faces.:)

Chatterbox: Inkwell

Writing Competition!!

This is a serious business. I actually asked the Admins if the winner could be featured in the magazine as a prize, but eventually decided against it, having come up with another idea.

-Each contest will be about two weeks long, depending on the judge. 

-There will be one judge. Said judge will choose the category, the number of people, (Minimum 5) and the time period (at least a week). If the judge likes, he or she can choose a minimum number of words, but no max.

Chatterbox: Inkwell

Quest RP!

In the land of Nekaria, there are six kingdoms: Greycoast (by the coast), Newland (the capitol, in the center), Silvervale (the plains), Goldford (the mountians), Wildcrystal (lakes), and Shadowpine, a deserted woodland shrouded by legends and mystery. 

Chatterbox: Inkwell

@Everybuggy

If I'm in a role play with you, I will be gone for two weeks. My family is doing a 2 week no technology thing, so I won't be on. Brookeira, if I could be a monster in the Undertale RP, I'd love if you saved me a spot. 

Chatterbox: Inkwell

Help! 

You know that cry.

The cry of a desperate writer, unable to find a title for her works of art.

Yup. That's it.

I'm writing a dystopian/fantasy series, and the first one is done. I call it WILDERNESS GAME. Basically, a group of three starangers (kids) are sent to the past to study it. Then, all of a sudden, boom! two of them are kidnapped. They escape, and then they discover tsht they all share a secret.