Regular Writing Thread!

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Regular Writing Thread!

Regular Writing Thread!

So after some asking around on Random Thoughts/Things, I've decided to create a Regular Writing Thread! Basically, it's like the Regular Poetry Thread, but for writing in a more general term.

Have a scene you think needs feedback? Want to write down an idea that came to mind so you don't forget it? Having writer's block and need a place to get back into the feel of writing? Here's the place to do all that! 

Anyway, can't wait to see what kind of creative stuff you all come up with :)

submitted by Silver Crystal, age She/her, Milky Way
(August 23, 2021 - 7:35 am)
submitted by Top
(October 14, 2023 - 5:13 pm)

There is a tent surrounded by roads. On a small island of sidewalk in between a traffic circle and its tributaries with its back against a railing above the beginning of a tunnel. Cars and buses and ambulances add ambience; the tent lives in the shadow of the buildings that bridge the ground to the sky.

This tent is not nice. It’s old and cheap and barely big enough for someone to sit up straight and listing to one side. But there are also flowers woven up and down the seams, potted tropical plants on either side. Blooms press against the worn plastic and hide the rips and tears. At the very top of the ‘door’ there is an old street sign that reads ‘Sheep Crossing’ with a little image of a white sheep trotting along pressed onto it.

They say humans are creatures of habit, which is true, but not entirely. Humans are also creatures of beauty. Even when they have virtually nothing, they decorate that nothingness with flowers. 

submitted by Silver Crystal, age Infinity, Milky Way
(October 16, 2023 - 4:05 pm)

A guy stands on the edge of the end.

He used to be a television reporter, and he had said "when the end comes, we will be right there with you, in your living rooms, reporting on the end." It had been true. The end had come, with green fire, and grey men all in suits. The world had ended. He stood on the other edge of the end. It was over, and the new world began. 

The guy learns to dance the jitterbug in the new world.

The guy learns to break a window in the new world. 

He learns to get hungry, and find food. He learns how to break things. He learns how to get lonley in a fire-scorched city. 

He learns how to raise a kid.

A guy, a baby, and an empty city. 

 

submitted by Lord Entropy
(October 17, 2023 - 8:48 pm)

ooh so nice & mysterious <3

submitted by Poinsettia
(November 1, 2023 - 10:27 am)

Ooh, what a fun premise!

submitted by Jaybells, Lost, somewhere
(November 2, 2023 - 7:05 pm)

I don't know why this sticks to me so well, but I'm intrigued.

submitted by Jaybells, Lost, somewhere
(November 2, 2023 - 7:21 pm)

Definition of "home": a space encompassing one or more persons, where those persons live, eat, and sleep.

Home? No, that's not home. Home is that terrace where you remember sitting as a child, ice clinking coolly in your lemonade while the fragrance of those little purple flowers mingled with the laughter of your cousin. Home is what calls to the pigeon when she's flying somewhere in the Milky Way and brings her back to her destination. Home is that sunlight, that smell, those sounds; the feeling of belonging. Home is the crickets chirping in the long, bending grasses and flipping through the pages of that falling-apart notebook, remembering old names and places and characters that are all so familiar to you.

It's knowing you've come into your proper place. It's the place you escape to when things are a bit too much. The place where you relax and are yourself without worrying if that's a bad thing to be. The place you carry inside you no matter what, that's a part of who you are that nothing will ever change.

Definition of "home": the place where you belong.

submitted by Amethyst
(October 23, 2023 - 8:54 pm)

I'll carry this around with me in my heart wherever I go <3

submitted by CelineBurning Bright, age <33, Home
(October 24, 2023 - 12:26 am)

Aww thank you, this made my day <3

submitted by Amethyst
(October 25, 2023 - 8:11 am)

Her head tilted upwards, towards the stars...knowing that they weren't there in the dark night sky. Not even a single cloud strays across the night sky, as if shy of the great and grand black of the night. Even the moon shies away in hiding. Perhaps this was supposed to be an omen...not that she paid attention to it anyways. She had to do it tonight, or else...

She sighed. She couldn't think about that, or else she would never do it. And now, she took a deep breath, and ducked her head into a dark and ominous-looking cave.

The top of her head barely scraped against the cave ceiling, even as she was crouching down, doing her best to breathe quietly and evenly. One wrong move, or one tiny disturbance, and...

"Oh," she breathed. What was once a gloomy and dark room had filled with light. And the source of the light was a small jar filled with tiny little colorful and bright orbs. It was the memories and essences...of every single species that had ever existed and had become extinct. All were contained in this jar.

And it was up to her to decide whether or not to free them.

submitted by Moon Wolf, age lunaryears, A Celestial Sky
(October 24, 2023 - 6:02 pm)

Moon Wolf, I absolutely love that! It's such a gorgeous little piece, and the cliffhanger ending!

submitted by Flamarestii, Rohan
(November 1, 2023 - 6:59 pm)

tysm!!! <3

submitted by Moon Wolf, age lunaryears, A Celestial Sky
(November 2, 2023 - 11:58 pm)

a bit of Jeeves & Bertie fanfiction :)

It was a fine morning, one of those days when you feel that everything's going billy-oh. I had just come out of the bath, and was tugging on the clothes Jeeves had laid out for me, when in walked my Aunt Agatha.

My aunt Agatha is one of those ladies who belong to the Women's Teetotaling Club, and never seem to do anything but go about getting in other people's way. It is a characteristic of some aunts, what Jeeves would call interference, if that's the word I want. And I was just opening up the old mouth to tremulously greet the draconian relative, and looking for some way to conveniently dive under the bedclothes, when Jeeves himself shimmered in. I waited for him to raise the eyebrow at finding Aunt Agatha there, but his face seemed to be made of stone. He wasn't surprised at all.

"Good morning, your ladyship. Shall I place the tea here, sir?"

submitted by Poinsettia, fangirling
(October 31, 2023 - 5:16 pm)
submitted by tippity top!
(November 17, 2023 - 8:55 pm)
She had known who she was looking for, at the beginning.  But the longer she sat on her park bench, the more she forgot.  The sun had set and risen again, and again and again, and she was starting to believe that the person for whom she was there for would never arrive.  And so she sat, strangely unbothered by her endless waiting and dwindling memory.  Clouds rolled by in the sky, painting it in sunset hues or blanketing it in gray.  She watched people pass by - the athlete chasing the horizon, the small boy clutching his mother’s hand, the couple arguing in hushed but heavy tones, and everyone in between.  None of them paid her any mind, and she was content with this.  When she had first sat down, the trees had been full of rich green leaves, but now they were thin and bare.  Time had certainly passed, she was sure, and yet she could find no reason to rise from her bench.  She was neither cold nor hungry - the falling snow warmly caressed her, and the scents of sugar and roasted nuts rising from street vendors’ carts were more than enough to sustain her.  So she remained and she waited, as night fell and streetlights illuminated the darkness, and the world continued to pass by.
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There's a bit of a story behind this short, well, story -  in a writing class I was given the prompt of “A girl is sitting on a park bench looking around for somebody.  Who is she waiting for?” and came up with this.  I like to imagine that the girl in this story is a ghost, but the scenario is really up to the reader's interpretation.  when describing the park, especially the street vendors, I had NYC's Central Park in mind.
submitted by Sterling, age they/them, back from the grave
(November 17, 2023 - 8:57 pm)