Regular poetry thread

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Regular poetry thread

Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)

This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!

submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)

Wow! I would never thought that people would actually relate to this! As I am the only person in my school who is Greek, it's like I'm what people will remember my culture as...It's kind of complicated to write down...and plus my name is nine letters long and has no nickname. Also what's kind of funny is that I went to a French Immersion school so all my friends from that school pronounce my name in a French accent (like the teachers did). And when I came to a normal school, people where confused because I was saying my name differently, they didn't realize it was always pronounced like that XD. Also does this happen to you, where a substitute is calling names and your peers correct them for mispronouncing your name (this might be because I don't speak up a lot) it's so annoying for me.

submitted by Peregrine Falcon
(April 24, 2024 - 6:56 pm)

Yeah, like I understand the intention, but it ends up just embarrassing me more when people correct substitute teachers about my name... Again, I think they feel the need to do it because I tend not to speak up when that kind of thing happens. It sucks when you tell a teacher/instructor of sorts your name and they just keep mispronouncing it anyway though, sometimes for multiple years. :/

submitted by Jaybells, Lost, somewhere
(April 24, 2024 - 10:32 pm)

My poem for national poetry writing month prompt:

Purple

The lavender fields of my memories—

Build up mountains that are worthy of songs.

Purple is the view that I see today,

When at dusk, hazy velvet clouds fill up the sky,

And tomorrow, the sky may not be blue—

Purple, it shall be, if hope ever sings.

The stars in a galaxy spiral in the night,

Giving me a clear view of the midnight comets—

Purple shall be the dreams of children,

Wishing upon the stars that clouds shade,

Just enough to see a sprinkle of wishes—

Purple is the ink that flows from the writer,

Who wishes their voice were heard,

Yet without speaking a single word—

Purple tomorrow like purple today,

If sorrow ever dreams of happiness. 

submitted by Moon Wolf, age lunars, A Purple Today
(April 21, 2024 - 10:28 pm)
When I tell

People I'm

Greek.

They say:

"Have you

watched

Mamma Mia" 

Every.

Single.

One.

It's surprising

How many people

Are blind in their

Mind's eye.

Why?

Because

Mamma Mia

is about

Americans.

 

When I watch

Hercules

I hear errors

mousska

becomes

mu Saka

I shouldn't

Be offended.

I tell myself.

When I look

at tiropitas

the labels say:

Cheese pie. 

I shouldn't

Be offended.

I tell myself. 

submitted by Peregrine Falcon
(April 24, 2024 - 7:09 pm)

I was quite afraid this would happen to me as a person from a Jewish family with a Jewish birth name, where people assume just because you're from a place, you agree with and are just like everyone else in your 'group.' The amount of hate and lack of understanding I see is just not pretty.

Also I'm happy people know about stuff like Hanukkah, but it sucks that it starts getting lumped into the commercialisation of Christmas, as "Jewish Christmas," which, just, no. And I then you see stuff like latke being called potato pancakes and it just hurts.

Also, I'm very interested in the fact that latke and gelt, both kind of the stereotypical/most well-known foods brought up for Hannukah, are very "New World" products. Like. Jews didn't historically have potato or chocolate. Huh.

submitted by Jaybells, Lost, somewhere
(April 24, 2024 - 10:46 pm)

I am 

Afraid.

Of the 

Rabbit.

Not the

Eagle.

Whose

Talons

Could 

Sink

Into my

Skin

Or the

Dragon.

Whose 

Breath

And size

Could

Scare

The life

Out of

Anyone.

No,

I am 

Scared.

Of the

Rabbit.

At night

I wake up

To see

Shadows

Pacing

My walls.

Shadows

Of the

Rabbit.

It has 

Come to

Remind

Me of all

The things

I have done.

To prison

Myself.

In the day

I look back

And I see the

Rabbit.

Following me.

It reminds me of

How I have no

Voice. 

Around it

Always talking

About my worst

Fears.

I hate the 

Rabbit.

With every

Ounce of me.

submitted by Peregrine Falcon
(April 25, 2024 - 5:33 pm)

This is a really cool idea! I like the thought that something usually considered harmles could be more terrifying than large predators because of the personal meaning ascribed to it.

submitted by Jaybells, Lost, somewhere
(April 28, 2024 - 9:26 am)
Here are two poems about a boat: 

Did you about

the boat on

the summer

port?

How it creaked 

with old age?

Made with sturdy

Wood planks,

worn with age.

It was a miracle,

in such good

condition.

With loving

people there

to restore it.

 

There was a boat

I used to see

It was old

It stood out like gold

Among the rocks, there stories told

Made with a pine tree

I wish I could see it again

Proof of survival

From the lashing waves

It stands tall. 

submitted by Peregrine Falcon
(April 27, 2024 - 12:44 pm)

She was free

Among the trees,

Running beneath

Sunlight, admiring

The flowers.

She could fly

And touch the sky,

Sifting through clouds

In a wondrous blue.

But then they came,

Taking her away

From the beloved

Nature, and locked

Her away, cutting

Off her wings, and

Extinguished her

Spark. She was

Molded like clay

And hardened into

Stone, to build

The cold bricks that

Hold the city.

The sky was gray,

Like everywhere,

Colors dulled,

Unable to shine.

She is a lucky one

To not be plagued

By dreams anymore-

Some of us still think

That one day we’ll

Fly like the pigeons

Of the city.

submitted by Moon Wolf, age lunars, A Celestial Sky
(April 27, 2024 - 7:55 pm)

I feel like this is my life's story. This is really such a mood.

submitted by Jaybells, Lost, somewhere
(April 28, 2024 - 9:23 am)

words swim on my page

blurring photorealistic sounds magnify

-agnify -IFY [echoing hallways]

doesn’t silence make the world louder?

dissonance softened through time

depersonalized unreactive/oh, you mean me?

focus left in a previous life [before i was a ghost]

curling in on myself

–i turtle–

but that makes everything tighter stickier ickier

shadowy black spirals crowds hyperventilating panic-

but crying is femme and i’m trying to be ok

and observers make everything real

wondering what if i never come back from the edge?

wishing i was anyone else

do some people actually

recognize themselves in a mirror?

not struggle to breathe from chains around their chests?

[no more than eight hours, no more than two]

it’s knowing something will hurt and being too tired to care

i’m [sorry sorry sorry].

i’m [not sure how long i can last] 

submitted by anon, hehe we love dysphoria :]
(April 28, 2024 - 10:17 pm)

Ughhh this is so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <33333333

 

o_O *gasppp* even Feiya says WOWWW!!!!!!!! I am not making this up. That is how amazing this poem is! :D 

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submitted by Celine gtg, FeiyaWOWWW
(April 29, 2024 - 12:24 am)

Looking in the Mirror/Reckless

 

3:31

come home from school

again

say, "time to be

irresponsible

again"

half-turn and smile

at myself in the mirror

but suddenly I don't

recognize

the girl there.

when did she get

so beautiful? 3:32

 

this porcelain girl

with her head held high

if I let myself, I could

be her...

 

she's breathtaking, really

but I'm just me

in my stained green raincoat

and unbrushed hair

and space-y socks

if I touch that girl

she would shatter

into a million

glass-etched

shards 3:35

 

she seems like a painting,

a surreal dream,

just a memory of who I once was (who I might

become)

she seems so

unreal, but so

natural and it's a bit

scary

 

is this how others see me? 3:37

 

I don't know why I try

to hide myself under the illusion

of the girl who just doesn't

care 3:37

 

I don't know

why

I'm still peeking out

from under there 3:38

 

it was reckless,

looking in the mirror,

but I think I might be ready

to start taking a few

risks 3:38

 

the girl in the mirror

is sitting on my front porch

singing with the birds

and here I twist the doorknob-

3:39 

submitted by CelineBurning Bright, age :), in ~poetryland~
(April 29, 2024 - 5:49 pm)
O Swan

I want to know

Why did Apollo

pick you to guide his chariot?

Is it because 

you are a beacon

of creativity?

Is it because

you know exactly

where to take us?

Is it because

you help us visualize

our truth is right at

our fingertips?

Is is because

the light behind you

never fades?

Is it because

you show us what

we can fabricate

from our imagination?

Is it because

you are a master

at gliding though

our waters of unconsciousness?

Tell me!

Tell me, Swan

I cannot hide my curiosity

any longer

Tell me, Sawn

Why did Apollo

choose you to glide his chariot?

I know you are always here,

And I will listen,

to your voice.

So tell me,

Why does Apollo

favor you?

Did you inspire

Him or did

He inspire you?

Is it because

you bring

us all to our best

even if messy?

Or is it just because

you are beautiful? 

submitted by Peregrine Falcon
(April 29, 2024 - 6:52 pm)

Poetry dump!! I've written a handful over the past month, but never posted them... Here's one I wrote today for a contest that's deadline is ...today.

(Inkling says "bycdc". Ig she's saying to do stuff from what the CDC says?) 

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submitted by Rainbow, Midnight-green waves
(April 30, 2024 - 10:47 am)