Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
My entry, I know I’m not very good at poetry but I think it’s fun to learn ^^
Someday’s Reward
I sit in the streets
Not a care in my head
When my eye meets
With my new bed.
I’ve been fired
and can’t pay my rent
I just want to be hired
And buy a stamp to get a letter sent
That letter’s important
It’s to my family
They have no idea
That I’m now living animally
I just need a job
And I need some new clothes
Maybe a door knob
But I don’t have a house, I suppose.
I once got told
That I’d have a reward
When I got old
A gift from the Lord (Sorry If you don’t like that part, but please don’t remove it?)
Someday nobody would care
Whether your skin was black or white
And no one would dare
To kill us in the night
But those days aren’t here yet
And I’m sure they’ll be soon
But for now I’ll just sit in the streets
Not a care in my head
With no money
And garbage for a bed.
(July 21, 2020 - 9:05 pm)
I'm here! Sorry for this being late. I made a wrong click and my comments on the poems were deleted. I will try to re-type them later, but for now here is the ranking!
Honorable Mention
Jaybells!
Third Place
Kitten!
Second place
Summer!
First place
Wordsong!
(July 21, 2020 - 9:15 pm)
if mine got judged, but it’s okay I may have been past the date ^^ - Skiies
(July 22, 2020 - 4:48 am)
Oh wow! What's really funny is that I think for every other poem I entered, I daydreamed about getting first place - except this one, and this is the only first place I've ever gotten.
Okay, the new theme can be regret. And, let's say deadline's August fourth. That gives you two weeks. And I'll judge on the fifth.
(July 22, 2020 - 9:46 am)
Regret.
It leaves you gripping to the past
Pleading for something you'll never have:
A second chance.
Do you remember
When we'd wait for the bus to come
Talk about nothing, yet
You made me feel all
Blue skies and bubblegum
But my heart was torn apart
I couldn't say the words
That were racing through my brain.
Maybe if I had, things would be different
If I'd bought that ticket
Or called you up
And told the truth.
I'll never know
That is the curse of regret.
I've learned my lesson.
"I'd rather regret the things I've done than the things I haven't done" - Lucille Ball.
The quote isn't part of the poem, of course, I just wanted to put it here.
(July 22, 2020 - 3:45 pm)
i. As the world
comes crashing
Down,
You wonder what
you
Could have done;
ii. If you hadn't left,
Tried to be the best,
Sacrificed the ones you knew,
for this path of conquest;
iii. Had you stayed awhile,
listened to our stories,
Learned not to look but to see,
You could have avoided these empty "sorry"s;
iv. You wonder now,
each thought wretching you farther apart,
is there a way to turn back time,
unable to bear these sleepless nights
full of phantoms that terrorize your heart
v. You can still hear it now, even what hasn't yet happened
Through the screams of pain and horror,
Eyes blinded with rage and revenge,
A bloody reddened colour;
vi: all the same, it's too late,
you almost wish you were there too,
not like this,
ripped apart,
inside-out
by a short-sighted
And foolish you
you.
(July 22, 2020 - 9:03 pm)
Ooh I like that. Is it about a particular event in history or something? Because when I read it I was thinking about the civil rights movement, probably because yesterday my grandpa was telling me that he regretted not getting involved with it when he was younger.
(July 23, 2020 - 9:05 am)
Mm, I hadn't really planned for it to be an analogy for any historical event in particular, but rather ended up just mixing in a lot of things that I could imagine someone feeling.
Honestly, most times I write vague things like things, I have a clear narrative running in my head; however I'd rather keep my specific backstory idea ambiguous, just so everyone can form their own thoughts on it.
One of the things I really like about poetry and creative writing in general is that it can be interpreted in so many different ways, regardless of what the author originally intended.
(July 25, 2020 - 6:24 am)
The regrets of Life
Oh I wait for the sun to rise.
Hoping for a new day to fix my troubles
I regret my thoughts, actions, and speech;
the past, and the present
future is what we wait for
no more regrets
change our lives!
turn to Christ
oh God we love you
turn to him!
This poem is not the best. Sorry if it makes you cringe. It's probably one of the few poems that I've written. In second grade we made a poetry book. Anyways, good luck everyone!
(July 23, 2020 - 9:59 am)
Regret is my friend,
by my side,
always.
But why would a friend
do this to me?
Regret is my enemy,
I fight it,
just leave.
But I'd have no conscience,
then where would I be?
Regret is me,
inside me,
around me.
When, just when,
will I be free?
I always forget how bad I am at poetry until I try writing it again. Oh, well. I made this impressivly nebbish.
(July 23, 2020 - 1:21 pm)
I actually really like this one; the duality and repetition of key words really drives home the tumultuous thoughts of the speaker, and it's an interesting use of semi-slanted rhymes towards the end.
(July 25, 2020 - 6:43 am)
@doggiegirl2010 and Zahava: Don't worry if your poetry doesn't seem to be as "good" as other people's poems. We all start somewhere! I totally cringe when I look back on the first poems I wrote on this thread. But now, I've won the poetry contest... at least three times? I don't remember for sure. And you know how I got better? I kept writing poetry. And I kept reading the poems other people wrote and trying out new styles and ideas, and I eventually got better.
So my point is, you don't need to apologize for your poetry, and you should keep writing. You both have a lot of potential and really good ideas, and even if your poems seem "bad" now (which, by the way, is a very subjective term and doesn't say anything about your actual skills or who you are), that just means that you have room to grow. So don't give up now! Keep on writing!
(Sorry, this is probably a pretty awful pep talk. But that just means I need more practice with it! XD)
(July 23, 2020 - 10:08 pm)
I really like limericks, particularly funny ones, so here we go:
I have lived a life of regret.
It started when I made a bet,
I put a bet on me,
He threw me in the sea,
And now I am dead of regret.
ish? kind of?
(July 27, 2020 - 11:05 am)
forgot to title mine. Dead of Regret
(July 28, 2020 - 2:19 pm)
All right, here's my entry. It's sort of inspired by Luna-Starr's poem a couple rounds back.
Regrets of Waiting
They told me that the world was black and white
And hated me when I said they were wrong
But grey has kept me sheltered from the light
And lured me from the darkness with its song.
They told me that I had to pick a side
But I resisted them, refused to change
The grey was like a den where I could hide
when black and white around me were too strange.
Now I wonder whether they would blame me
If I had not stood waiting on the shore
For one side or the other to come claim me
And I regret the waiting even more.
Regret not picking land or picking sea,
When I stood on the threshold of that door.
(July 28, 2020 - 12:33 pm)