Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
Thank you so much!!!! Rhythm and rhyme are my favorite parts of poetry, so I'm glad you liked it.
(June 19, 2020 - 7:31 am)
ten ways to overcome a shadow:
i. it's not what you think.
after all, aren't shadows the ultimate decivers? things should never be what they seem.
ii. shadows aren't decivers
they aren't whisperers or spies or eyes--
they are already everywhere, don't give them more power my personifying them.
remember, you can't afford to get lost in analogies--
they follow you everywhere, they lengthen in the golden hour,
you cannot defeat them with broom or bat or even with candle,
remember.
iii. the world is only black and white when you are lost in their throes.
iv. they may thrive under the cover of clouds,
but they will never smell of petrichor,
they will never love the lightning
v. and yet
you cannot defeat them with flashes of light;
acres of fire will not keep you warm
vi. so what will?
vii. more things to remember:
light is far from the only thing that shadows lack.
they are an overused cliche, a metaphor worn so threadbare it isn't hard to unravel.
you do not need to unravel all of them, nor should you try.
viii. they are not worth your time.
ix. find things that you can taste and touch,
relish in the dimensions of the world
take comfort in the wholeness in it.
x. you do not have to exterminate the shadows to overcome them--
they are doomed to the ground,
and you can learn to fly.
(June 19, 2020 - 10:52 pm)
I took inspiration from Luna-Starr and Stardust's acrostic 'hope' poems for this round. This isn't my best work, but I'm decently proud of it. I hope I'm not too late!
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Slinking closer closer closer in the night
Hungry depths of darkness darting
At the corner of your vision
Don’t look closer, whatever you do,
Or they’ll surround you and
Whittle you away until you’re nothing but a
Shadow just like them
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(June 21, 2020 - 6:08 pm)
Hi, guys! Sorry this is late, but here's the judging!!
Honorable mention: Stardust!!! I thought this poem was poem was really, but I think it came down to personal prefrence, but that shouldn't distract from the fact that this poem is incredible and you're amazing at poetry!!
5th place!: Blackfoot Bobcat! Wow!! this was really cool!! I like the way you described eveything, and I really liked the lines If I can harness the power of shadow/one word haunts my mind. That word is named peace.
4th place!: Kitten!! This was awesome!!! I love your descriptions and phrases like Hungry depths of darkness and whittle you away until you're nothing but a/shadow like them. Great job!!!
3rd place!!!: Jaybells!! This poem was amazing!!!! I liked the clean breaks of the lines. I also really liked the last two stanzas.
2nd place!!!: Wordsong!!! I thought this was amazing!!!! I really loved the 'voices' aspect of it ant the creativity. Over all, a really outstanding poem. Keep writing!!
1ST PLACE!!!!!: INDIGO FEATHER!!! Wowowowowow!!! This was amazing!!!! Your style is cool and I just really liked it over all. I liked the reality of it and the short lines. Just, great job!!!
This was really hard to judge, and everyone did amazing!!
Congrats Indigo Feather!!!
(June 22, 2020 - 1:01 pm)
Congradulations Indigo Feather! I'm sure you'll give a great theme!
Thanks so much for the second place. I think that's the highest I've ever gotten! It's also one of the longest poems I've ever written . . . hmm. Maybe I should start writing longer poems.
(June 22, 2020 - 2:16 pm)
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I must say, this poem kinda went all over the place and changed around a lot, so I was worried. I was definitely not expecting to get first! I really really appreciate it, and I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you :) (again)
The next theme is Decision, to be (hopefully) judged on the 6th. I can't wait to see your entries!
Again, thank you so much Spellbound!! You just made my day ^^
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(July 1, 2020 - 9:06 am)
Things I know
the heart is deceitful
above all things
and apparently hope
has feathers and wings
and rain is tears
that angels cry
and fall is where summer
goes to die
and mud is clear
and faith trumps fear
and this strange globe
all swathed in clouds
knows to follow the sun
without being shown
and roads have forks
and lungs have corks
and pain has knives
and humans it seems
do not have nine lives
I know these things inside of me
I’ve got one eye
on things unseen
and the little surrealities
that travel in between
but there is one thing
I do not know and although
I’ve searched high and low
I will not let myself give up
until I’ve decided
what sort of person I want to be
when I grow up.
(July 1, 2020 - 2:07 pm)
@The Illusionist, that's great! It has a lovely rhythm and very poetic lines!
being on a fence would hurt unless you picked a side
i. there is a little girl standing next to an ever littler boy. another boy bigger than both of them
towers over the small one. his lips are creased in a
sneer, and his words lie uneasy with the little girl. they sound sour in her ears and she wants them to
stop.
maybe she can tell him to be quiet.
ii. there is a teenager in a hoodie standing at a crosswalk, a red hand on the
other side of the street telling them not to go yet.
there is one car nearing the opposite stoplight, maybe crossing in a few seconds. the teen is impatient and wants to
go.
maybe they could run across quickly.
iii. and now, for their lives and their hearts and their minds, we simply want both of them to
do the right thing.
but they are both human, and they both have chosen wrong before, and perhaps will now.
like it or not, one of these will not end the way we want.
(July 3, 2020 - 2:52 pm)