Poetry Contest

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Poetry Contest

Poetry Contest

Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!

The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth. 

The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*

Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair? 

I hope to see your poems soon!

~Booksy <3 

submitted by Booksy Owly
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)

I have the joy of the Lord in my heart, and it couples with my determination to become perseverance. :)

submitted by Rogue Wildling
(August 23, 2019 - 7:42 pm)

Wow! Second!

Everyone else's poems were so awesome. Seriously. I know everyone says that, but I'm actually really impressed. 

submitted by Summer, age pi, Nowhere at all
(August 23, 2019 - 8:06 pm)

Wait WHAT? I WON? *happy scree* *runs and tells parents that I won* I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!! 

Okay okay, deep breath. The next theme will be:

Fury

I can't wait to see y'all's interpretations of the theme! Also, the deadline/judging date will be September 5, about two weeks from now. I might stretch the date depending on how many poems are submitted.

submitted by Nyx, age 12 years, earth
(August 22, 2019 - 6:25 pm)

Fury

~~~~~

Rage, bubbling up

Consuming your line

Of Vision;

Anger piling over

Seconds, hours, years;

Lies --tormenting-- nipping,

And biting

Like bitter tempest

Winds;

Blowing, blurring,

Everything in your path; 

Staining a horrid crimson

Like the Furies of 

Greek mythology;

Fueling the ongoing cycle,

That searing fire 

Of hatred. 

submitted by Jaybells, age Classified, Lost in the Universe
(August 24, 2019 - 8:04 pm)

Okay, here's mine.

Fire

If you mock or taunt me again,

if you ignore or dismiss me again,

if you compress or confine me again,

I swear, alarms, sirens, flares

will go off.

Empathy and reason will evacuate--

quietly! in an orderly fashion!--

and leave the fire of rage

rumbling to life behind them

on thunderous feet.

The rage-fire will hungrily devour

all the air in my blood

and replace it with pure flame.

It will billow forward

leaving its black, sooty footprint behind

and scorching the walls of my heart--

and yours--

destroying everything in its path. 

submitted by Summer, age pi, Nowhere at all
(September 1, 2019 - 5:34 pm)

--
Lonnie

submitted by TOP
(September 4, 2019 - 2:38 pm)
submitted by TOP
(September 4, 2019 - 3:17 pm)
submitted by TOPTOPTOPTOPTOPTOP
(September 4, 2019 - 6:57 pm)

Thank you. You made me laugh. You could sell this- I'm pretty sure Cricket would buy it. It has a spirit of fun and overdramatization that's too rare.

submitted by Xaopve, age 17, Idea farm
(October 31, 2019 - 5:08 pm)

I'm stretching the deadline/judjing dat to the 12th. 'Kay?

submitted by @EVERYBODY, signed Nyx
(September 5, 2019 - 2:27 pm)

I'm sorry I haven't been participating! I think I'm finally going to write a fury poem, so here goes.

--

Fury is a quiet sort of girl--

but excellent at glares

Fury is a plain sort of girl--

but always wears crimson

Fury is an unassuming sort of girl--

but everyone remembers her

Fury is a petite sort of girl--

but acts like she's a giant

Fury is easy to forget--

until she takes over, turns your blood to fire, erupts like a volcano

Be careful.

Fury is not what she seems. 

submitted by Kitten, Pondering
(September 7, 2019 - 11:49 am)

Ooh, I like the personification and foreshadowing!

submitted by Jaybells, age Classified, Lost in the Universe
(September 7, 2019 - 2:55 pm)

Thank you!

submitted by Kitten, Pondering
(September 7, 2019 - 5:44 pm)

landslide

i thought her eyes would glow

red--- but though the

volcano had erupted, it was from

within, an explotion whose fire is

words--- they spouted in great tumbling

yells, an avalanche from the

quaking--- not burning, but 

pounding, grinding, forcing me 

under its tide--- i am

buried under the suffocating

fury, not the

lava, but the molten

dread and screams of the

victims. 

submitted by Luna-Starr, age 27 eons, Existential Ponderment
(September 8, 2019 - 8:21 am)

Sorry I’m a day late, guys, but here’s the results from this theme!

3rd place: Luna-Starr!

I really liked the way your poem described…….. What was it? “An explosion whose fire is words”, and how someone yelling at you related to a volcano erupting, or a landslide. Well done!

2nd place: Jaybells!

I liked how you said the “Furies of Greek Mythology”, and “that searing fire of hatred”, but my favorite line was probably: “Lies --tormenting-- nipping/And biting/Like bitter tempest/Winds;”. This was great!

1st place: Kitten!

The way you took the theme “Fury”, and turned it into a girl was amazing! Especially how Fury was described as not very noticable, but at the same time standing out. My favorite part was when you said, “be careful/Fury is not what she seems”. Congratulations! 

submitted by Nyx--results!, age 12 years, earth
(September 13, 2019 - 2:09 pm)