Poetry Contest
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Poetry Contest
Poetry Contest
Well, we haven't had one of these in a while, have we? Time for a new one, I say! Welcome, resident poets!
The rules are pretty simple. I am the first judge. I will give you a theme, and you must write a poem relating to the theme. Be creative with your interpretations! I will then judge the entries by a set date, and the winner will then be the next judge, and set the next theme. And so on, and so forth.
The first theme will be... *dramatic drumroll*
Stars! Whether you chose to write about the kind of stars you wish on, or the kind that take the stage, I will be eagerly awaiting your sparkly, shiny, beautiful poems. Have them in by... Saturday, March 18. Two weeks. Sound fair?
I hope to see your poems soon!
~Booksy <3
(March 4, 2017 - 8:58 pm)
Glass face~
How do you call me strong?
How do you call me beautiful?
I laugh at such definitions
But I shed tears as I do
I melt under heat
I break under pressure
I inflict pain when touched
I wait forever, hoping to catch the sun
But the sun travels on
(July 27, 2019 - 1:04 am)
Broken
~~~~~~
The words were caught
in the back of her throat
They couldn't get out
For they were to sad for
her aching body to comprehend
So she stood there
Her world crashing down
around her
breaking more and more
like glass every second
Her world had shattere
Like thin glass
or ice
But was she as weak
as fragile
as glass?
Maybe
But her world was
already broken enough
She was as broken
yet just as whole
as the world-
as the glass
(July 31, 2019 - 8:12 am)
TOP!!!!
(August 5, 2019 - 7:40 am)
Thanks for your entries, everyone! This was a really tough round to judge, I liked all of yours almost equally.
Honorable mention: Sunshine Wings!
The idea is interesting, and you did the line breaks beautifully, but it was also rather vague, and I didn't quite know what it was about. Maybe more description...?
Third place: Rogue!
Woah, I loved the last two lines. They pack the perfect amount of punch. Maybe you could break the lines differently? And the descriptions were very straightforward, which gave it punch, but perhaps different word choise would give it a different feel. All in all, nice poem!
Second place: Claaws!
I really loved the idea of this poem, how society looks at things can change how you feels on the inside. I'd maybe be more concious of capitolization at the beginning of lines, though. This was a great entry!
First place goes to... Jaybells!!!
I love the hard descriptions and funky word choise. This brought up so many cool images and this fit the theme super well.
Awesome job everyone, and thank you!!
(August 6, 2019 - 8:56 am)
(August 6, 2019 - 7:29 pm)
Oh, cool! I wans't expecting to place!
(August 7, 2019 - 10:26 am)
Aw thankyou!! Good job Jaybells!! I really liked your poem too. Everyone’s were so good!! And the new themes once’s are really cool too so far. Keep writing y’all <3
(August 20, 2019 - 6:42 pm)
Aww, thanks! The next theme will be....*drumroll*....Rain!
(August 6, 2019 - 10:25 pm)
Oh, yes, I forgot! The deadline will be Augist 21st.
(August 7, 2019 - 10:20 pm)
Wow, I wrote this quickly.
(Untitled)
i. i envy the rain.
wouldn't it be better to know your place as a
droplet of an infinite cyle than to
be so lost you
only know the way back to your own head?
ii. i envy the trees.
wouldn't it be better to stand tall and
pretty, breathing in recycled carbon dioxide than to
be diminished be the world and
become so afraid you suffocate?
iii. i envy the birds.
wouldn't it be better to announce yourself to the world and
be ever full of song than to
keep all of your secrets tucked away in a bay window and
always have your words and then lose...
...
iv. i envy the rain.
(August 8, 2019 - 11:23 am)
This is... not my best poem, I think, but here it is. I apologize in advance if the spacing’s weird.
—
i run
can’t stay can’t be there can’t face the crowd of laughter of people of all the
the
...not-alone-ness
i don’t even know why i’m running anymore
i don’t even know why there are tears streaming down my face with the rain
maybe there aren’t any tears
maybe there isn’t any rain
maybe i’m not even here crying in the rain
idk
but my sadness
(no, my anger)
rises up inside and fills me like a poisonous gas or a monster or a hunger or a neverending hole or a chasm a mile wide or a volcano
it’s going to erupt and when it does
no one will be able to face me
(August 8, 2019 - 8:40 pm)
Whoa. This is truly amazing.
(August 10, 2019 - 9:13 am)
Wow, thanks! I really admire your poetry, so it means a lot to me for you to compliment mine. :)
(August 10, 2019 - 11:29 am)
Oh my sweet Kyngdom, thank you so much you admire my bad poetry??? Okay so maybe it's not bad but still YAY THANK YOOOOUUUU *happy* "I admire your poetry" *screenshots*
(August 11, 2019 - 8:47 am)
Raindrops
Raindrops pitter-pattering
A thousand tiny diamonds shattering as they
Strike the pavement
Asphalt
Soil
Glittering in the air
Sparkling gems skip and
Bounce
As they
Drip off the
Trees
And land
On your
Hair
And slide
Down your
Shirt
Tickling against
Your back
And singing
Against
The windows
~Nyx
(August 10, 2019 - 3:11 pm)